Koi Aap Sa (A-K) : Part 43 : page 150! - Page 86

Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great part..finally they confessed 👏 ..continue soon 👏

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Originally posted by: desiqt8806

i juss read ur comment u put on my fan fic about reading my story backwards...to tell u the truth...i did the same thing with urs 😳 😆
lol i did that with quite a few fan fics...i don't know why 😆

neways great part!!!
see i knew that kripa was juss playing a game!! but it was cute!! both confessed and got each other rings!!! awwwwwwww 😳

and then their passionate romance...but sadly it came to a halt because kripa had to recover...but its all good cuz finally their declaration of love is out in the open!! 😆

once again aliyah was too cute and funny!! 😃

greatt part!!!! 😃 👏

and promo...sounds like its something serious...but at the same time...its sounds like they are playing jokes at each other...well i'll get to know when u post a new part 😃

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It interests me more that way…so I read it backwards……because you read something that happens in a part then u wonder.."why did that happen? What was the cause?" so you go backwards and read it again…lol…

Yup…..you make pretty close predictions its awesome….

She just had a miscarriage and then I put in the confession a few parts early because readers were ready to read some romance…so yea…but its alright…im going to leap it until she recovers…because if I write any romantic scenes right now…it will end up being the same thing again..so yea!

You will get to know what happens in the next part but as usual you have another very close prediction..lol….

Originally posted by: desert_rose

Awwwwww ekta....u made my day...finalyyy they confessed ...loved their convo and the dialogues ....really sweet part...!!!love aaliyah's character..shes really cute...she already started teasing kripa..lol...and abt the promo..i am gettin a bit confused...wat does kripa mean by making josh cry...i bet its one of their cute fights..anywayz continue soon and clear the confusion...

and yea...glad to hear tht pia is recovering... continue supporting her...and we'll conitnue praying for her....my best wishes wid her...!!! 😛

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You are right…they JUST confessed and she is already teasing them..lol…

Nice prediction…lets see what happens in the next part!

I wont leave Pia's side…don't worry….i am always with her..and I know your wished are also….

Originally posted by: jdsean

Great part 👏

Loved how they confessed. Loved the words Kripa said to Angad, now hopefully they stay together happy for awhile. Can't wait to see what happened between Kripa and Josh.
Take care 😊

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Kripa was called "unromantic" after the last part….so her romantic-ness was in contrast to that..lol….does that make sense??

Originally posted by: sexy_eyes

I loved this metaphor so much. You are really good with metaphors. Many few people can use the correct time of metaphors at the correct time and use it correctly. If I were to analyze this metaphor I would say that you are comparing Angad's smile with the bright sun which is so cute. Its so true though, his smile is so bright it can make others smile just like the sun makes you smile when it appears from behind those gray clouds. This is a wonderful sentence. Loved it.

Awww….this was so sweet!!! After seeing what she did when he poured his heart out to her, who would have expected that she could say such sweetly romantic things? Again you gave a description of Angad (Iqbal) in your story…he has killing smiles and the eyes that always hold a lot of words in it.

This was also very cute…he always asked her what he wanted to do and he wouldn't do something if he didn't like it….but now Kripa is explaining him that its about the two of them basically saying that its not just about Angad anymore but its about both of them who are one soul in two bodies. Never thought I would say this, but Kripa is pretty romantic..lol.

Aliyah is so naughty….shes so funny…lol. She seems like the chripy one among all six of them….well…its good to have someone like that in your friends group to make sure you have atleast one person who will make you smile, laugh, and in this case, blush…lol…

Angad already not ready to leave her for a minute…that's so cute. Its so amazing that they can talk openly now that they have confessed..I mean, before Angad couldn't really stop her from going away from him could he? But now that he can, He is going to drag Kripa everywhere with him…lol..

So possessive already eh?? I guess it's a good thing…I just hope that she doesn't get over possessive and become insecure about other women being around Angad because that will bring in problems in their perfect relationship im sure!

Um..yea you did..lol…Kripa can take her time recovering….we wont mind but im sure Angad would….😆😆😉

I loved that scene between them. I am glad that they have not lost their friendship bond even after they confessed. Friendship is above all other relationships and its going to make AK relationship stronger than it is..

Alright now….that was an awesome part. You made me blush so much during this. I am still in a daze from all the romance. I wish my boyfriend could be as romantic as Angad…Angad is hopelessly romantic…and its awesome! I love it!

Whats with the promo missy? What does Kripa mean by that? Are going to do something to her? But I have a VERY STRONG feeling that you put that part up in the promo just to scare us and its going to end up in a cute fight between the brother and serious and nothing more. You love to scare us through your promos don't you???

Your fanfic has become a habit now…please don't end it anytime soon..I come home from school and your fanfic is the first thing I check to see if you have updated…lol….crazy I know….but I cant help it…….Its addicting!!

Flawlessly written.👏 Keep up the great work!👏 Will wait for next part anxiously as always….😳😃

Hey!

Thanks! You are back with your long comments again….loved it all. I like the way you analyzed some lines and phrases from the part. Don't worry…you will get someone who loves you as much and is as romantic as Angad..lol…

I like your prediction…and I like building the suspense and curiosity regarding the next part…..thats why my promos are usually scary or confusing..lol….

