App ki nazron ne samjha UPDATED NEW THREAD LINK @ pg 1 - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
Shaadi toh hogayi, but wen Geet comes out of current shocked state what will be her reaction??
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Posted: 12 years ago

nice update...

waiting for next update ...coom soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part..
nice that maan married her
but its soo shorttt
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chhotu update tha but nice.Maan coming out as d saviour of geet.loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
too gud superb soo finally my maaneet got married gr8 going,,,,,,,,,such a short update me sad waiting fr next pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
chalo maan toh bahut hi khush hoga...usne apne pyarse shadi jo kar liye...magar geet ko jab hosh ayega tab uska reaction kya hoga...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
cant wait to see how Geet react
please cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow
finaly man married geet
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 8
nice part...
so they are married...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 9

Annie was speaking to dadi in her mobile in a corner, explaining her in short of maan's marriage,it looked like she was having a tough time to make dadi understand the situation. Bt none noticed this as all were busy completing/watching the last ceremony-bidai.

Maan was feeling awkward ,though he could never regret marrying geet, he was feeling uncomfortable with all the people staring at him-some with admiration, some with suspicion & some with sarcasm,more than that..he was in his OWN WEDDING wearing an office attire(well,how would he know that his dream was going to fulfill today?! If he knew,he surely would have worn the sherwani which annie had selected for him) ..bt what bugged him the most was geet's blank look when he looked at him..

He thought she would yell at him, or at least express her astonishment saying atleast something'all she did was to look at him once & then lower her eyes.

The people gathered there weren't really helping, some were busy saying how great maan was,some of them doubted his intension, after all WHY would he marry a bigmouth girl like THAT..some were busy criticizing him..making fun of him..hmmp aaya bada hero banne, jab pure ek insaan ka bojh uthana padega tab pata chalega(here goes to hero! He will know what mistake he has commited when he has to take care of that girl)

U can find these kind of people everywhere..these people, who can only gossip, & make a normal thing a spicy unchaste story,bt don't expect any help from them when needed , as u will find none of them.

Though maan heard all of these nonsense he didn't pay attention to them..he was busy ,watching geet.

Her mother was crying hugging her as well as her father..bt she didn't shed one single tear,she kept mum..instead she whispered in their ears'

Why are you crying dad?? I am your bojh na,you should be happy that I will no longer be your bojh.

Ye tu kya keh rahi hai, .(what are u saying dear) spoke her dad & mom.

We care for you beta..

Hmmmp..she smiled a sarcastic smile..do u know the name of the man ,or where he lives ,or what he does with whom u are marrying me off.

NO..u didn't even know this person's name sometimes before..you got to know his address because he was telling the driver his address,& u don't know TILL NOW what is his work.

All u care about ur IZZAT, ur SAMMAN,

No beta,it's not true.

IT IS TRUE!,she hissed in low voice, or else what explanation u can give of permitting a man to marry me,without even knowing his name??

They couldn't say anything after this..afterall this was true..

Beta,samajhne ki koshish kar, log kya kehte?(try to understand,what the people would say)

Wo log aake tamasha dekhte, khana khate, ghar jake gossip karke di din me bhul jate(they came here only to watch this drama, to eat, & after going home they would have talked about this for 1 / 2 days & after that they would have forgotten this)

She sat on the car,maan was hesitant to sit beside her,because he knew..she needed space now, so he sat infront..while annie sat beside geet.

Bt brij had to come..he told that one of his friend's house was on the way & insisted to drop him.

So as the groom, maan had to sit beside anie, while geet was at the other corner with anie in middle.

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He couldn't describe in words what a awkward situation it was..he could hear geet's muffeled sobs, she was crying softly so that the person infront cannot hear her cries ,keeping her head on anie's shoulder,while anie tried to console her. Maan so much wanted to console her, bt the situation didn't let him'.he was happy on one side bt sad looking at geet''''.

kehne ko jashn-e-bahaara hai, ishq yeh dekhke hairan hai -

phul se khusbu khafa khafa hai gulshan mein

chupa hai koyi ranj fija ki chilman mein


It was late night ,so it was very silent,it was like the city has slept, the car was going in a great speed ,the cool wind was entering through car's window, soothed & at the same time saddened their hearts'..


saare sehme najaare hain, soye soye waqt ke dhaare hain

aur dil mein koyi khoyi si baten hain

kehne ko jashn-e-bahaara hai, ishq yeh dekhke hairan hai

phul se khusbu khafa khafa hai gulshan mein

chupa hai koyi ranj fija ki chilman mein

they reached maan's house ,now geet's sasural..it was almost dark with only one light glowing.they entered the house to see the light was coming from dadima's room.


They went to her room.

Daadima..

Anie go to your room.

Par'

ANIE.

Ji dadima, (yes dadima)she left the room dejectedly.


To hamare pote itne bade ho gaye hai ki itna bada faisla aise , humse puche bina hi karliya!, HUH! Puchenge bhi kyu, akhir iss budi bimar dadi se puch ke vi kya hoga, wo to waise hi dinbhar padi rehti hai bistar pe, aur shayed kuch dino meinn chal basegi..to jo kuch dino ki hi mehman hai iss duniya me, unse uchne ka kya kaam..(so my grandchild has become so big that he didn't feel like even asking this old hag before taking such a drastic step,oh! Why will you? After all this old woman who is almost bedridden for age & various illness, will leave the world anyways within days..so why bother asking her?!)


