MG FF Envious Romance-7|Part-61 on pg 115 - Page 21

part 51
awesome...
lovely...
Geet is still cute...

part 52
awesome...
at least she has got this girl as friend...
this new guy doesnt know who Geet is...
cont soon dear...

awesome update.wait for next update

Originally posted by: shruthiruchs

Hi dear i'm ruchita... just nw i've completed reading ur FF Envious romance... i don't wat to say abt it all i cud say is just i'm AWESTRUCK completely speechless with ur writing & d story line...

all i can say is i'm struck sumwer in middle wer i can't hate maan or blame him fully... i wish mujhe iss FF k baare mein pehle hi pata chal jata really wanted to say a lot things dat happened in dis FF...

GEET: wat to say abt her i'm just swestruck spell bound in her cuteness innosense & her beauty... & all abv d way u explained abt her awww... i really wish i cud hav watched iot visually...

i thought in d start dat as geet is mute here😕 i wud really miss her talks but but but i missed a lil bit to be honest but most of d time it didn't look like i missed her express chatter box coz it was really replaced by her actions & expressions & seriously her actions speak volumes... really felt bad 4 her... 4 watever has happened in her life she really deserves happieness i just wish abhi koi MU na ho maaneet mein..😳😳😳

MAAN:idk no wat say abt him kabhi toh mujhe uss par itna gussa a raha tha kabhi itna pyaar... i was nt able to decide wat to do like r nt... no wonder geet was double confused & struck...

even i really feel bad 4 him... he's nt at fault fully... & thank u so much 4 making it like dis(i.e)making me feel him less guilty😆

coz i can't think anything against him... i wish maan thoda pehle geet ko samjha hota like she is still a kid & he just can't force her on everything his obsession , uska tube light late jalna in d matter of love 4 geet , & trusting dat stupid sameera & dat dev's mom... poor maan has always suffered in life in d matter of parents,dadi's love,love of life... even he was craving 4 love & warmth which he only felt 4m geet

DADI:main reason 4 watever happened inpast really don't knw wat to say abv everyone she's d real selfish person i wud say... apne ghar ki shanti k liye she just broke trust of geet & d way she presented geet towards maan anyone wud hav felt wierd , thank god nakul finally knocked some sense in her but wrong timing... really loved dat part wer dadi finally realises her mistake loved it a lot... & der i felt finally finally i'm nt gonna hate maan as much as i did 4 dearlier parts to it... but even she shud knw actually wat happened & i really want dem to all live again happily together...😳

ANNIE:she is such a cutie pie.. wat to say to say d truth she was d reason in those 4 months y maan was sumwer really living she was d lifeline at dat bad phase... she is so cute some wat like geet as no one can replace her on dat 😛😛 luved d way don't hw ends complaining 4 anything & everything... 😆😆 she is d only person who hav actually understood both maan & geet & der suffering... really want to c annie bonding with geet😊😊

DEV:😡 all i cud say if maan was obsessive abt geet thn dev was diff 4m him... kamina pata nahi kahan kahan se perfectly geet k pass pahunch jata tha & at d end whho suffered geet

he was only attracted towards her i accept in d start he was really frndly... but can't help my self 4m hating him... i really want to maan knw dat hw d hell dev injected geet 4 all those 3 days... aft she ran away 4m jungle...

DEV's MOM:😡 argghhh hate her 4 watever she did & said to geet want to c her suffering...
DR.MEHRA:he's tooo gooddd a salute 4 him he only knocked sum sense in geet 😉😉

me too miss mylo & michel

loveee all d personss who wer at orphange with geet

ADI: he's truly perfect in all sense who can stand maan hats off to dat man
PINKY:she was to good miss her

RAHUL:i wud say only 1 thing beware😉

SIMRAN:love her she's awesome... she said dis perfectly no one can stay angry or stern aft looking dat pup face of geet it was too good wen geet said dat she hav experience in running lolzzxxx😆 who can knw dis better dan us...

dat tom & jerry hide & seek between maan geet was just like woaaahhh ...

last but not d least

MR.HANDA:really wat dat is made up of... unhone to geet ko bhi beat kar diya in talking lolzz... dat part was too hilarious.. god maan k kaano ko kuch nahi hua... & abv all dat he left saying bus beta abhi mujhe mat rokna🤣🤣 he's really behind maan 4 his grand daughter's sake...

