FF:Back to Newton's Laws-2...part 32 - Page 30

Hey, NJ, u know what you got to stop apologising and asking if the part is bearable, u seriously need to know how good u are!! dont need to worry even if you delay your parts, because you make up with them, epecially if they are like the last 3 parts you have written, and also the parts arent being dragged either - your just showing the charaters in more detail which is what i love about your ff writing style till date!!

anyways coming back to the ff and part 21: from the starting scene where Armaan fiddles with her hair and clip, and then finally gives up - that was so adorable.

Ridz - she too funny and cute! even with the cold, she still trying to get hold of Armaan to try and sort the misunderstanding that has been created, just loved the little sneezes! 😉

then the conversation between father and son, aww that was sweet, atleast he now knows some truth in the matter!! 😃

contine soon waiting for it (patiently!!) 😆 😆

Love Sania 😳

Woah, she's safe but all is still not well in paradise 😉 I absolutely loved the scene with Armaan and Ridz-so tender and pristine 😍 Pity she was asleep. Well atleast Chris is able to see things and not react impulsively. And I am glad you are inspired by Ekta's anything-to-keep-the-lover's-away-syndrome. I hope I can dream of a heart-warming and passionate reunion 😉

great part!! 👏 i loved the father-son moment.. im hope chris' words will make armaan take her call!! please continue soon..cant wait to read the patch up! 😳

Avanti

WOW! 👏 👏 I just caught up with your last few updated parts...great job again...I've been on the edge of my seat! the mix of emotions that Armaan goes through is just so...just so...just so absorbing and touching..I don't know what word to use..but hopefully you get what I'm trying to say! 😆
oh I feel so bad for Ridz and Armaan...love can be a test. I'm looking forward to the patch up! 😊

Shweta

Originally posted by: armaanaddict

bearable??? omg NJ!!! u really have to give urself more credit than that!!! my fav part in this update was where he finds her sitting by the car and he stares at her.. and does all these things to her and she doesn't realize a thing... it was wayyy too adorable of a scene!!! and it was completely imaginable too... like the part where he says even in her sleep she doesn't let me have it my way...
i liked the talk between chris and armaan... and i was sooo happy that even though it's just a little bit... at least armaan knows some of the truth... and he's a lot closer to the real thing than he was...
it was good seeing riddhima back to her usual self.. well kinda.. and she was acting like she normally would around everyone... but when they left she just had to find her phone and call him.. i love that about her character..!
there was so much concern from everyone in this part... armaan was concerned for riddhima at the beginning when he found her in deep sleep like that... everyone was concerned for riddhima when she woke up... and chris was concerned for armaan when he wouldn't answer riddhima's calls... aryan, minnie.. everyone was so concerned!! lol!
it was a totally natural part.. everyone's reactions came out normal.. and there wasn't any drama whatsoever...
u did it again NJ!! and next time.. don't you even dare say that the part was just bearable! waiting for ur next one!!

thnx hun!!!!!!!its just that the twist lasted a few parts n i was wondering if it was not getting dull....or dragged....lolzzzz glad u like it

Originally posted by: ArmiandRidz4eva

Hey, NJ, u know what you got to stop apologising and asking if the part is bearable, u seriously need to know how good u are!! dont need to worry even if you delay your parts, because you make up with them, epecially if they are like the last 3 parts you have written, and also the parts arent being dragged either - your just showing the charaters in more detail which is what i love about your ff writing style till date!!

anyways coming back to the ff and part 21: from the starting scene where Armaan fiddles with her hair and clip, and then finally gives up - that was so adorable.

Ridz - she too funny and cute! even with the cold, she still trying to get hold of Armaan to try and sort the misunderstanding that has been created, just loved the little sneezes! 😉

then the conversation between father and son, aww that was sweet, atleast he now knows some truth in the matter!! 😃

contine soon waiting for it (patiently!!) 😆 😆

Love Sania 😳

hey san thnx for the wonderful coments n i just wanted to get a general honest feedback if u ppl thot it was getting dragged coz um personally very impatient with twists n so.,.....u know um writing for the lovely ppl who read it n wud love it if they let me know ways to get beter!!!

Originally posted by: hearme21

Woah, she's safe but all is still not well in paradise 😉 I absolutely loved the scene with Armaan and Ridz-so tender and pristine 😍 Pity she was asleep. Well atleast Chris is able to see things and not react impulsively. And I am glad you are inspired by Ekta's anything-to-keep-the-lover's-away-syndrome. I hope I can dream of a heart-warming and passionate reunion 😉

hey i hope u meant um not inspired by that syndrome!!!!um assuming that was atypo!!! 😉
newaz yeh wil try my best to make the patch up worth the wait€!!!!

Originally posted by: forevercharmed

great part!! 👏 i loved the father-son moment.. im hope chris' words will make armaan take her call!! please continue soon..cant wait to read the patch up! 😳

Avanti

hey avanti glad u liking the parts....will try to keep the track sane n fun to read!!!!!

Originally posted by: pyaridilwalino1

WOW! 👏 👏 I just caught up with your last few updated parts...great job again...I've been on the edge of my seat! the mix of emotions that Armaan goes through is just so...just so...just so absorbing and touching..I don't know what word to use..but hopefully you get what I'm trying to say! 😆
oh I feel so bad for Ridz and Armaan...love can be a test. I'm looking forward to the patch up! 😊

Shweta

thnx hun....will update asap!!!!!!!!

omg it waz simply mindblowin now i realli wanna knoe armaans reaction ..and also paddys ...wen r u updating hv u started da other part? 😊