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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

awwsome prt...geet n maan both remember their first meet..

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-memorable-

@-memorable-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#552

how much more time will have to wait to know what happened after all ??

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#553

nice update .

many more things about Geet to be unfolded .

will be waiting for the next update.

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Sudha

@babelicious

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#554

am totally loving it ! very interesting ! waiting for more of her past to be revealed !!
ps : i specially loved the last line, when he stares at her passionately & says hilton hotel 😳 cont soon.. :)

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#555

Sarzu, yeh 2-4 parts mey continue hoga, right?

Me fine with it. I mean, this is the main plot of the whole story, her past and his reaction. Me really flowing with the past. Even, previous parts ko read karne ki jarurat nahi, to connect the whole past and present. Me remember it and beside, you are there to put notes, to make us understand. Overall, loving their each emotion details and the way past is being told. Me doubt that moron, jab neha ka chapter aaya tha.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#556

loved the update...
so geet's past is gradually unfolding...
dev's character is really fishy ...
waiting to know the next...

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shruthiR

@shruthiR

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#557

It was a very nice update⭐️,.So Maan gets to know more about Geet.Looking forward to reading more about Geet's past.Update soon and thank you for the PM😊