& poor guy maan is just struck with him...😆😆😆 hopefully d past abt dis reveals soonnn

all in alll i'm officially in love & obsessed with dis ff😉😉

my obsession got on on such a high level dat as i only started to read dis yesterday & had to leave it in middle as i had exams & i did'nt studied a bit also... but all ni8 wat i did is i was gawking like a owl & not sleeping a wink neither done d ready a word... all i did was thinking abt dis ff again & again... was really waiting wen i'l get back 4m clg to read dis... & d joking part is i d'dn't even had exam today in d 1st place... just due to some MU everyone got fooled & hav to study it againg tomorrow idk wat i'm going to do...

a hats off to u u hav wrriten dis FF so beautifulllyy...

Awesome parts... 😉😉

srry if ive bored...

hope ive commented 4 d sake of all d parts...

& i really wanted to comment...

⭐️ 4 u

Oh my god i'm so honored with this post of yours😳
You caught every little details of my story which is no less then a 5 star-ed medal for me.⭐️
so thank u,thank you so much!😊

He was explaining a diagram to her in a rough page with rough patchwork,then there was a knocked on the door.

Maan turned to see the maid,she told him that the dinner is served.Maan nodded and told her that they're on their way.

He turns to see geet and saw she still hasn't remove her gaze from the page.she's fully concentrating on whatever he's just explained to her.

Her cute lips,pressed together,her doe shaped eyes gotten focused and her brows r arched due to the processing her mind is doing right now.Over all,she's looking undenyably adorable.

Suddenly a smile formed in her lips and she looked at maan.'got it'and gave him her dazzlingest smile.

'Then make another diagram,by urself. And show it to me.'He couln't smile back after seeing her beautiful smile.She excitedly took another paper and started to make the diagram by herself...and maan was drooling over her.
Her every gesture was pleasuring him.Her happy self sitting with him,despite their dreadful past, was giving him goosebumps all over.He kept trying to force her,blackmailing her,intimidating her,loving her...but with a forced false hope that she could ever love him.And now when she IS,he just can't believe it!It was just something beyond what he had wished for.


'Ho...gaya!!!'Geet squeeled with happiness breaking maan's chain throughts.He looked at her,she was showing him the diagram with her ear to ear smile.Who would want to look at the page ignoring this beautiful smile of this Beautiful girl.
He chuckled eyeing her excitement.and took the page,she looked expectedly at him,he glanced at her once and took a red pen from the pen holder.Geet's nervous eyes followed the red pen.he smiled and gave a right mark and Geet giggled out of excitelment. Maan to was chukling at her baby wifey.

'So ur study is done na?'Maans asked her as she started to gather up her books to place them in her table.

'H..h..haan'she replied happily.

'very good!See Its only 9pm and ur studies is done.Keep following this rutine,it'll be relaxing for you.'


'Ok...sir'Geet giggled.


Maan narrowed his eyes at her.She giggled more.


'Achha?Sir bana diya?' Suddenly a naughty idea popped into his mind.'Then I need my fees.'


'Fees?one month..l..l..later..' She giggled at him.


'Huh!Do u know how expensive Maan Singh Khurrana's time is Geet?i'll take daily payments from you.'

'Lekinn...mere pass... koi..paisa nei hain..'She looked down.being confused.
'You can never afford me by money,darling.'


'Toh...I'll cook for you.'And maan shrinks!aww man!Her cooking sucked!He must change this aulternative otherwise it'll make his stomach's life hell.

'Pagal ho kya?anything except your food'he gulped down.

'Haww!How d..d..dare uuu!!'Geet pouted her lips and frowned at him.


His whole self got aroused seeing her angry face.it just always turns him on.


