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Proud huggies to my lashuuu for having been such a good little girl and posting part 24 so soon 🤗before we drowned IF in our tears.. 😆

N omg omg omg omg omg omg 😲… wot a treat for dear Bhuvi.. the whole part 24 revolved around my Anu 🤗🤗 .. every scene had her.. every dialogue.. the loooooooooong awaited meeting of her n Veer.. Each and every dialogue of Anu shows her strength, wit, courage, modesty, helplessness..😍

First of all bhuvi goes 😍 .. imagining Anu in her orange clothes and bits of inexpensive jewellery complementing her elemental perfect features with her little patched maroon cotton bag😍 Annnuuuuuu 🤗🤗🤗 missed u dear

Anus papa n Tasha😡😡 … leave my girl alone.. theres only so much she can take.. 😡😡go away get drunk get lost don't trouble her go away to sagars DV studio !! 😡 (thts the worst place I can think of on earth)

I loved how you used Gauri chachi to clear doubts on how Agni met and began using Anu in the first place and why she is forced to work for him going against her conscience and rationale ..

Aww what an adorable scene it is when Manu hugs Anus legs protectively and the brave girl sends him to play with her usual dialogue about omens🤗.. adorable he is wants to hit tasha with a pebble.. chotu sweetheart 😳🤗🤗

Pulling down her cheeks to expose her cheerful eyes, the mischievous girl comforts her "See... even I am not crying…" *bhuvi had tears😭 .. "What needs to be done...needs to be done..." *bhuvi wipes tears.. yes Anu !

The pleasant convo of Sakshi n Anu is soo pleasant and lovely.. I actually think I like ur saakshi a LOT now.. almost love her !! 🤗

engaged in dreamily pondering on Sakshi's pleasing situation that she could only fantasise about for herself *what do you know precious Anu.. ask me .. Bhuvi will tell you what a beautiful life you will have ahead.. 🤗😍

The scene in the bar street is soo well described lashu 👏 that any appreciation of mine will not do a tenth of justice that the flawlessly written … but still I will try.. 😕

The whole scene of drunk rogues troubling Anu n Saakshi was scary.. The scuffle and the struggle was very well written.. Bhuvi could relax JUST cos she knows who will come to save the maidens ☺️

The scene where Pari comes and tries to help the girls is soo touching… "how abominable that Aryanagar has to see days like this!" this lady is AWESOME ! I fully approve of her as the momma in law of my Anu.. 🤗

Shera "Shera discovers that her battle with her conscience was more arduous than the battle against the two men restraining her" awww Anuuu .. Why do u keep using the name shera for her lashu ??? 😒 I have no right to question you but ..still 🥺

the youngest of the princes pats his faithful pet and then calmly walks towards the crowd to slowly raise his head, revealing his stormy eyes. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW HERE HE COMESS !! WHAT AN ENTRY !! *whistling.. jumping.. waving hanky…😍

Veer quietly adjusts the rings on his fingers for many tense moments and then looks up, into the eyes of the numerous culprits.😍😍😍

By the sheer might of his wrists; he tows along the two men by their neck and pins them against an adjacent wall WOWO 😍

As the choking men look to the offended Shera pleading for help, the girl responds with a soft vindictive smile. Anuu .. wont forgive so easily !! Shera catches them leaving and announces her observations aloud "Four men over there… I think they are trying to escape..." she pauses to try and catch Veer's attention again "R...R...Rajkumar Veer..." awww how I love her ..adorable .. 😆

Slowly looking up to discover the deceitful men seeking to slip away; the fervent prince weighs his sword and then discharges it with adept prowess. Propelling ahead; the blade lodges in the ground imposingly, blocking the path of the four escapees. Awwwwwwwwwww just awwww….😍

proudly wipes the blood off his sword with the expensive garment and confesses calmly "Actually, I don't want such sinful blood staining even the edge of my blade..." more awwwwwww 😍

Me awwwwwing a lot in this part since I am running out of words of praise… 😍

I think I liked Veer almost as much as I loved Anu in this part .. 😍

conceals her face with her veil to stifle her first genuine giggle in many days . me soo glad to hear your giggle darling .. kissie to u 🤗

aww Veer grown up so much .. issuing orders like that.. confident and smug.😍

, Veer shushes them "Didi…don't even think of thanking me…let me drop you both home… maaji needs to be attended to by a Vaidya...I shall take you along... come with me..." for me this was the most beautiful scene of part 24.. he calling them didi n maaji … soo emotional and beautiful 😍😍😍

Shera shows her gratitude to the prince, aware that he had deliberately not looked in her direction, even once so far "Thank you for everything Rajkumar Veer" Smart Anu.😆. rude boy veer.. they taught u no manners.. learn some from Dharam 😡

Awww my sweetheart ""Maaji... if that thug was not as fat as he was, don't you think I could have just dealt with him all by myself?"" 😆

looking straight ahead; Shera smiles as she admits "I understand your dilemmas Rajkumar... it is all right... I can manage..." yeah Anu.. we don't need his help.. rude prince. 😳

amused girl enquires "Rajkumar Veer, are you offering me or ordering me?" my witty girl🤣

, Veer frowns "Whichever…whatever … both… what difference does it make…" serves u right 😳

the witty Shera teases him "I generally never reject offers… and I generally never accept orders…but everything is an exception in your case Rajkumar Veer..." This was my favest line 🤣🤣🤣

Folding his palms as a mark of false plea; the prince finally glares at the riveting Shera, as he sarcastically offers "I am offering you, O great maiden... please do mount my..." yeah keep up that behavior and you might get my Anu

he ascertains with great difficulty "Just in this one instance alone...only...only if you found yourself losing your balance...y...y...you could hold on to my s...shoulder for support..."Checking to ensure that she was sitting as far away from him as possible, Shera grins in reply "Thank you for the kind suggestion Rajkumar Veer... I think I shall be all right..." Adoooooooooooooooooooorable n sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettttttt😳

"Before we start... I might not get a chance to say this again... but... I... I... wanted to sincerely thank you for saving my life today... I shall never forget this honourable deed of yours...you did this inspite of the arguments you might have had with your brother in the past, due to me... once again, I would like to apologize for the problems I created between the two of you…" my sweet girl has better manners than a prince !

