FF-More piya - THREAD 1 (MAAN & GEET)

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#391

Awesome update...i liked the way maan told his gf same words as geet's...

BTW best of luck for your exams...do well...and come back with lots of updates.

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ramahesh

@ramahesh

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#392

awesome part
All the best for ur exams dear👍🏼

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#393

Wow... A amazing update
Fabulous
They both think alike.
Maan is feeling bad becz geet told him case study.
Ab aage kya goga??
Luved it.
Keep writing.

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#394

may b because geet is in same age bracket as of maan, maan always relate to her easily and easily effected by her words

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#395

part 10
wow i liked this very much...
cont soon dear...

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Asmi13

@Asmi13

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#396

l am wondering how their relationship will turn into...d update was amazing...loving it

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Saams

@Saams

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#397

Aww...loved d last dialogue of Maan..am so happy to see d first step from him.

continue soon..

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durga1000

@durga1000

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#398

you have written beautifully and slowly u are trying to reveal maan's past thru geet (case study). we cant expect geet to be sensible as she herself is a child. hope rano intervens and make geet understand.
"am I just a case study?" this sentence by mann was heart-wrenching. poor thing, he wants love, attention and affection and only he knows what he had suffered there in the orphanage. i am all nerves thinking of it.
the most loved thing in the update was i felt maan is getting attracted to geet. for geet it was there before thats why she never leaves him even when he was rude. waiting to know more about maan