'I was thinking of other payments...hot chick'


Her whole face became beet root red and she squeeled,'Chiii...dur hato..dur hato!'But maan put up a naughty smirk and started coming closer opening his shirt's bitton and Geet horrifiedly looked at him doing so.


'Bandh karo...bandh karo'Geet sqirmed with her funny fear turning around and covered her eyes tightly with her palms.

She is one adorable doll!

But he was enjoying her reactions.'i haven't open up anything yet and ur saying to close...'

She Looked back him and saw him opening his 4th button of shirt now.She sqweeked like a little girl and made a dash out of the door.


''Arre i was kidding geet!'' he walked behind her laughing and giving up.He has freaked her out enough for today.

He came to the diner after freshening up only to see Geet waiting for him,she saw him and crossed her arms with an adorable pout,for the prank her played on her.He chuckled remembering her reactions and sat down beside her.

She consciously served him the food.He said thank you with a teasy smile and a naughty look and geet twisted her lips at him.He broke into a soft laughter and said,'Arre yaar!abb chor bhi do gussa'.

'huh!'She ignored him totally and started to serve herself suddenly maan's hand tried to stopped her from holding the soup's bowl as it was excessive hot.But she didn't realized it and grabbed it and immediately winced in pain with the burning sensation she felt in her left hand.Tears started dripping and with a big fat pout and maan's heart crunched with pain seeing her like this.He took her hand in his and looked at it,it wasn't that bad like he expected,it'll hopefully heal overnight.he fetch a bowl of ice cubes with water and told her to deep her hand in it.

He took his plate in his other hand and got up.He gently pulled her to the small living room and made her sit on a couch.


She sat there cozyly folding her legs on the couch with that ice bowl being confused and looked up at him.

He sat down beside her and made a morsel from his plate and shoved it to her.She looked at the morsel and then him.he insisted with his eyes and Geet without wasting any time ate from his hand.He smiled seeing her being totally cozy with him.she lifted her hands to touch the food to feed him but Maan said,'See i'm eating too,u don't have to do that,do one thing,tell the maid to bring water here.'

she tilted her head and insted calling anyone she herself went to bring glass and water.She poured him a glass of water and eyed him that now its his turn to have the bite.He smiled and ate the morsel.and geet fed him water.

She switched on the TV and it was some news channel,she was about to change the channel but maan made a sad face so she didn't change it.He in no time imerged into the news channel and started to eat himself forgetting her turn.She whinned seeing him eating her turns bite and maan's daze of the TV broke,'oh sorry sorry sorry,ok ok here..'he was laughing seeing her cute angry face and shoving the morsel into her mouth.

She was about to scold him but as he quickly shoved the bite in her mouth so she could say nothing.
She looked at him angrily and quickly gulped it down to scold him but he shoved another bite.She coughed a little taking a sip of water and gulped it down too...but she too giggled at herself. She made maan have same amount of food that she had.She didn't want him to eat less for feeding her.

After the dinner,he checked her hand,she told the burning pain's already gone but it still hurts a little when she pulls it out of the cool water.he then applied some oinments on her fingers and went to bed.Geet went to the shower as her usual habit before going to bed.And maan changed into his tracks n T n started watching TV.

He was watching TV and the door clicked open and geet came out and walked infront of the tv to the dressing table,stealing maan's gaze from the TV.He was watching her without blink.How stupidly helpless he feels around her when she comes from shower wearing her short night dresses.It just jolts electricity down his spine.His eyes started to move hungrily over her from back.She was obliviously wiping her hair with a towel and then suddenly her eyes fell on him.she stopped her wiping n kept looking at him like that,but maan was in his naughty world...so he didn't realized geet caught him checking her out.A small smile formed on her lips as she saw him like that.She too was feeling shy and special to see her super hot husband drooling over her.She then suddenly controlled herself.geet!u stupid girl!u can not be shy shy...u have to be naughty naughty...like Maan,ok?

She shied even more like a red apple at her thoughts, but she composed quickly and turned suddenly, breaking maan's trance.He got perplexed,he totally forgot what he was doing earlier.he kept looking around to find sumthing else to stare at,caughing like a fool.damn her nightdress, no...actually damn her!for making him weak on his knees all the time.

