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Posted: 12 years ago
part 82
awesome dear...
so Arjun and Adi too know about Asha...
Asha shes still trying to make Geet land in the trouble...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates
Loved it
Amazingly written
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Mona...aaj aaogi ya nahi...?

Hey quote
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Posted: 12 years ago
I AM HERE RE JALDI KARONA
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: HNosheen

wow Mona
i loved both parts 81 and 82.

sorry for not being able to comment yesterday. got occupied

part 81 was really nice, Maan felt hurt due to Geet's prank but she just went and manao-fied him 😳

and Maan was just ready 😛 his naughtiness instantly came back 😉

their misunderstanding was cleared ,relief
and finally Maan showed it to everyone that Geet was with him after that media fiasco, and even in there in the darkened conference room, Maan could not stop teasing Geet😳 reminds me of the real GHSP so dearly Maan holding Geet's hand under the table. Haye!

and he opened up to her n told her the reason for keeping her with him in delhi. its good that Geet does not stay unaware, she should know of the potential problems and risks surrounding her. that was wise of Maan to tell her.

part 82
i liked how Annie and Daadima teased Geet 😃 and poor Geet just didnt know how to react. 😆

and Geet finally got to know that Maan had told Adi and Arjun about Asha and they were helping him find proofs against Asha . but Maan didnt want Geet to know what Asha had in mind other than harming Geet and taking advantage of her. in a way it is better for Geet to not find it out right now because right now, she already has a lot of fears in her heart and she is trying to deal with them all with Maan's support. so if at this stage when she is not married or even formally engaged to Maan, she shouldnt face the fear of losing him or anyone trying to snatch him away from her. this raw relationship should not become a fear because its her real strength.

so Asha is basically trapped in her own web. she first got into the mess and now she is being blackmailed. she dug the holes for Geet and now she is falling prey to her own plannings, the people she got involved with are threatening her. tit for tat. and maybe that could teach her a lesson or two. maybe that could give her some shame and realization of her bad intentions about Geet who was all the time being a sincere friend.

oh and the bedroom part 😆
you changed the precap but even then it was funny and good enough. Maan again became his naughty self 😆 and poor Geet completely forgot what she had in mind to talk about 😲 tch tch. 😆 but see, she is Geet . she tricked him and escaped😃 . and Maan announcing rather challenging her he would take his "payback" 🤣 interesting 😆 im anticipating this payback now 😉

waiting for next update😃



Thank you friend


and ya.. its not that big that i couldnt have read at once..

my greedy heart want more
😛😆


well joke apart thanku so much for being regular again ... it gives me more courage to write better😃

nd best of luck dear for your edit that you want to start




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle

I AM HERE RE JALDI KARONA




hii poojaa..

dear m so srryy the post u had tagged me in i missed .. had saw thru cell but when came from pc.. my newsfeed filled with various pics n all ..

but i wanted to say dont wrry u ll have some beautiful song sequence ahead .. but before be ready to see some more twists 😉

And for update pls wait for some time ..m busy in dinner after that will post 😛

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Originally posted by: singh24


Mona...aaj aaogi ya nahi...?

Hey quote




babbie hiii

aaungi thore der me after dinner


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waiting & will be back to read it after dinner 😊

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