Veer briefly realizes that for being a novice rider she managed to hold on securely and remained distant. Yes Veer Anu is a brave girl not a clinging coward.

I am NOT going to forgive Veer for saying this "Leave...now... leave at once... disappear from here as soon as you can... go..." he dared asked Anu to DISAPPEAR .. 😡

What an important moment.. Anus first meeting with all her 😳sasural pepl.. hope no one is rude to her.. OMG I hope not.. 😭

When is part 25 coming 😍? I cant sleep until I know wht happens next .. 😒

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Posted: 17 years ago
just to keep it on the first page
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Note - I apologise for the font in the latest part 24... the new IFs formatting is seriously making me go grrrrr... hence, each para is of a different size... if you can do copy it into a MS word document or something equalize the font and read it... 😕that might be easier on the eye... 😕
@ cutie
awww thank you so much for the comments...🤗 actually i wasnt aware that you read sammi.. and am i glad that you liked this part... yes this part was supposed to clear everyone's doubts with regards to shera's history... i am glad that you liked how veer saved her and also their interactions... (yes veer reluctantly takes her on his horse loool typical veer i guess...)

for a short while now the events in aryanagar will be slightly positive than sinister... so yes hope its easy on the eye and mind... ofcourse we do have shera's problems and many villains... but overall.. the mood shall be lighter...
see you in the next part dear..

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@ rashi, fatty, reens

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rashi jaan aapke saare comments reserved hi hote hain...😆 and fattyji aap bhi reserved.. aap bhi sammi padte ho? 😲
hee hee thanks reens.. hope you had sweet dreams...
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@ bhuvi 🤗🤗🤗

I could feel the effect of the flooding here in london so i posted cookly cookly 😭

The loooooooooong awaited meeting of her n Veer.. yes... and then they meet only at the end of sammi again.... so relish this part hun... ⭐️

me not even going to reply to your comments on Anu cos me knows what they are going to be.. *chuckle* yes she is beautiful, witty, brave etc etc... and looks lovely in orange too... Dont cry for her Bhuvi... the answer in your line here -> What do you know precious Anu.. ask me .. Bhuvi will tell you what a beautiful life you will have ahead😳

banning Baba and Tasha to DV studio not a bad idea i must say.. ⭐️

I loved how you used Gauri chachi to clear doubts
thankooo thats why i was hoping to have shera a sort of a mystery almost half way till sammi... and to have her history slowly unfold instead of there being a deliberate revelation in one dedicated part... 😛

Aww what an adorable scene it is when Manu hugs Anus legs protectively. he wants to hit tasha with a pebble.. chotu sweetheart awwww this baby seems to have captured hearts..

I actually think I like ur saakshi a LOT now.. almost love her !! I almost fainted at this line i must say... *applause to lashy for having achieved the un-achievable*👏😛

The scene in the bar street is soo well described lashu that any appreciation of mine will not do a tenth of justice that the flawlessly written. The whole scene of drunk rogues troubling Anu n Saakshi was scary.. The scuffle and the struggle was very well written. We have always wanted a scene on similar lines havent we...but in entire DV so far.. i dont think sagars have ever shown something like this... hai na😕

The scene where Pari comes and tries to help the girls is soo touching. 😳

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW HERE COMESS VEER !! WHAT AN ENTRY!! *whistling.. jumping.. waving hanky… Awwwwwwwwwww just awwww Me awwwwwing a lot in this part since I am running out of words of praise… I think I liked Veer almost as much as I loved Anu in this part ..*again lashy achieved the unachievable*
Veer grown up so much .. issuing orders like that.. confident and smug. yessssss ishhhhhhhh veeer *swoon worthy*😳

Anuu .. wont forgive the villains so easily!! Shera catches them leaving awww how I love her ..adorable me soo glad to hear your giggle darling .. kissie to u and how opportune that veer must be the one to tickle her funny buds... 😳

Veer calling them didi n maaji … soo emotional and beautiful 😃

The witty Shera teases him "I generally never reject offers… and I generally never accept orders…but everything is an exception in your case Rajkumar Veer..." This was my favest line (looooooool mine too)

"Checking to ensure that she was sitting as far away from him as possible, Shera grins in reply "Thank you for the kind suggestion Rajkumar Veer... I think I shall be all right..." Adoooooooooooooooooooorable n sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettttttt looooooooooool

Anu is a brave girl not a clinging coward. I am NOT going to forgive Veer - dared asked Anu to DISAPPEAR .. 😆

What an important moment.. Anus first meeting with all her sasural pepl.. hope no one is rude to her.. this was the first thought that came to me too... she met her entire sasuraal in one day.. sakshi pari and then the royal family too.. lool unwittingly...

