FF:Beginnings and Endings.(Part 5 Pg 11)

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

wow geet came to her house oh the family doesnt know that she heard MC fabulous update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnn thanks pm thank yuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

so didnt expect you to start off in hoshiyarpur...i was like wait...did i miss an update or something? he he...but i didnt...loved it...good to see Geet's family back in the picture 👏👏👏...i loved how Darji looked for Maan...he's finally like a big soft teddy!! he he...loved it!! 😳...i loved how you described Geet hearing Maan's name as chills down her spine...cuz i totally get it...every time i hear Maan Singh Khurana...i dont get chills...but i swoon..i definitely swoon 😉😉😉...aww...they didnt know she lost the baby...😭😭😭 i want to see a scene with the family finding out...and when is MSK gonna land up...he needs to win geet over already...he he

JAZ

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

😭 😭 Very , very touching 😭 Really , Geet's pain was described with absolute perfection to the " T " 👏👏 I myself was feeling her suppressed agony throughout your narration .

BEAUTIFUL writing ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ : loved it .....

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

came across the FF for the first time today...can u believe it? me who is going thru the GF on and off the whole day...making my mom angry at times!
thank you for a lovely story......Please Pm me the next time u update.

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

loved the update..............

when will v get maan's side of the story..............

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

@Preethia: within a day or two max..u will get the update pakka...

@Jaz She reached HP in part 3 itself na..so i had to start from there...and waise dont worry all of us swoon when he comes on screen..😉

@bangalores: Thnks for that..i havent updated this in last more than a week..might be thst why u missed it..thnks..

@darshree: thnks yaara...ur comments alays make me smile..

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Hey there...Nice story...wonder how u gonna get Maan to bring Geet back to him...Pls add me to ur PM list and update soooon....

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

@dhara: Oh when that starts u will have a laugher riot...promise u on that..but it will take sme time..till then hold on to the tissues u have..waise i love ur DP...I just loved LRL till RAJ was there ..haiiiiiiiiiiii..

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

shreya

i did not realise that you had continued your OS into an FF.

I normally don't come into the MF. I came in today to read your update and chanced upon your update and then realised you had already posted 4 more updates.

anyway have sent you the buddy request and hope to get a pm when you update.

anyway, now i will keep track of this thread for the update.

I liked the fact that she went home to her mother. 👍🏼

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

@usha: Oh ya everybody wanted it..so i did continue...thnks..i will PM u when i update..but i am the most lazy FF writer arnd..so u will have to bear with me...hehe