FF:Back to Newton's Laws-2...part 32 - Page 29

Originally posted by: er.Sheetal

Part18

Hey NJ...
i liked d Mehndi scene a lot... especially Armaan's attempt to b a Hairdresser... 😆 very cute... 😳

Confusion created by Padma aunty was as i expected... I dont have much to say about dis particular part as it was d most EXPECTED SHOCK... 😡

i felt sad for both Minnie & Armaan... hope it doesnt create a MISUNDERSTAING between AR or AM... Chris uncle was quite obvious to get worried... i love him...

i m gonna read part 19 now... i know most of it is gonna have Sad things in it & i m also expecting to read an excellent FATHER-SON conversation...


- Sheetal

hey sheetal!!! thanx for the nice detailed analysis like alwaz...they are an insight for me as a writer....n no dear, i dint think ur reply was at all offensive for the twist part....its hard to think alike for 2 different ppl on all accounts and i appreciate u all telling me what u like n what u dont....welcome all that it helps me improve !!!

well but now that the twist is there, i dont want to wrap it up in an unjustified manner, so its taking a few parts, hope u can bear with me till then!!!

wow the father peep talk!! 👏

Nothing wrong with the pace dont fret this coming along nicely! 😉

Love Kat

wooooow wmotional luved da realtionship beween fathr n son very ncly shown luvin ur ff n it can nevr b bad god say dat once mre n im flyin ovr to america 😆 lool really nce updte as uusaul updte sooon n thx 4 da pm as usual luv niz x

yayyy at least he knows some truth, poor ridzi, give her some dayquil/nyquil it works for me 😃 as always loved armaan concern and each movement when he found her near the car, the stroll part the covering her in his arms the clip awwww hes just choooooooo cute 😳 😳 😳

to be hoenst, i think the way hes getting to know about the truth and his queries and all came out in a very natural way, and not too much drama with him finsing out after she has gone somewhere or something, i really enjoyed this part 😃 good job hun 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Catwoman

wow the father peep talk!! 👏

Nothing wrong with the pace dont fret this coming along nicely! 😉

Love Kat

😊 yay!!!!!glad u like it kat!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

wooooow wmotional luved da realtionship beween fathr n son very ncly shown luvin ur ff n it can nevr b bad god say dat once mre n im flyin ovr to america 😆 lool really nce updte as uusaul updte sooon n thx 4 da pm as usual luv niz x

thnx a ton niz!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: cheen2005

yayyy at least he knows some truth, poor ridzi, give her some dayquil/nyquil it works for me 😃 as always loved armaan concern and each movement when he found her near the car, the stroll part the covering her in his arms the clip awwww hes just choooooooo cute 😳 😳 😳

to be hoenst, i think the way hes getting to know about the truth and his queries and all came out in a very natural way, and not too much drama with him finsing out after she has gone somewhere or something, i really enjoyed this part 😃 good job hun 👏 👏 👏

jee thnx hun!!!!!!! 😳 😳

was waitin for it 😃 😃

absolutely adored the part where he sat next to her n proceeded to disturb her sleep in a 100 different ways...only our benz jr can romance a dead to the world sleeping like a log ridzy...now dats charm..loved it.

ma poor ridzys got a cold..acheww..armaan to da rescue???

the convo with chris..the wat he explained everythn to him...where do u get men like these???..k im committed to chris...
he seems to know xactly wat to say n do..hayye..
wonder if he can xplain the mysterious working of da CLIP..

LOVED IT..n u couldnt drag it if u tried..

lv deepika

Originally posted by: d101

was waitin for it 😃 😃

absolutely adored the part where he sat next to her n proceeded to disturb her sleep in a 100 different ways...only our benz jr can romance a dead to the world sleeping like a log ridzy...now dats charm..loved it.

ma poor ridzys got a cold..acheww..armaan to da rescue???

the convo with chris..the wat he explained everythn to him...where do u get men like these???..k im committed to chris...
he seems to know xactly wat to say n do..hayye..
wonder if he can xplain the mysterious working of da CLIP..

LOVED IT..n u couldnt drag it if u tried..

lv deepika

thnx hun!!!aaccheww!!! actually me down with my sinus cold, so i thot il get ridzi to gime company!!!!!!!!!

n yeh now that u mention it, chris shud help armaan with the clip!!!!!!!!!perhaps sasur ji will have test for him to prove he the guy not aryan, it may include hairstyling armi needs to learn!!!!!!!!!!

bearable??? omg NJ!!! u really have to give urself more credit than that!!! my fav part in this update was where he finds her sitting by the car and he stares at her.. and does all these things to her and she doesn't realize a thing... it was wayyy too adorable of a scene!!! and it was completely imaginable too... like the part where he says even in her sleep she doesn't let me have it my way...
i liked the talk between chris and armaan... and i was sooo happy that even though it's just a little bit... at least armaan knows some of the truth... and he's a lot closer to the real thing than he was...
it was good seeing riddhima back to her usual self.. well kinda.. and she was acting like she normally would around everyone... but when they left she just had to find her phone and call him.. i love that about her character..!
there was so much concern from everyone in this part... armaan was concerned for riddhima at the beginning when he found her in deep sleep like that... everyone was concerned for riddhima when she woke up... and chris was concerned for armaan when he wouldn't answer riddhima's calls... aryan, minnie.. everyone was so concerned!! lol!
it was a totally natural part.. everyone's reactions came out normal.. and there wasn't any drama whatsoever...
u did it again NJ!! and next time.. don't you even dare say that the part was just bearable! waiting for ur next one!!