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Kiran 🤗🤗🤗
loooooooooool kiran ji.... i was laughing throughout your comments dear... i could literally feel the awwings and the swoonings.. am i mighty pleased i was able to cheer you up from yesterday...

wwwwoooo lashy ab epi ke bare mein kya kahoon i am still dreaming abt it for the first time i am kind of glad that the sagars our never gona show something like this my poor heart will otherwise never be able to recover from so much pleasure imagine veer wala scene sach mein dikha diya to kiran ki kya halat hogi 😳

today seriously is the day for topsy turvies... bhuvi praising sakshi and veer... kiran praising shera/anu... 😲

oh mine i can just imagine she wld be looking so beautiful. The next part was so touching by explaining sheras circumstances and how she has been forced into helping agni u have made us sympathise with the poor girl so much, and if this was not enough the ungrateful father and taasha the haresser are there to add to her miseries but one round of appaluse for gauri chachi and a big hug for sweetu manu.
We need to give an appaluse to her courage that after having so much going against her she stands tall and takes whatever life has to dish out to her proudly and with a smile on her face

and for all the sad part of shera that you felt touched by... awwwwww and double awwwww... even triple awwwwwes 😛

I loved it i loved it for once shera cant save herself and needed messiah to come and save her as i always wanted (didnt we all?😉)

HAILAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA what a hero type of entry,............. now kiran again needs a few mins to collect herself to write further [Veer quietly adjusts the rings on his fingers for many tense moments and then looks up, into the eyes of the numerous culprits.] Sagars pls pls pls never show something like this poor kiran will be comatised for life
what can i say apart from *sigh*😳 for Veer and *looooooooooooooooool* for kiran ji 😆

OMGGGGGGGGGG what confidence what attitude i need a few more mins now....ohhhhhhhhhh my the bold and the brave....oh my now i am out of breath and out of words
I just loved shera being vindictive. i just loved veer giving out orders to the soldiers it was just so powerful
OHHHHHH lashy u just know how to tug at our heart strings looool thankoooo kiran

Having curiously watched their interactions so far; Shera becomes entertained by this retribution to Agni's friends and conceals her face with her veil to stifle her first genuine giggle in many days.
LASHHHHHHHHYYYYYY this is such a beautiful scene and u can not blame shera now being completely swept off her feet. agar kiran wahan hoti to ek vicotrian maiden fainting scene to jaroor ho jata.
looooooooooooooool 😆

Saasu ma ho to aisi but this veer is too arrogant he refuses to help shera insinuating that she can take care of her self but cant keep himself from caring also, he is such a complex boy that is veer for you... 😉

How much this one sentence conveys. It just shows how much of life shera has seen in her short life " I understand your dilemmas Rajkumar... it is all right... I can manage..." awwwwww bless her sniff sniff... 😭

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG ab kiran gayi dreamland yeah scene kaise socha lashy sagars pls pls aisa kabhi mat dekhna pls pls this whole scene each and every dia each and every expression was stuff what dreams are made of there nok jhok abt shera asking veer if he was ordering her or requesting then veer over the top acting and veer then offering her to hold his shoulder for support so sweet
but this shera is too much isse baki sab to aata hai par chance lena nahin aatashe sits at a distance foolish girl but that ride into the sunset was hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii main mar gayi. SAGARS PLS PLS AISA KUCH MAT DIKHANA.
awwww thankyou kiran.. didnt realise you would love all this sooooo much... 😳

now me impatient for the next part to know what excuse veer comes up with for givign horseback rides to beautiful girl, and why do i feel this topic is gona be utilised to the fullest by dharam
and once again a note to sagars : . SAGARS PLS PLS AISA KUCH MAT DIKHANA.
(ps: sagars never show anything i ask them to show so i am trying reverse psychology this time and pleading with them not to show it, pata nahin shayad kaam kar jaye)

looooooooooooooooooooooool for your last line of comments

will try to post next part as soon as possible.... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
oye comments ki baat mat karo di.
i read the whole stioy.almost in a stretch..
BTW..maine di hui..all parts ki total..summary comment apne padhi hai kya?😭
u didn't replied to that..
u know i..spent time memorising..thhe whole story....n then putting that on 3 pgs word doc..
n u didn't commented on my comment 😭
lolz so many comments 😆
well i'll surely read it..n post my comment on reserved place....😉😆
jaise aap hame tadpati ho waaise hum bhi aapko tadpate hai 😆😆😆
tadap ka badla tadap 🤗
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with lots of hugs..atleast from Hugging queen 😆
Edited by Rash2cool - 17 years ago
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Chalo ham waapas aapko khush kar dete hain... not for comments but since you felt bad... i did reply to you via pm a lamba one.. par shaayad aapne dekhaa nahin 😳