Dear, concentrate on your school also, don't let this ff become a habit…lol…when it ends….you will have a hard time hun…habits are hard to break….

Updating the next part soon…!

Originally posted by: prem-mukti#1

loved the update! aww angad is so cute.... i wish i find a guy like him! lol! anyways really cant wait for the next update so cont. soon!

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You will find a guy like Angad…for sure!

Will update soon!

Originally posted by: Smileyface

heyy hunn great partt...sorrie i commented all late...kunal wouldnt let me read it yesterdayy...nd todaii i was out all dayy...buh i still love him...i think what he said to pia is the cutest thing he has ever done....okie now to the part...i was sooooooooo happy tht she said yessssss....oooo it was such a nice part i loved it....especially the part where she tell him iits not abt me nemore its abt us...loved tht line....nd the way u described their feelings was ohhh soo cutee...aliya is soo cutee...luv her...angad is also soo adorable...he was like i cant live without u for even two seconds...how cutee...loved it loved it loved it....cant wait for the next part...okie i jus have one request....add more partss of the three grlsss together...those parts are alwayss funniee...especially how the guyss are always surprised by the way they act...lol...and th promo...hmmm...im sure it must be a brother sister thing....and josh must be teasing her nd she prolly got mad...cant wait for the next partt...and oh yeahh tell pia i said hi!!

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Its alright….I haven't updated today yet because I was out as well…..all us friends gathered and went out for the whole day…turned Toronto downtown upside down man..lol…I am glad you liked this part….I hope you kept your promise that you made me. Remember that you had said you will ________________when I make them confess? Did you fulfill that promise missy??

I will try to put in more parts of the 3 girls having fun and all but you see…Anjali is preggy….and is half way through her seventh month….so cant have her too jumpy and bubbly right now….but will try and fit in something.

I like your prediction for the next part…lol…lets see what happens…..updating very soon!

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Part 36:

Angad-Kripa's room before the party:

Kripa: Angad...seedhe khade raho na...

Angad: kyun? mein to apni biwi ko kisses de raha hoon..to phir kyun bandh karu?

Kripa: kyunki mujhe tie baandhne mein mushkil ho rahi hai....

Angad: mein phir se keh raha hoon Kripa...c'mon....lets just stay up here na...

Kripa: Angad...kitne acche bete ho tum......apne mom dad ki 25th anniversary par bhi tum unke saath waqt nahi bitaoge?

Angad: Kripa....apni zindagi ke 20 saal meine unke saath guzare hai...tumhare saath to 20 mahine bhi nahi bita paya abhi tak..

Kripa: dont worry angad...ab puri zindagi mere saath hi rehna padega tumhe....you have no choice..

Angad: i dont want another choice....

Kripa at last managed to knot his tie that she had been trying to work on for the past 20 minutes.

Kripa: tie theek hai?

Angad: nahi...its too loose!

kripa took a step forward and tightened it a bit more.

Angad: its still too loose...

Kripa: Angad...are you trying to get your self strangled by your very own wife?

Angad: maybe...

Kripa rolled her eyes and tightened it a bit more.

Angad: ow ow...Kripa...that's too tight..its choking me!

Kripa: Angad!! Make up your mind! kabhi kehte ho tight hai kabhi kehte ho loose hai...

Angad: agar kahunga ki theek hai.....to tum mujhe akela chod kar taiyaar hone chali jaogi...

Kripa: accha?....aur agar tumne abhi mujhe seedhe seedhe yahan se nahi jaane diya na...to mein sach much mein tumhe chod kar bhaag jaungi...

angad: Kripa..kabhi mere sapne mein bhi aisa mat karna varna main paagal ho jaunga..

Kripa: itna pyaar karte ho mujhse?

Angad: apni jaan se bhi jyada...

kripa: kaafi filmi dialouge hai...lekin ek baat batao...agar tum mujhse itna pyaar karte ho...to kehne mein itni der kyun lagadi?

Angad(circled her waist and brought her closer): i was afraid to lose you...i was ready to live with your friendship but i wasn't ready to lose you at any cost....i wasn't, i'm not, and i never will be......tumhare pyaar ne mujhe deewaana bana diya hai....

Kripa: accha?...ab tumne jo bhi kaha...uss mein se kitna sach tha aur kitne statements mujhe please karne ke liye the..

Angad: chaho to azmaa kar dekh lo....puri duniya mein tumhe mujh jaisa deewaana nahi milega...tumhe mujhse jyada pyaar karne waala nahi milega....aur agar mil gaya...to tum mujhe ussi waqt chod kar jaa sakti ho...mein tumhe nahi rokunga...

Kripa: Mr.Angad Khanna...mujhse itni asaani se peecha nahi chutne waala samjhe? kam se kam agle saath janam tak to mujhe jelna hi padega...

Angad: saat janam to kya Kripa..mein sau janam tak tumhe jelne ko taiyaar hoon...

Kripa smiled and hugged angad to hide her flushed face from him. Angad hid his face in her neck curve and held her tightly.

