FF:You complete me!pg 193,p47+imp note on 194 - Page 90

Originally posted by: jeny_roxxx

I m "SPEECHLESS".

Pls continue soon....

hi jeny,

thanks..!!! ur "speechless" put me on cloud 9...

Originally posted by: geet.a

Soms!! 🤗

Happy Fships Day!

Wow..I finally caught up...don't worry, i got ur PM's..lol..

AMAzing work!!
mazaa aa gaya..

I wish the CV's take ur ideas for the show!!Soo cute and imaginable..waise toh just the thought of a romantic MSK is.. 😍

PAta nahi kab hoga...but I'm loving the ff..!!!

Plzz..MAan ko jaldi waapis laao..!!

lots of love

geet ,

happy friendship day to u too...!!! 😛

thanks girl.....thanks for reading...!!! 😃

soumya

hello people,😛

happy friend ship day to all of you...!!!!! 🤗


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sorry guys, i thought i would be able to update around 2 or 3 parts today , but unexpected twists and turns u know in my life delayed the update.... 😉.... but lets see what twists and turns are ahead for maan and geet.

here's part 39!!!!!!!! 😃

Part 39:

Next morning maan left to the airport at around 5am. He wanted to call geet before boarding the flight but realized it would be too early to call and wake her on a Saturday. He boarded the flight physically but left his heart, his thoughts with geet. It was a one hour flight and maan ended up reading some magazines in the flight and every now and then kept smiling when he remembered geet's famous one liners or her sweet smiles!! What has she done to me? I just cannot think of anything else but her, he thought. He turned the pages of the magazine, found an interesting article, and read it until the flight landed.

Shimla: Dev was up early on a Saturday. He wanted to get to office before his bro even made it to shimla. He wanted to impress maan and that is what his wife had suggested too. Both of them had breakfast and naintara's wound a few weeks back still showed no sign of healing. She still had her right palm bandaged and it hurt. They hurried to the office and were happy that Mr.Nanda would not meet Maan. In fact, Mr. Nanda volunteered to not meet maan as per daadima's instructions. They had to wait an hour before they got the message that the flight had landed and maan was on his way to the office.

Maan called geet on his way to the office but he could not reach her. Disheartened he walked into the Shimla office. Dev greeted him and they got to business right away. Maan wanted to finish his work and in fact every pending work as early as possible so that he could cut his trip to less than four days. They started working at around 9am and maan did not even let dev-tara go for lunch. Dev and Nainatara were surprised at how this man can work without thinking of food or break. It was 4pm and dev finally spoke up.

"Bro, aapne breakfast nahi kiya, lunch nahi kiya. Kuch tuo kha lijiye and take a break bro."

Naintara was also starving by now and was tired listeningto their boring discussions. She too supported dev, "haan veerji. Hume lagta hai ki hume kuch kha lena chahiye. Kaafi time ho gaya."

Maan responded coldly, "hmmm.theek hai.chalte hai", he closed his laptop when his phone finally rang. Geet was calling him. He told dev-tara that they should go to the restuarant and order something for him too and he would join them in a couple of minutes. They nodded and left. Maan smiled, took a deep breath and answered the call.

Dev-Tara were really tired and walked slowly to the car. Dev grinned thinking of his bro and said, "yeh bro bhi na, itna kaam karte hai."

"tuo kya sab aapke tarah nalayak honge? Maan singh khurana hai woh. Ab pata chala who insaan pura khurana empire ko control kyun karta hai?"

"haan sweetheart. Kuch din ki hi toh baat hai. Uske baad hum karenge" and naintara hugged him when he said that.

"good dev. Finally aapko confidence aa hi gaya."

They got into the car and drove to the restaurant. On the way naintara said, "lekin manna padega. Maan Khurana is too focused in his work."

Back in the office, Maan took the call and immediately said, "What are you doing to me? I just cannot focus."

Geet said, "na hi, na hello aur complaints shuru maan?"

"geet sab tumhari ghalti. Anyways bolo kya hai?"

"kya hai?kuch nahi. Aap theek thak pahunch gaye na? Breakfast kiya, lunch kiya? Maan aap please apna dhyaan rakna. Aap ko kaam karte waqt kuch aur yaad hi nahi rehta. Aaram se, dheere dheere kaam karna. Zyaada tension mat lena. Waise bhi aap maan khurana hai, aap ko tension dene ki aadat hai lene ki nahi. Lekin phir bhi. Aur phir maan aap jaldi '"

"geet stop. I know only written language has full stops, commas and punctuation marks. It does not mean you do not use them while speaking. At least take a pause to breathe. Tab se bak bak kar rahi ho."

"maan, khadoos!"

"kya?"

"kuch nahi lunch kiya?"

"nahi "

"kyun? Maan dhyaan rakhiye apna."

"tuo tum kya karoge?"

"maan, aap bhi na."

Maan was about to tell her something when he gets a call from dev. He comes back to reality and says, "Geet I have to go now! I'll talk to you later. Take care!" and hung up without waiting for geet to reply.