Rashi jaan 🤗zabardast hugging and being smothered in each other's hugs 😆

I dont know if you would actually believe me.. but it was only after reading your pm and your comments that you read the entire 22 parts in one go that made me actually want to write again... i had become pretty entangled in work at home etc etc and forgotten about writing again... but your pm really did the work... so i must say a bigggggggggggggg huggggggggg to you ji for this wonderful ... dare i say feat... how did you read 150 pages in one go.. my God... 😕 so please dont ever apologize for this honey... its a feat... 🤗🤗🤗

am glad you liked my script.......... 🤗🤗🤗
my God 162 pages so i am guessing that the entire story would turn out to about 300 350 pages 😆 haiyyo Rabba...
Thank you so much for the complements.... and for the fact that you could visualize evrything...
I am sure Veer will be your favourite 😉 he is the mischeivous one of the lot but again the story shall see his transition from notty lil one to a responsible prince/shramik whatever we may call him... hopefully a smoother transition than that has been shown in the serial... he is an emotional person and thinks through his heart many times.. 😊 you have stated it right...
awww tume Dharam ko budhu kaha 😭 he is such a chweetooo... yes he is more practical than Veer... though i must say innocent (budhu😆) in love *giggle* but its not like veer is all an expert in the lessons of love... 😛
his girl siya is a sweetie pie too... yes she is someone i guess who no one could never dislike ... (hopefully 😕) awww and you liked her sketch thankoo ji 😳
Shera is a notty girl nottiest of the lot if you ask me even more than veer... yes she is the only one who can thod veer's ghamand but in a very soft way... but under that is a responsible girl suffering a lot... and when i first found her picture... i was staring at that picture for 2 days... i hoped too that i looked like her 😆
i felt that the serial lacked any people apart from the main 4 and then their immediate family hence i set out to bring out some nice friends for the people... glad you found those scenes funny... Daksha-Veer ki baat... Nanda and then Bhalla... and Nanda is not more matured... she is just darpok.. 😆

and the Agni here is as clever if not more clever than Jai.. 😛 i like the name you gave Agni thappad khau

Personally your favourite part seems to be my favourite part too ... The conversation of her's with almost dead veer..almost made me cry as well as laugh at her innocence.

This is where I fell in love with Shera'..

awww yes i actually loved writing that part and i think that was the only part in the entire sammi that i actually re-read 3-4 times😊

also thank you for liking the Dharam and Siya letters i try and make them sound more traditionalist royal and yet romantic...

I just look forward..to veer realize that the person who saved him was Shera n him falling in Love with Shera..n vice versa'.though she has already but yet to realize😉 hmmmm i would not say that shera is already in love with veer at allllllll in fact on the contrary... 😉 veer is possibly more attracted to shera as a person than vice versa till the MU happened he was the one who couldnt take his eyes off her... she realizes he is a nice but short tempered person thats all... respects him . 😉

once again a bigggggggggg muah to you too for your support dear..🤗.