Kripa: Angad..ab chodoge....mujhe abhi bhi ready hona hai...

Angad reluctantly let her go. Kripa went into the washroom and came out after, to angad what seemed forever, came out wearing a white and blue sari to match completely with Angad's white suit with blue shirt. Angad was absolutely floored by her heavenly beauty. He took steps towards her without taking his eyes off of her in response to which kripa just shyly moved back until she reached the corner of the room. Angad locked her between the wall and his muscular body which pressed against her tiny frame causing her heartbeats to quicken. Kripa's heartbeat was racing at the fastest speed it could reach, somehow, his proximity to her was making her lose control of her own senses. The strong smell of his cologne was driving her absolutely insane. She closed her eyes as her breaths beacame uneven and heavy.

Angad(husky voice): kisi ka katal(murder) karne ka irada hai kya?

Kripa remained silent as she absorbed his warmth through her thin sari and his silk shirt. Angad smiled mischeiviously realizing what effect his promiximity had on Kripa. He gently kissed her lips and moved back, allowing her to breathe. Kripa opened her eyes and wiped the sweat beads off of her forehead and neck.

Angad(smiled): Chale?...

kripa shyly nodded and walked after him. Now that everything was out in the open, Angad hated his empty hands. He grabbed Kripa's hand and locked their fingers as continued walking to their car. The drive to the hall where the party was arranged was quiet. Kripa was too lost in the thoughts of their future together to talk, and angad was too busy driving and looking at her which he did more of.

Angad: kya soch rahi ho?

Kripa: huh??...oh...kuch nahi...bas aise hi....yakeen nahi hota ki yeh sab sach hai...abhi bhi aisa hi lag raha hai jaise mein ek sapna dekh rahi hoon...abhi aankh khulegi aur sab kuch khatam ho jayega...

Angad: tum ladkiyon ki yahi problem hoti hai....ajj se jyada kal ke baare mein jyada sochti hai....aur rahi baat hamari to tum koi sapna nahi dekh rahi ho...

Kripa: haan...lekin kabhi socha na tha ki achanak itna sab kuch...humne pehle bhi iss topic par baat karne ki kitni koshish thi lekin..

Angad: lekin har baar adhuri reh gayi thi...kyun ki kuch logo ne ye sab plan kiya tha?

Kripa: kya? kaun? kyun?

Angad(giggled): kripa...relax....Anjali, aliyah and their husbands planned all this...

angad told Kripa about their plan from the beginning. By the time angad was finished telling her, they had arrived at the hall. Angad parked his car, and held the door open for Kripa.

Kripa: yahan pe bhi kuch plan kiya hai kya?

Angad: i hope not...

Angad held Kripa by the waist and walked into the hall which roared with applause once Naina and Dilip had arrived. Kripa, just like she always did, touched dadi, naina, and dilip's feet. Josh came in front of Kripa and pointed to his feet as if telling her to touch his feet as well. Kripa smiled and approached to touch his feet. After all, he was her older brother. He had also played the role of a mother and a father for her after they passed away. Josh backed off a little taken aback.

Josh: Kripa...give me hug..you know what i believe...

Kripa: yes yes...i know....sirf bhagwan ke saamne humein jhukna chahiye lekin bhai..mere liye aap bhagwan ki jagah hi hai....bilukl waise jaise mom, dad, dadi aur Angad hai...agar aap sab meri zindagi mein nahi hote to pata nahi aaj mein zinda hoti bhi ya nahi..

Angad: Kripa...aaj keh diya...phir kabhi mat kehna...varna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...

Kripa: sorry....thodi emotional ho gayi thi..

Angad: kya yaar josh......jab woh apne naye ghar jaa rahi thi tab bhi tumne usse rulaya tha...aur aaj bhi rula diya....

Josh: usne mujhe tum dono ki shaadi ke din rulaya tha na....aj meine badla liya hai...

Kripa: Acha?...to dekh lena....ek din mein aisa badla lungi tumse ki tumhare aansu hi nahi rukenge...

josh: we will see!

Kripa: WE WILL SEE!

Josh: fine!

Kripa: FINE!

Angad: oh my god....here we go again.....Kripa...how about you leave him alone...Aliyah will kill you if you bug him...

Aliyah: bhai!!!! I will NOT..

Angad: will too

Aliyah: will NOT

Angad: will too too too

Aliyah: will not not not..

Kripa: lo...ab hamara jaghda bandh hua...to tum dono ka shuru ho gaya...

everyone laughed seeing the two brother-sister pairs fight like teenagers.

Ok guys. I agree it was short. But I am too tired to make it any longer. I was actually out the whole day with Pia and our friends, went to downtown, shopping (and all the girls would know how tiring that can be😆😆😉), then went to the CN tower...so tired, my legs feel like jelly right now..lol. Will post a part tomorrow too but It might be short again since I have a test on monday and I will be studying for it. In the past few days, so much has been happening, I havent even touched my homework yet!! I am sure you guys will understand like you always have. Take care. Ciao until the next part!

gr8 part...the tie scene was awesome. and the fight between bro and sis. OMG!!! the promos always makes be tensed😕


~Sana~