MG (FF) : Back to You (Updated #II link: Pg 141)

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momi

@-BreakingDown-

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#851

nice update
wht a pact they made

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#852

beautiful update...

so now Maan has trapped Geet for double-date...

past...aww maan said sorry to her...with chocolates...and woh maan bhi gayi...itni jaldi...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

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AISHAJS

@AISHAJS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#853

Love your writing style. Thanks for the update.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#854

loved the title...'The Rescuing Damsel'...she is the one who saved him

most of the time, in past & in present also...

loved cute sweet jivoal dev teasing maan...& shocked geet to know the reality bet DK & MSK...

aakhir geet ko date ke liye mana hi liya maan ne ...

loving this angry geet and manaofying maan in past & present...

sweet maan wooed her with lots of chocolates...

so eager for theri double date...

loved the goody goody part...

You know na, every rule has a exception...its true to tragedy queen frosty also by giving us such a goody goody FF, Back to Us...dont make it sad ending...

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CrabbyEntity

@CrabbyEntity

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#855

Dk was as cool as his name😉... enjoyed reading the whole convo the sibling nok jhok was a delightful treat and cherry on the top the confused geet wid her mouth open😆 i found it very endearing how geet was trying to see dev through maan's eyes with whtever he's told her shows how much people associated with him mattered to her that she still remembered all abt them...no matter how much geet denies but she still cares for maan and i guess that z a fact thts gong to remain unchanged try as much as she can to neglect it...she was the one who has seen maan in his most vulnerable state and that in itself will never let her to do somethng which will eventually hurt him in any way and she agrees for the date too no amount of reasoning will justify why she did but i guess in the end she had too for she z after all his geet...

it was really sweet to see geet forgetting all her anger for chocolates dat was realllyyy veryyy sweet...😳

and today i liked both past & present equally so no fav portion this time luvd the whole of it!!😊

thank u for the update frosty!!!👍🏼

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#856

PAST AND THE PRESENT

DEV IS HIS BROTHER AND THEY ARE GOING ON A DOUBLE DATE

DEV KNEW ALL ABOUT HER AND GEET ALSO HEARD ABOOUT HIM FROM MAAN IN THE Past

BUT THE BOY IS ALL GROWN UP AND IN A SERIOUS RELATION WITH A GIRL

MAANS WANTS HIS HAPPINESS

IF MAAN HAD A LOVING BROTHER, THEN WHAT ARE THE DEMONS THAT TROUBLED HIM IN THE PAST

SOMEHOW I GOT THE FEELING THAT HE WAS ALL ALONE

MAAN FOUND A WAY TO MANAO HIS GEET - LOTS OF CHOCOLATES

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gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#857

awesome dear

so dev knows about geet

waiting for date

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#858

poor geet, howmuch ever she tries to disobey him, she gets convinced very sooon...loved the part😊

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latecomer

@latecomer

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#859

Hey its great reading such a fabulous, amazing ,awesome, superb splendid sumptumous, stupendous story.. n u r eloquent flawless raconteur brewing''back to u'' even more tasty... now coming to story... loved geet's felicity and maan dissembling his emotion...the very great msk ahh n not to forgot charming dev... beauty flowing in both their genes.. wel i felt blessed reading back to back reticent and tumultumous update without a single minute wait...but seem i have wait till friday for nxt one... continue soon waiting...