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lool Lashy DI....i av been readin ur FF for a while now...i try to comment on it now n den... but its just too good, dat i simply cant express in wrds..although i try...lool...da dia's narration, story line alll is general is just awsome! u jst keep me guessin...so fnxx xxxx
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lashy me back with my comments 🤗 Aap ki kitni bhi taareef karu kaam hai 👏
what i loved :
  • I like the babe baba, 👏he is telling sardar the truth that if it were not for him they would not be in this situation. They would have had their sons alive if sardar had not accepted agni?s health. I can feel their pain😭😭as they have seen all the young men be killed or have run away. The only people left in the tribe are the women, elderly and kids. The baba is also very wise and he understands all shera is doing for the tribe and how her father is not even supporting shera or grateful for all she has done for the tribe. How could be support tasha, does he not see the pain in his daughters eyes?😭
  • Tears begin to flow down the crinkled cheeks of the old man, as he recalls the fallen pride of his tribe in agony "I don't see any end to this? you have made us become permanently bonded slaves to Rajkumar Agni?" this made be 😭😭😭 as they feel so helpless and want to break free of agni.
  • how dare he raise he be so rude to shera and bless her she stops her father from raising his hand.😡😡😡 I like how she treats baba with so much respect and is protective of the tribe.🤗
  • "You always end up creating a scene Shera. Anyway; as the daughter of the head of this tribe, it is your duty to ensure the tribe's safety and do whatever Rajkumar Agni orders you to!" how dare he say that, gaadha kaha ka, its his fault that everyone is suffering and he is blaming shera for creating a scene. It is his duty to look after the tribe not shera.😭
  • "You have become very proud of yourself Shera? and increasingly disrespectful towards your father too?shame on you? " someone beat this guy, he is such a trouble maker and likes to stir problems😡😡😡
  • Me like manu, he is so sweet as he wants to protect shera. Radha why did you stop him, that tasha deserve a big rock thrown at him.🤗🤗🤗
  • "Instead of having a daughter like you, if only I had been blessed with a supportive son like Tasha?" my god me was 😡how could he say this, shera is your daughter and she has done so much for the tribe even though her conscience is hurting her. 😭 The tribe would not have survived if it were not for her. He should be thanking god that he has such a lovely daughter.
  • "Other fathers take care of their daughters; while I support my father, who drinks and gambles. I don't have the fortune to enjoy ma's handmade food; on the contrary, I am busy feeding my tribe. Other girls my age spend their time visiting fairs to buy delicate jewellery for their hands, while here I am burning my hands in the coal and smithy. Yet, he would prefer to have a worthless person like Tasha for a son!" me was 😭😭😭 she is so true, it is sardars responsibility to look after shera. I feel her pain when she says that she cannot be like a normal girl who goes out shopping because she is too busy worrying about how to feed the tribe. 😭😭
  • I felt the pain of old ladies as they understand what shera is going through. 😭😭She is so strong as the minute she sees the old lady crying she forgets her own pain, goes to support her and makes her laugh. You can tell that she is hiding her pain. Me want veer to console shera and support her. 🤗🤗🤗
  • yey me was surprised and happy with sakshi?s entry.🤗 Awww she blushes when shera starts asking how she met him. 😳 Sakshi is not happy with the route they have taken. Dhruv will not be happy if he finds this out😆
  • "Didi... we both were running late... anyway; as long as you are with me, why worry? I love this reply, she is one gem. 😳😳
  • unexpectedly grabs Shera by her wrist Leg go of shera?s hand you drunk fool, she belongs to rajkumar veer. 😡😡😡
  • "Or... what would you do pretty girl... why don't you come along with me..." how dare he say this, me was cursing this guy😡😡
  • Me was totally gripped 👏👏👏 when I was reading this part and was worried as to what is going to happen to them. So well written and very thrilling. 👏👏 Agni?s friends how up and they know shera but still don?t do anything. 😡😡 Even the crowd is not doing anything and just watching.😡😭 Good shera injures him. 😊
  • Shera and Sakshi dodge their advances many times over, in vain hope that someone or something would come to their rescue soonMy heart stopped 😲😲when I read this, I was so worried for them. i can imagine how scared they must be. Sick guys how dare they hold shera?s neck. 😡😡😭 let go of her and sakshi
  • From when did two Shramik girls find the daunt to injure a noble Aryavarth? We will take pleasure in punishing you for this..." get away from them you brutes, do they have no respect? 😡😡Further entangled into the strong hold of the four men, Sakshi and Shera are forcefully hauled away from the streets. Me was 😲😭😭when I read this, so scary situation and no one around them is helping them because they are shramiks.
  • me was so glad when I read this ?Pari responds to the frivolous guffaws of the rowdies, by hollering authoritatively "Before even one of you dares to raise your hand on any one of these girls? you will have to face me first?" I wanted to go and hug pari and applaud at the same time. She is the only brave one who came forward and when all the men just did nothing. She only has a wooden pole and will do anything to save her daughter and shera.🤗
  • Shera is feeling so bad that pari is standing up to these brutes to save her when she has been sent by agni to find out more information on them. how dare that guy push pari violently and then laugh. These men should be shot. 😡😡
  • Smirking at the wounded woman; the men turn back to resume their sport and begin dragging the two protesting girls away from the lane, to destroy them. Me go so scared for shera and sakshi when I read this and than comes a knight in shinning armour dressed in emerald green on a white horse❤️. Me was like yey shera and sakshi will be saved.😍 Kya entry mari hai veer nee ke me is still recovering from it 😍
  • Sakshi is happy to see her brother and shera is just happy to be saved.😆 Veer looks ready to kill anyone after he sees pari hurt so badly and the state of shera and sakshi. I can feel his rage. He adjusts his rings like he is getting prepared to strangle life out of all the men. Go veer.
  • "We were only bringing them to justice, like is normally done..." they do not deserve to be punished, they have not done anything wrong. Its you sick guys who are at fault.😡😡
  • me like it when veer asks them for their story👏👏, it is so sad that these guys have been harassing many women because they are shramiks.😡😡The crowd know they are in trouble and decide to walk away, cowards.
  • I shall teach you such a lesson that you would never think of raising your eyes or hands on any girl or woman in future... ever!" Go veer 😍our hero is going to teach them a lesson they will never forget. I like how he respects women. He is so ready to let go off that anger. Sakshi is scared of the bhaigan bharta made of the men by veer and lool when the guys look to shera for help she gives a soft vindictive smile. Good they deserve it👏
  • Veer surveys the now sober injured men around him, moaning and wailing in pain. What a fight by veer, everyone is scared around him. Lool shera informs veer of the four men who are trying to get away😆😆😆
  • Veer proudly wipes the blood off his sword with the expensive garment and confesses calmly "Actually, I don't want such sinful blood staining even the edge of my blade..." my god this scene is too good, 😳I can feel the chill in the air, the guys must be so scared 😆and where goes up to them so calmly and worried the blood ruining his blade. Shera is so entertained by this and is trying to hide her giggles. Me like to see her happy and giggly🤗

me cannot stop reading the part again and again🤗. will be back with more comments.

lots of hugs 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
lashy me back with more comments😆 Excuse the formatting, i tried many times to post my comments but it kept crashing😭
what i loved :
  • I like how veer questions the soldier as to why nothing has been done to protect the women. Me was when he said that 15 soldiers will be posted soon.👏👏
  • How he rushes to help sakshi and pari and wants to drop them hope. Sakshi was so proud of veer that she said aloud my brave brother and veer does not realise that what she meant.😊 Pari's response that she cannot mount a horse, which veer did not realise.😆 Pari must be so proud of her son👏👏
  • shera thanking pari is so sweet 🤗🤗🤗but at the same time she is feeling guilty.😭 Me love pari's response and when she says to thank veer me was.🤗🤗 You can feel the silence around them when shera says thanks to veer but he is not even looking in her direction 😭
  • "Rajkumar Veer you wanted to offer us your help...you could actually help Shera... she had to go to Mirgaon to purchase some essential materials for her shop, but she has missed the tanga now... she is all alone too!" lool veer certainly was not expecting to extend his help offer to shera.😆😆
  • "No maaji... she knows... I mean... I... I have some work to attend to..." loooool he is so trying to avoid travelling with shera and me looking forward to it😆😆
  • "Maaji... if that thug was not as fat as he was, don't you think I could have just dealt with him all by myself?" shera is too clever, she knows that veer is avoiding her and her reply is 😆😆
  • Watching her rub her arms as though to comfort herself; the nobility in the proud prince's nature makes him gradually perceive that she might still be disturbed, after the horrifying ordeal. awww shera 😭😭😭I like even though veer is angry with her he realises how shera must be feeling after the ordeal. 😊👏👏He is thinking why did I have to send the soldiers away and now I have to take shera with me.
  • Veer grumbles repulsively "Just climb on…"Giggling at his tone; the amused girl enquires "Rajkumar Veer, are you offering me or ordering me?"😆😆 veer is telling her to climb on like how is giving a soldier his marching orders. I am sure in the near future shera will make him understand the difference between order and offer.😳😳
  • Shera teases him "I generally never reject offers… and I generally never accept orders…but everything is an exception in your case Rajkumar Veer..." wow this dialogue was😍. she likes teasing veer. See veer for you shera will make an exception as she knows you just like giving orders. she is one lethal woman 😍
  • he sarcastically offers "I am offering you, O great maiden... please do mount my..." looooooool veer you know you have met your match so just realise this now and do what shera says. 😆😆 You could at help shera mount the horse, she did it all by herself. Even though he does not trust shera he will make sure she gets to the devi temple safely. 😍
  • "Just in this one instance alone...only...only if you found yourself losing your balance...y...y...you could hold on to my s...shoulder for support..." kitna bada ehsaan kiya tumne veer,😆 that only if she falls she can hold on to your shoulder 😆 me was like yey 😍😍😍 they are travelling together on the horse and wish there are more bumps on the road so shera can hold on to his shoulder for support.😳 Aww shera is sitting away from you as she knows that you are not happy about her travelling with you 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago

