I donot like new track...

I was very disappointed by Yesterday episode.. it was so loose... illogical.. and on top of Maan's accident in lift... I thought they did last minute changes to the script,,, applied quick fixes..

I feel they should have planned the new track assuming that Guru will not be resuming so fast (worst scenario) .. but should have stick to the original thought line..

I strongly feel, it should have been Maan ensuring Justice for her.. Not Geet fighting for herself.... The way they have built Maan's character.. there is no other option here.

I strongly felt they should have come with better story line.... and here is one of the storyline which i thought about..

1. Maan meets with accident while searching for Geet. (This is better then lift one). Geet finds him in accident condition and takes him to Hospital. He is serious. She calls Dadi.

2. Dadi and Nayantara come to hospital. They are waiting outside OT. Geet bumps into her Gynaecologist who enquires about her health. NT hears this and gets confirmed that geet is still carrying the child. Dadi comes and asks Geet not to come near Maan and also job. Geet is forced to leave hospital.. NT calls some goondas to bump off Geet.

3. Geet is waiting oustide the hospital. She comes to know Maan is out of danger and she decides to leave. She is walking on the road, suddenly a Truck hits her. She is last minute saved by handsome hunk, Arjun.. He takes her to his house as its late. He has his parents at home and they call Doc. She is given first aid. She wants to leave, but they ask her to wait till she is OK. Next day she is leaving.. They want her to be their DIL .. But she refuses saying she is only Maan's love.. (Typical dialogue.. maan kee Geet).. Arjun asks here where she will go. She tells him she needs a job.. and she has worked as sectry.with MSK. Arjun,.. so you are the one who ran away last night.. its all over TV.. He gives her Job and employee qtr…

4. Geet calls up Adi daily for Maan. (this way CV can have hold on how many days they don't want to show maan) ..She goes to hospital also, but is not able to meet him.. One day she comes to know that Maan is discharged and has joined back office. She tries to talk to Maan on phone.. but he refuses.. He is very upset that she has not tried to reach him when he was sick..

5. Adi and Arjun make a plan to unite Geet and Maan. Arjun fakes a meeting with MSK for a project and when they meet, he brings geet with him. He tells Maan, how he found geet on road , hit by Truck. And that both of you need to talk.

6. Geet and Maan start with their usual way. Geet tells him finally why she left that night.. Maan is not able to believe as he cannot think that his brother can do such ochi(low) harkat. Geet leaves him saying that she was in the same doubt that night ; whether he will support her or his family…Maan is still confused.. while driving back.. he tries to recollect all clues..(dev ko dekha, Dev tel no.. Dev tumne kaise apna karza chukaya..) and comes to concolusion that Geet is right.. He suddenly realizes what Geet will do next. He calls Adi/Arjun and asks them to stop Geet from going anywhere.

7. He goes home and confronts Dev. Dev confesses. Maan asks him to surrender to Police, which he agrees.

8. He goes back to Geet's place where Arjun and Adi are some how holding on Geet. Maan with their usual nok-jhonk are back. They say Thank You to Arjun. Arjun indicates to Geet, he is also in love with her.. and she can come to him anytime… (for help)..(future.. CVs may need him…)

9. Maan takes Geet back to mansion.. and tells Dadi everything. She is disturbed to hear all and says sorry to Geet for the pain she & her family has to go through because of DeV. She says she wants to correct it.. and wants Maan and Geet to get married..

10. Dev and NT in Jail.

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