Geet turned off the lights and crawled onto bed snuggling into the pillow.
His face fell as he expected to do some romance with his cute wifey as she raised a high expectancy after the morning car ''incident''.He looked at her with sad hurt eyes but she gave a damn and closed her eyes with a peaceful smile felling in deep sleep.

His romantic mood went totally down and sighing he turned off the TV and settled himself in the bed too.

He mummered sum hopeless words at his fate with a cute sad face and closed his eyes to fell in sleep.

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''..maan...''Geet whispered.

''..Maan..!''she whispered a little loud.

''Umm..!''maan responsed being irritated.Not that he was asleep,but he was angry at her,how can she just sleep right away!

''Uff...''geet got impatient and turned him towards herslef.He turned towards her and looked at her with a cute frown.

''Kya hain...''before he could finish his sentence her soft lips captured his own with an explosive kiss.

His eyes gotten wide feeling her actually kissing him!he loosely held her waist to support her and she held her shoulder and slided on him.


The surprize kiss ended as quickly as it started and she looked at him,he was totally shocked,she gave him a happy smile and pecked on his lips again.


'then y did u just slept u knew na...'Geet again pecked on her lips to stop his complains.


'ye kya hain gee-'She pecked his lips hard again and giggled.


''atleast let me finish--''she again kissed his lips making his mouth shut.


He looked at geet with a cute frown as she wasn't letting him finish his words.



Maan suddenly sat on with her in his arms wrapping her waist tightly.He smiled seeing her suddenly getting concious and shy.Though it was dark,but the moonlight was enough for them to see both of their features quite clearly.



'Maan...aap'now its his turn to take revenge.he stopped her words by kissing softly on her chin.She shivered with his soft kiss.his one kiss melted her like butter with flame's touch.She slowly opened her eyes and looked up at him.He had a smile,there was adorance, naughtyness and love...undenying love for her.She gave him her best smile rubbing her nose with his and hugging him tight placing her head on his chest consuming herself in his arms.



'Wow i'm impressed with you geet!'he said in a horse voice bending his head down,kissing her head,his hands softly grazing her smooth back over the smooth satin silk night dress.'My wifey is getting naughty...'he whispered in her ears,'I love it...'She shied more and nuzzled more into him.


"Maan?"she called him in the most swetest voice,which made him smile.


"hmm jaan"


"How did ur ddday go?"she asked him with a cute voice.


"Not fair,u didn't share when i asked how did ur day go?"


she smacked his chest softly and nuzzled into him more...if its ever possible.


he chucked and rocked her back n forth softly and started,"Okey,'Hmm...had many meetings...as usual...then one man...made my ears burst...with his good old days stories'he chuckled lightly.'...2 hours of talking nightmare...'Geet giggled ,'now u know..w how i f..feel when u t...talk?"



'what?'he looked up at her and she she couldn't stop her giggles.She grabbed her mouth with her palm and laughed.'Not fair!'Maan said being childishly angry.'You wasn't there ok?he is a complete chatter box!my ears were about to melt off u know that?'he explained with a hurt voice and geet couldn't stop her giggles.'finally he said mujhe matt rokna...yeah! that'd gonna happen like i wanted to say matt jaiye'he too chuckled and Geet was laughing too.




'Oh you think its funny?'he pouted.'Lets see how you deal with him...he invited us in his party tomorrow evening.'




'P..Party?'she was suddenly not laughing.she was not sure about the idea of going to a party socializing with everyone.What will everyone say...what will She tell them about themselves.Their marriage isn't certificated yet.People will raise questions about their relationship...his previous relationship with Sameera.What will she say about that?even She doesn't know what actually happened except she left the country for good...she didn't even know where she went.



'I know what your thinking,you are not ready to face the ppl yet.There are so much to sort out,I want you to be free and enjoying your college life,not being an eye candy to the media for unnecessary attentions and hazards...but it's a private party just us and Mr.&Mrs.Handa,nothing to worry about Jaan--'But his words were stopped by Geet's voice.


'Where's our marriage's legal paper?'

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