Wowwwwwwwwww shrads!!!!!!!!!!!

Love u love u love uuuuu…….. for this awesome part…

Wow what a description of morning at shramik's basti… u have captured each n every moment…

Shera's fathe r is really very untolerable person.. he doesn't know what is he doing with his daughter's life..i think he doesn't care..all he cares for is only money… earned by shera who is earning to feed elderly members…

N who the hell this tasha is..who is questioning to shera?? He is the most irritate person.. who always do chamchagiri to shera's dad… n he cant even do anything without shera.. in actual its ur writing who made me to hate this character…hats off to u shrads… jo story me bhi tum itna reality la sakti ho….!!!!!

Ohh god tasha is trying her to feel bad abt whatever she did with her friend n promised agni to incriminate her family n veer … ohh god..koi uska muh bandh karao…

But I like shera's answer… tasha jo bas chatar patar karna janta hai..khud to kuchh karta nahi n shera se ans maangne aa gaya…gud going girll..gud answer…" Pick up the tools... start working. Prove your efficiency and I shall gladly hand over the responsibility to you..."

Ohh…. Shera's father thinks shera is unhappy abt having listen to agni's order… yeah its true because she is gud at heart….!!!!

Ohh but agni paid his all debt so now he is working for agni… n shera ko bhi uski marzi ke khilaaf kam karva raha hai…how mean…!!

Wow…atleast some one came to support shera… achha hua uss lady ne hsera ke baab ko suna diya…"Sardar, you are more than aware that Rajkumar Agni did not clear our debts out of pity. The only reason that our debts were cleared was because the Rajkumar was smitten by Shera from the very moment he saw her at the Chatarpur-Niphaud border few months ago. All he wanted was for this beautiful girl to be under his control. Realizing her capabilities when he met her; he wanted her to work for him, as his slave. Now he is misusing her to carry out all his devious deeds. Being her father; you don't even mind, as you've received your money!"….

So this is the main reason why agni helped shera's father..but use kaha koi fark padne wala hai… he is a heartless person..jo sirf shera ke paiso se enjoy karna chahta hai… I m hating this man…really!!!

Poor shera..she still tried to stop that lady… she knows she is saying the truth but still she doesn't want to create any issue...!!!

Ohh god …. Shera's father also insulted ex head of the tribe… when he said the truth… because of shera's father so many young men has died or have fled from their tribe for good… so ye sab shera ke father ki galati ki vajah se hua.. he is responsible for all these..n shera is paying for that n also the whole tribe… her father is the one who couldn't fufill his duty as the head of tribe…

The old man said true…shera's fathe made them permanently slaves to agni…!!

n tasha came to support shera's father n blamed her for this issue… in fact she didn't do anything..its her father who created the scene…but how could he say anything to shera..!! he doesn't have any rights for that… n her father… ignoring shera's deeds n says," Instead of having a daughter like you, if only I had been blessed with a supportive son like Tasha…"… how could he say this to his own daughter ????

ohhh god.. finally shera's words… "Other fathers take care of their daughters; while I support my father, who drinks and gambles. I don't have the fortune to enjoy ma's handmade food; on the contrary, I am busy feeding my tribe. Other girls my age spend their time visiting fairs to buy delicate jewellery for their hands, while here I am burning my hands in the coal and smithy. Yet, he would prefer to have a worthless person like Tasha for a son!"….

really yaar….. her father doesn't care for her a bit….how mean..jo apni beti ke paiso pe raaj karta hai….!!!

Awwww I like this part betwn chachi n shera..that poor lady…she is very concerned abt shera… she wants her not to involve in such a dangerous game…but shera kya kar sakti hai?? Uske khud ke father hi nahi samaj rahe use to who kya kar sakti hai???

Wow..shrads kya description deti ho tum street ki bhi…!!! Jaise aankhon ke saamne sach me ki street khdi ho jati hai…!!!!gud one dear….

So sakshi n shera r going for shopping for sakshi's marriage!!! …

I must say shera is soo attractive…koi bhi use dekhne ka mauka nahi chhodta…oooohhhhh!!!!

I liked sakshi n shera's pic shrads..hmm.. gud one dear….

