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Posted: 17 years ago

Guys plz continue!! 😭

Dis ff is liek dead! 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
haha...lagta hain is ff ko bhi kisi ki nazar lag gayi...
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Posted: 17 years ago
k so nobody is continuing so i will continue!

but somebody will continue after me!
what if shilpa left we will not leave this fan fiction unfinished!
we want her rIght!
so then we will have it and it will be by writing this fan fiction!
come on we also have shilpa (riddhima) in this fan fiction and she wants as much as we want her in this fan fiction....



SO plz dont feel depressed!

SO CHEER UPPPPPPPPPPP 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
R: ok so lets go then!
A: cholo phir...
R: acha armaan arima ko le ke gaadi me jao mein uske kuch saman pack kar leti hoon (you have baby needs little toys to play with dippers etc)
A: okay....he takes riddhima in her basket..
A: chale princess....(he says with a broad smiled and arima smiled broadly)
He goes and meanwhile riddhima packes some stuff and comes down.
she comes by car where armaan is holding arima who is crying and swaying her and talking like riddhima talks to arima when she cries ...but it seems like not working.
riddhima comes and takes arima from armaan.
R: alle mera bacha! kya hua aap ko...(SHE talked babyish which armaan loved. he loved the way she dealed with arima which he tried to do but failed miserably)
A: riddhima arima ro kyun rahi hai...
R: are aise bache ko chup karvao ge ko woh kya kareghi...
A: kya! tumhe pata hai mein kitne aache tarah se usko chuo kara raha tha oar tum ah padi...(he knew he was lying and also riddhima)
R: haan haan pata hai...(she said jokingly)
A: ok i give up...i know i sucked but you know i will be better as i spend time with my princess...(he looked at arims who was smiling by now and kissed her forehead and then riddhima's)
A: but you know what i love it when mumma riddhima does to keep her quite
riddhims blushes and looked away.

both sit on car then and goes to do shopping...
they go to each and every store...then bought so much stuff for arima. toys, clothes, shoes, clips, every thing.
armaan was buying everything for his princess and he was still not done. riddhima had to stop him for buying more as it was to much.

A: are dekho riddhima kitna cute hai woh frock...chalo use lelate hai...
armaan started to go toward that store with arima in his hands but riddhima stopped him...
R: nahin armaan hum woh nahin le sakte...and no more shopping
A: par kyun (confuseD)
R: armaan it is for 2 year kid not 20 says baby)
A: par..
R: no par-shar...we are going home NOW...is it clear MR. MALIK..(she said likE a strict teached)
A: YES MAaM...

both went to their and sat on car and headed toward their house...
riddhima was looking at arima who was also playing with her toy...and armaan was paying more attention to his wife and kid then the road (as usual)

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Posted: 17 years ago
cul part..afer so long...sb continue na...i tried an attempt...bt my mind is jst nt wrking...jst wke up frm sleep...
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Posted: 17 years ago

ok guys this part was written by coolridz(ridhi) & i m just posting it



now armaan riddhiam reach their house
A:riddhima mere khayal se humne aaj kuch shopping hi nahi ki arima ke liye
R:armaan tumne aaj itni shopping ki arima ke liye aur keh rahe ho ki kuch shoppinh hi nahi ki
A:dekho na riddhima hamne sirf kuch hi saaman kharedha hai arima ke liye
R:armaan waise toh jab main shopping karthi hoon tum oh no oh no karthe rehthe ho aur abh arima ke liye itni shopping karne ke baad keh rahe ho kuch shopping hi nahi ki
A:arima choti bacchi hai uske liye jitni bhi shopping karo woh bahut kam hai aur tumhare liye toh sirf selecion mein hi time chale jaata hai
R:ohhh this is not fair armaan tum mujhse baat mat karo(acting)
A:awww tum mujhse naraaz ho abhi dekhatha hoon main tumhe
riddhima starts running
Armaan keeps angel in the cot and runs behind Ridz.
A: riddhima ruk jao riddhima. Main tumhe kha thodi na jaunga.
R: ridz shows her tongue to tease him.
A: hey basket ruk jao na.
R: pakad ke dikhao.
A: achha abhi batata ridhima ki bachhi.
R: pakdo pakdo mujhe.
A: (to himself) ma ban chuki hai par bachpana abhi tak gaya nahi. Lekin phir bhi jaisi hai mujhe vaisi hi pasand hai. Aakhir meri jaan hai meri riddhima. Then cums the stairs.
A: jaan dheere chalo varna gir jaogi. Ridz ahista pls.
R: taki tum mujhe pakad sako, hai na? Bilkul nahi.
A: Dekho riddhima meri baat suno pls dheere chalo varna tum gir jaogi jaan. Pls listen to me damnit!
R: nahi. Main achhi tarah janti hu tumhe kya chahiye.
A:mujhe kuch nahi..... but before he cud complete his statement ridz sandal got stuck in the carpet and she went tumbling down the stairs. A: Riddhimaaaa... He quickly ran down. Blood was flowing all over the face. She had got hurt on her head and became unconcious.
A: Tumhe kuchh nahi hoga riddhima tumhe kuch nahi hoga. Tears started flowing out of his eyes. He picked her up in her strong arms and kept her in the backseat of the car and drove as fast as posible. In sanjeevani
A: dr. Kirti dekhye na ridz ko kya hogaya.
K: mujhe dekhne do.
A: dr. Kirti bataiye ne, kuch serious to nahi hai na.
K: dekho armaan koi gabhranewali baat nai hai. Ha par khun bahut beh chuka hai aur blood bank me unka grup available nai hai. Jald se jald khun ka intezaam karna hoga.
A: dr. Mera aur ridz ka blud grup same hai. Main dunga use blud.
K: thik hai chaliye mere saath. After sumtime
K- ab wo bilkul thik hai. Thodi der me unhe hosh aajayega. Aap unse mil sakte hai.
A-thanks dr. Kirti. Thank u very much. Armaan goes inside. Ridz ko hosh aata hai.
A- very angrily but also caringly-maine tumhe kitni baar mana kiya tha na tez jaane se. Nahi, lekin tum to hamesha apni hi manmani karti ho. Meri baat to kabhi sunti nai. Mere baare me nahi to kumsekum
apni bachi ke baare me to socha karo.
Ridz is listening to him carefuly wid an innocent face.
A- ab kyu aise chup chap baithi ho,kuch kehti kyu nahi.
R- wo armaan.... wo
A- wo wo kya ridhima. (now in a sincere tone) kabhi socha hai riddhima agar tumhe kuch ho jaate to mera kya hota...arima ka kya hota.
R-crying I m sorry armaan ainda aisa kuch nai hoga.
A- chalo ab rona band karo varna mai bhi ro dunga........

Edited by cute_unknown_fr - 17 years ago
yogzz thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
ami & ridhi very nice parts 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwww dat was really cute loool
bt wot happened to arima
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

awwww dat was really cute loool
bt wot happened to arima

hey about arima ridhi will tell

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Posted: 17 years ago
Armaan is such a bad dad he left Arima all alone in the house. Hope nuffin happens to her.

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