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Semarnk

@Semarnk

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

LOVE it please keep on writing :)

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

hi dear..fab update! cld nt wait 4 pm! Maaneet get closer! R nw friends! Maan wrking on an underworld project! Geet calls Maan! Maan takes care of her! Maan having nightamares! well written! update soon n do pm

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Awesum and lovely part. Atleast Maaneet ka relation ek step to aage bada bt don't u think it is so slow.

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aroobasiddiq

@aroobasiddiq

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

wow their relationship
is improving
geet bought clothes for maan
nice improvement
want to know what happened
with maan in past
and continue sooon
please

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

The story is progressing at quite a good pace.Both Maaneet silently getting used to each other's company.

The change in for good.Geet's considering herself as Maan's frnd,hmmm not bad.She bought shirts and shorts for him.

The lift incident and night mare part were very interesting.

Eagerly waiting for next.

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

I loved part 9. Now we are seeing that despite the distance between them, there is a connection.

There are so many things I loved about this chapter. Like (in no particular order):

- Geet showing her care for her child; and Maan acknowledging it

- the small things that Maan and Geet do for each other (coffee, blanket, staying with Geet). This shows how they notice these things about each other.

- first it was Maan being the considerate one but now Geet is just as considerate. I guess Geet's previous behavior was due to shock and the unusual situation.

- hmm, and I think by telling us what Maan is researching you have opened the door to another possible story line.

- when Geet told Maan she was having trouble sleeping because of the elevator situation, Maan was so fast in reacting. In fact his first reaction was to turn on the lights. That was not only considerate but very touching

I also loved that you clarified, through Maan's point of view, that he did not consciously take advantage of Geet's drunken state and that since his night with Geet, there has been no one else.

Loved it. Loved it. Loved.

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Waiting for the next Part...

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111priyan

@111priyan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

just read your story and its very nice
I liked it a lot
some stories make you anxious about what's next some super excited some sad some push you in dreamland but this story is kind of soothing for me it was like I felt really calm well I really can't explain it but it felt good
so I'll be looking 4wd to read it
nyc work