Wow….shera ask her abt dhruv…very cute scene betwn themmm..hmm…friends cum wud be sisters in- law…hahahhahaha!!!!!!

Ohhh shera is also talking so much like veer..chatar patar..kitne questions kar diye usne do min. me!!!

So sakshi is telling her abt her n dhruv's first meeting…wow… really cutu scene… I like this scene betwn them as it showed closeness betwn two frnds!!!

Ohh god shera kisi ki sunti hi nahi..sakhi ne manaa kiya fir bhi who unsafe raaste se hi jana chati hai….so shera joke bhi kar leti hai..hahahh gud for her… but she wants to take that route because she didn't want to miss her tanga to miragaon…

Ohhh god so sakshi's fear came true… they both trapped there.. by that ugly drunken man!!!ohh god..he grabs shera's hand… n asked her to leave but that man..urrghhhh… n he mishaved with her…n sakshi also requested to him to let them go… ohhh,… n ohh god…/agni's frnd are also there..but what is this??they r not there to help them but they r also the part of that drunken n ugly man!!! Ohhh so shera tried to harm them by her knife…but…ohh god…both girl r seriously trapped… n they grabs sakhi by her arms n shera by her neck…!!!!!!!! Ohh nooo…

Ohh…so pari came there…I loved the way she came there.. her dialogue..her concerned abt both girls…!!!!too gud yaar…but those villains…use bhi hurt kiya…goshhh…poor pari..

Ohh noo..pari n sakshi ko le ja rahe hai….i want to kill those men…

Wowwwwwwwwww…veer ne kya entry mari..hailaaaaa….youngest of the princes….aaahhhaaaa….

Chalo veer ko dekhte hi sakshi ki jaan me jaan aayi..kya relief mila use apne bhai ko dekhkar…!!!!even shera also rejoiced as she saw veer n possibility of their escape..n agni's frnds bhi shocked rah gaye,…abb mar gaye bachhe log….!!!

Arre wah veer ne ek hi nazar me sab notice bhi kar liya ki waha pe kya hua hoga!!! …like real prince… warning de di..leave those two girls…accompany me to prison….i loved his attitude!!! Mashaallah…..

Heheh..unka kya clearification ki…aryavrats ko insult mat karo shramik girls ke liye…n blamed her ki usne unhe hurt kiya..jhutha kahi ka…..veer knows he is lying.. chalo achha hua sakshi ne bhi clarify kar diya..n truth se aware kar diya veer ko ki how dangerous that route is for girls n women…

N ye kya??those villains disrespectfully walk away from the scene????how dare they avoid to veer's order???..wow…veer ne pakad ke accha suna diya usko…ki aryavrats hone se who kisi shramik ko aise harm karne ka hak nahi rakhte…soo true..

But ye kya??one of them tried to attack veer?? Ohh…haaashh veer ne bacha liya apne aap ko….n I love the way describe each n every single par of their fight… love u shrads…only u can create this magic jaan… I felt sab meri aankhon ke saamne ho raha hai!!!!!

Shera ne bhi finally catch kar liye kuchh badmash ko…"Four men over there… I think they are trying to escape..." she pauses to try and catch Veer's attention again "R...R...Rajkumar Veer..." chalo kuchh to boli hamari sherni hamare sher ke saamne…!!!!

I loved the way veer walked to them n asked for their shawl n wipes off his sword ….heheheh…so funny…. Actually, I don't want such sinful blood staining even the edge of my blade..."….just awesome…..!!! he is rocking by his attitude….

Having curiously watched their interactions so far; Shera becomes entertained by this retribution to Agni's friends and conceals her face with her veil to stifle her first genuine giggle in many days. ….Shera…the naughty girl is back again!!!!

"It was by chance that I was returning from our official meeting and passing by a parallel street, when I was alerted of the problem here. The people here claim that this street or area is very unsafe for girls and women to use even in broad daylight. If there are horrible incidents happening like this always , why isn't there any security here?"….prince ki duty bhi ache se karne laga veer… hmm…responsibility badh gayi hai…n who to war ke during dikha hi diya hai usne!!!

Gud decision….kuchh soldiers ko waha pe 24hrs hona hi chahiye…gud point….!!!

Wow…veer ruses towards pari n sakshi…he is so caring yaar….

N wow…jab sakshi tried to thanks to him…kitne pyaar se manaa kar diya…don't even think of thanking me… aaawwwww… n he also offered them to drop at their place..as pari ws injured n she needs medicine!!!

Again recalling all the incidents of that noon; the moved Sakshi gazes at her brother and mutters to herself with immense pride "My saviour…my brave brother..."

Smiling in reply; Veer remains mum, not catching the full purport of what she meant…….awww…agar veer sab sun leta to I mean uske kehne ka matlab…????

But pari denied for his offer.. as sakshi ws also with her….n their ws not so far..

Shera…hhhehehe…who directly veer ko thanks nahi keh payi so pari kehne lagi..achha hua pari keh diya ki veer ko thanks bolo…hehehhe,,

Wow…kya ghurur hai veer ka….

Keeping up formalities; Shera shows her gratitude to the prince, aware that he had deliberately not looked in her direction, even once so far "Thank you for everything Rajkumar Veer"….n veer ne dekha bhi nahi..hahahhah…

N ye phansa veer…abb kaha jaogo bachhe….!!!!! Pari asked him to drop shera to miragaon…..!!!!!!!!love u pari for this…hahahaha…actually love u shrads…..ab her line me love u likhna padega!!!!ahahhahahahha…

Veer….answerd…I hv some work to attend to..hahah… kya karu me? Kaha jau?? Yaha se bahar kaise nikalu?yahi sab chal raha hoga na uske mann me???hahhhaa..aur ye lo shera bhi aa gayi use support karne.. "I think what Rajkumar Veer means to say is that I should be able to manage by myself" she adds with a smile "Maaji... if that thug was not as fat as he was, don't you think I could have just dealt with him all by myself?"….n saath me apni taarif bhi kar hi di…bahot smart hai….!!!!