Geet was angry that his conversation was so short and incomplete and all he did was taunt her again. She looked at the phone and hit the hard imagining hitting maan. "theek se baat bhi nahi karta. Bas kaam kaam aur kaam. Kuch aur yaad rehta hai is insaan ko?"

Maan on the other hand spoke to dev and told him that he would rach the place in a few minutes. On the way to the hotel he saw a florist. His eyes automatically searched for white roses and on not finding them he thought, "Useless florist" and remembered how he had scolded geet for getting the white roses to his cabin.

He reached the hotel and saw that the food had arrived but dev and naintara had not touched it. He sat opposite to both of them and finally spoke in a little relaxed tone.

"you could have started."

Naintara smiled and replied, "nahi veerji, aapko chod ke hum kaise?"

Maan looked Naintara after what seemed like years of no eye contact and threw a faint smile, "let's start then. I'm sure all of us are starving."

Naintara could not believe her eyes. Her veerji had actually looked at her and smiled. She rewinded her thoughts and thought to her self, "wait, did maan veerji just smile at me? Did not know he could smile."

They rest of their conversation was smooth and they discussed weather and the place. Naintara too joined in. Dev wanted to stop for the day but maan was adamant to get back to office and work until 8pm. Naintara looked at maan in disbelief. Maan looked at her expressions and said, "agar tum chahte ho tuo aaram kar sakte ho" and suddenly his gaze fell on her bandaged hand and he looked at her questioningly.

Naintara understood the question and replied; "veerji woh glass pieces" and maan understood the rest. He nodded and dev and he went to the office.

Naintara was astonished that her veerji was finally atleast talking one or two sentences to her. She did not know how this was happening but there was something. She could not solve the puzzle and decided to leave it unsolved. Maan was atleast getting a little positive with her and dev after everything that happened two months back. She smiled, as her work was getting a little easier.

Time passed and dev and maan had finally finished their day's work and got back to the hotel. Maan went to his suite and having no more energy to do anything else just walked into the balcony. The balcony was overlooking sloping landscaped gardens and the distant snow capped Himalayas. He sat there for sometime completely enthralled by the surroundings. Everything seemed so tranquil and he just wanted to sit there for the rest of the night.

He heard his phone ring and walked inside to answer it. He assumed it was geet and said, "agar tum yahan hoti tuo'" and heard his daadima say, "tuo kya hota maan?"

Maan almost dropped the phone. Not again he thought. He had himself given his grandmom an opportunity to tease him openly. Now, he had to pay a heavy price for answering the call without seeing who it was.

Daadima laughed and said, "Maan aapko geet ke ilawa kuch aur bhi soojta hai aaj kal?"

"Daadima kaise hai aap?" said maan desperate to change the topic.

"hum theek hai. Lekin lagta hai aap pareshaan hai."

"nahi. Main theek hoon."

"Good to know that! I decided to call you since you did not. Or should I just say you did not have enough time to get over geet's thoughts."

"daadima please aap phir se shuru mat kijiye", Said maan beggingly.

"Alright Mr. Khurana. Lets get to the point. Humne abhi dev se baat kiya. Keh rahe the ki aap ne unse bahut kaam karwaya. Kyun maan do din mein hi delhi wapas aake geet se milne ka iraada hai kya?"

Though it was obvious, he did not want to admit it. He told her, "nahi daadima, delhi main bhi kaam hai."

"yeah yeah I know. Aaj kal delhi mein hi zyaada kaam hai" she said sardonically.

"daadima kaafi raat ho chuki hai. You should sleep."

"yes maan. And you can contine dreaming! Good night! Aur haan take care Mr. Khurana."

"Good night daadi" said maan unbuttoning his shirt and trying to relax a bit. Talking to daadima was a big and an impossible task these days because all she would speak of is geet. Though he enjoyed being teased and would feel like blushing at times, he would never do it, as it would go against his brand Maan Khurana image.

i know the update is small and i stopped it abruptly but this is all i could write for now..!!! if i can come up with the next part in some time i'll update that too...!!!!!

Soumya

evn though the update was small it was beautifull.. I don't know why but I liked this line very much

"On the way to the hotel he saw a florist. His eyes automatically searched for white roses and on not finding them he thought, "Useless florist"".. Imagining Maan singh khurana saying those lines ... he he

Great part!!
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!!

was a short and sweeeeeeeet update.........

nice sequence....................thnx for d update........................

Originally posted by: febinyusuff

evn though the update was small it was beautifull.. I don't know why but I liked this line very much

"On the way to the hotel he saw a florist. His eyes automatically searched for white roses and on not finding them he thought, "Useless florist"".. Imagining Maan singh khurana saying those lines ... he he

thanks febin....!!!! 😛..... glad u like it...!!!!

haa... even i can imagine maan calling the florist "useless".... all this while we've only been used to maan calling geet names...!!!😉

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great part!!
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!!

thanks radhika..... !!! 😛

Originally posted by: revav

was a short and sweeeeeeeet update.........

nice sequence....................thnx for d update........................

reva

thanks reva...... 😛

yea, it was a short one but i'm glad u liked it...!!!

i'll come back with a big one...!!!

heyyyyyyyyy soumya awesome update yaar.....i just luv reading ur posts babes...keep up the good work