Dadima pls,aisa nahi hai..wo..(dadima pls,it's not like that)


Maan sir, kya main baat karsakti hu dadima se akele?(can I talk to dadima alone?)

Par..(bt)

Maan, I too want to talk with geet alone, so leave.

Maan left too.


Geet came close to dadima, who was sitting on reclining position'

Dadima, galti maan sir ki nahi hai'(dadima, maan sir is not the one at fault)she sat beside her bed kneeling ..& held her hand

Appke pote ka dil bohut bada hai..unse accha aur sacha insaan shayed iss duniye mein dusra na ho,par galti shayed mere kismat ki hai..(ur grandson has a big heart & ur grandson is maybe the purest & benign person in this whole world, maybe my bad luck is at fault)

Dadima looked at her questioningly

Ha dadima..wo'she told him everything that has happened in the mandap, then what had happened to her at past..

At the end,dadima had tears in he eyes..

Almost har roz tumhe dekhti thi, anie ko padate hue..himmat dete hue..uske saath haste hue..par nahi pata tha, uss muskurati chehreke piche itna dard hai.(I saw u often, teaching ani, giving her strength, giggling with her, bt never knew that behind that smiling face was so much pain!)

Dadima..kya main itni buri hu- ki pyaar ke layek nahi?? Dosti ke kabil nahi?(am I so bad that I am not worth of love or friendship?)

No u are wrong..maan was being resteless so came to check on thm,when he heard geet's last line.

U are the most wonderful girl I ever saw geet,I know that u deserve the best.

*********

It was quite late at night, maan & geet came to their room..

She went to change,without a word'

kaise kahen kya hai sitam, sochate hai abb yeh hum

koyi kaise kahen woh hai ya nahee humaare

she came out of the bathroom,maan sir..

ha bolo..

I don't know why u decided to marry me,u really have a big heart, I am indebted to u..

Maan kept quite not knowing what to say..

Bt I can't ..wo..ye sab..itni jaldi..wo..

I understand, take ur time,bt are you'he hesitated..are you mad at me?

NO..how can I be..wo ..actually, these all happeed so suddenly, I need time to to accept all this.

Ok.

They looked at bed together, their wasn't much space in the room, so sleeping on floor was not possible'

I belive you..

Maan smiled a bit

They slept with a tower of pillows between them..maan looked at the tower with a sign 7 then turned other side'.

karte toh hai saath safar, faasale hain phir bhi magar

jaise milte nahee kisi dariya ke do kinaare

paas hain phir bhi paas nahee, humko yeh gum raas nahee

seeshe ki ik diwaar hai jaise darmiyaan

saare sehme najaare hain, soye soye waqt ke dhaare hain

aur dil mein koyi khoyi si baten hain

kehne ko jashn-e-bahaara hai, ishq yeh dekhke hairan hai

phul se khusbu khafa khafa hai gulshan mein

chupa hai koyi ranj fija ki chilman mein

both slept thinking about the day's events..as they were exhausted both mentally & physically..

Tt was morning & they were on breakfast table..geet was in kitchen cooking for all.

Anie whispered in maan's ear..i told dadima EVRYTHING yesterday..

WHAT!!maan jumped.

What happened maan?

Dadima wo ani ..she was saying 'that ..she..did she say anything to you?

Dadima..about what beta?? The news that u love geet or about u were going to propose her ? She asked coolly sipping the juice that geet had kept for her..


Ha dadima , about both...YOU KNOW EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!

Yes! Both ani & dadi giggled.

Geet came out of the kitchen wearing a cute pink saree


His breath hitched in his throat looking at her, this was the first time in whole morning he had seen her..

hamane ne jo tha nagma suna, dil ne tha usako chuna

yeh daastaan hame waqt ne kaisi sunayi


Though geet tried her best to be like before..there was a hesitation, which didn't go un noyiced bt anyone..she was looking gloomy, while maan was sad looking at her, & also being not able to express his love for her'

hum jo agar hai gumgin, woh bhi udhar khush toh nahee

mulaakaato mein jaise ghul si gayi tanhayi

chale geet pakphere ki rasam ke liye?

Wo pakphere kii rasam..both said together..then both smiled..maan knew though they thought alike, it will be long journey until their soul will meet'


milake bhi hum milate nahee, khilake bhi gul khilate nahee

aankhon mein hai bahaaren, dil mein khija

saare sehme najaare hain, soye soye waqt ke dhaare hain

aur dil mein koyi khoyi si baten hain

o ho... kehne ko jashn-e-bahaara hai, ishq yeh dekhke hairan hai

phul se khusbu khafa khafa hai gulshan mein

chupa hai koyi ranj fija ki chilman mein


precap- pak phere


(I know that u guys were waiting for geet's reaction to maan marrying her,bt I can't give that part to you yet. Pls try to understand, it is not because I want to tease u guys, it is just..so much has happened to geet,that too in few hours- in addition something like this happened in her past too,being a girl pls try to look it from geet's position, because I don't think any girl could react properly after going through so much)

Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago

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