Pari n sakshi left from there..

the nobility in the proud prince's nature,,,,….he is really noble prince…shera ko hurt hua dekha to helpkarne chala gaya as he still so much angry with her…hehehe veer..koi soldier ya guard nahi hai..tumhe khud hi uski helpkarni hogi…hahaahah…kya timing hai…isi time pew aha koi nahi hai!!! Love u shrads…..!!!!,,shera..samaj gayi veer ki dilemaa….

But veer…hailaa…..offer kar raha hai ya order kar raha hai… just climb on……ahhahahhahahhahn

N shrads… RT ki attitude n agry young man ki kya pic lagayi hai…muaaahhhhh for that….my nonu baby!!!!

Shera bhi kam nahi hai…hahahha…"Rajkumar Veer, are you offering me or ordering me?"

Irritated by her provocative questions, Veer frowns "Whichever…whatever … both… what difference does it make…"

Ahhahaahha…whatever…..hahhahaah….

Shera answerd well on his style…hahah…veer ko acche se de di…"I generally never reject offers… and I generally never accept orders…but everything is an exception in your case Rajkumar Veer..."

Ohh god..veer slaps his forhead as he remembered his meeting with dharm…"I am offering you, O great maiden... please do mount my..."…hahahha/…shera must be in shock…aaj ise kyaho gaya?? Ye suraj kaha se nikala???

N befor he complete his sentence , she hd already mountained a top his horse…veer is surprised..aahhahaha….

Veer ne apna frustration akhir bahar nikal hi diya ki who apni marzi ke khilaf use ride de raha hai….n its his duty…he haven't forgiven her yet…he is not pleased to share his horse with her,,,..etc…

But I loved this line shrads…….hehehheeh becharaa veer….. he ascertains with great difficulty "Just in this one instance alone...only...only if you found yourself losing your balance...y...y...you could hold on to my s...shoulder for support..."….kitni difficulty hui hogi use itna bolne me…!!!!!!!hahaahah……

Shera ne bhi maafi maang li…yup she shud… but she didn't complete her comments…n veer ws surprised….heheheheh…

Wow…veer ne notice kiya ki shera ne use distance banaye rakha puri ourney me… who first time ride kar rahi thi tab bhi…!!!!!!!!!!! Love u shrads….. accha point liya…. Kam se kam ek khubi to nazar aa gayi veer ko..shayad…

Their silence spoke…awwww

The only thing remarkable during the entire length of the duo's fleeting journey is the prominent ambiance of a forced silence between the two.

Ohh no bechara veer fir se fans gaya….god….. lustrous golden royal chariot housing the king, followed by the lordly palanquins of the two queens….. n veer ne shera ko bhagne ko kaha…hahhhhahhahaha…..

But finally sab ne unhe dekh I liya…abb tumhara kya hogaa veer???

Shera stopped… unable to abruptly leave the presence of the king due to decorum and respect…she is really very nice girl at heart I must say…..

Nivi recognized shera….awwww….when she came to see veer….

Shera bows her offer to queens too…wow…but when she saw dharma…her smile softens .. n she apologize to him by her misty eyes..sooo sweet yaar…. Love u shrads!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love dharma n shera's pic… jaise dharma sach me hi shera ki dekhkar pareshaan ho gaya hao….

So what can I say shrads….. awesome, fantastic, mindblowing…….. love u love u love u a lot for this lovely n v v v v v v sweet part….. hope to see VS romance too in next few parts….hehehehe…train bhagne lagi na maeri????

Me waiting shrads for the next part…..hope u post it soon….

Thanks sweeti, my cutie pie…. For this lovely part………love u……!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
me back again with comments 😆😆
what i loved :
    Veer brings the horse to a screeching halt, rattling Shera's otherwise unruffled composure. typical veer, could he not make the horse stop slowly without rattling shera. One day she will rattle you and me will be 😆😆😆 "Leave...now... leave at once... disappear from here as soon as you can... go..." the minute he sees the king and everyone he is like leave now. Whatever happened to asking her nicely to go. dont you know that shera does not like orders. 😆😆 Oh no the whole of your sasural shera has seen you and are thinking who is this lovely girl. 😳😳 Annoyed by his cursed fate; Veer takes a few moments to react, and then watches in dread, as Shera responds to the king's decree and boldly paces towards the royal retinue. i can just imagine the questions they are going to ask veer, who is she, where did you meet her etc 😆😆 Be ready for some grilling veer sasuma has recognised shera from their last meeting. 😳😊
  • dharam is not happy and shera is trying to apolgosie to him for his support to her before.
this part was thrilling👏👏👏, full of emotions on what happened to shera 😭😭and sakshi,😭 😭the pain shera is going through😭, veers magnificent entry,😍 😍their scenes together 😍😍😍and lastly meeting the inlaws 👏
Me so looking forward to the next part and seeing what happens between the in-laws and shera😳😳, siya and dharam and dhruv and sakshi. 🤗
love you lots and lots of hugs from us 🤗
Edited by divareena - 17 years ago

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