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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

I loved the popcorn part the most...weher he -the 2nd time- purposely comes close to riya and catches Kripa......lolz that was hilarious but the worst thing of all was that I was reading this at school and then sometimes laughing....it was werid that I was the only one smiling, grinning,etc......oh lord I kinda even emarrassed myself but couldn't help it...I kept reading.....do continue soon....

😆😆...lol i know what i mean i do that alot and my sis just looks at me like i'm a freak or something😆........thankya!!!😊😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Rejected

omg that was a wonderfull part i really like this fan fic....after such a long time i was able to catch up...well continue soon cant wait for the next part 😃

aww thanks!!!!!!!😃😊😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: iamsmart

gr8 part


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sana

thank you!!😃😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

the popcorn scene was amazing 😛
the comment about her nose was totally random and funny 😆 😆

great part !! 😃

thanks!!!!😊😃....glad ya like the popcorn scene acually that happend to a friend of mine and i was with her😆😆.......yeh the nose comment was totally random😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sameira-90

great part 👏
continue soon

awww thankyou!!!😛😃😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: 1985

i read the last three parts...i totally loved it the nose part made me laugh...in fact, my friend has a pointy nose and i always say that to her...

\thanxxx!!!!!!!!!......😆😆...heheh wow i say that to my sis😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetangle04

great part..popocorn part was funny..hehe

continue soon please

aww thankyou!!!😃😊......😆yep i lurve writing the popcorn scene😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0

really funny they both r cutely stupid awsome part

heheh thanks!!!!!!😃😛😊...heheheh yep they are😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 15

Both angad and kripa walk out together

A- Do you want a lift?

It was late to get a cab as the movies actually started late which was at 8pm and it finished at 11pm being such a long movie…and most importantly she didn't want to be in the same position last time when she declined the offer

K- Fine

A- Let's go then, with a fake smile

Kripa just smiled back and then rolled her eyes

So they drive when they stop in front of a mansion, which kripa does not recognize

K- Where are we?

A- at my house

K- I thought you were dropping me off

A- Miss universe I only said do you want a lift

K- Hey pool boy take me home right now

A- chilax women, I gotta change first then I'll drop you

K- what why do you need to change for

A- seriously your such a chatterbox, for your information I'm going clubbing after I drop you

K- what but it's like 11:15pm…it's so late

A- miss universe I'm used to it I'm a college guy unlike you

K- Please I so go clubbing

A- really prove it then and come with me tonight

Kripa knew she was lying, she did go clubbing but not this late, but then she didn't want to lose against angad

K- fine but I'm not wearing this and going

A- fine we can drop by your house and you can change

A- but come with me first

They both walk into his house everyone was asleep and his parent were away. They both headed up for his room when he walks in and sees kripa following him behind

A- what do you think your doing

K- Now who doesn't have brains. Obviously I'm waiting for you

A- Well maybe you could wait outside my room

K- no I won't

Angad just rolled his eyes and went in the bathroom and came out ten minutes later

He was wearing this:


kripa who had turned around when she heard the door open. Just Kept looking at him , he looked so hot, she couldn't deny

A- stop looking at me , I know that I look good so please if your coming with try and look nice if you can

K- shut up , I look better than you , you gorilla

A- when will you learn, no point

A- oh here you go it's a dress I was going to give it to my sis for her b'day but I'll her something else, since we don't have time to go to your house

Kripa snatched the bag but was unsuccessful angad held on to it tight she tried again but it just caused her to come on top of angad who fell on the bed

A- get off me you elephant

Kripa just smacked him and gets up and goes into the bathroom and comes out in this:



A- wow you actually look nice for once

K- plzz I look good all the time

A- That's what you think, wait you don't even think

K- Just be quiet and lets leave


And they both get into the car and leave. In no time they are outside the club. They both get out and walk in , it was loud, as soon as they get in angad just walks off to a bunch of girls and guys who in knew leaving kripa by her self.

She walked over to the bar and just took a seat and ordered herself something, she was bored, she knew no on there, she just looked a angad who was dancing with a girl, who happened to see kripa looking at angad, and whispers something into his ear while pointing at kripa, angad looks up and the says something to the girl causing them both to laugh.

Kripa didn't like that, she just sat there bored as ever regretting to take up the challenge, and she just sat there drinking her coke while looking at angad dancing. She couldn't take it any more she was too bored, and she wanted to go home.

She went up to him, and asked If they could go now, but angad didn't listen to her so she just walked out leaving him there dancing on the dance floor with that girl. She somehow got a cab to her luck and reached home safely. She went up stairs and went to bed.

Weeks passed on and Kripa's parents were even back now, angad still was there pool boy, they had their little fights but most of the time she would try to avoid him. Summer came to an end and tomorrow was the first day of college. Kripa was excited but nervous. Luckily Kaajal had got admitted to the same college as her.

It was morning , kripa woke up and got ready for her first day of school, she was excited but did get butterflies thinking about it. She called up Kaajal and in no time she was at Kripa's place. They both left and reached school.

Kr- man I'm so excited … finally college guys… kripa then notices all the girls running to the door

Kr- what's wrong with them

Ka- its probably the stud of the college

Kr- oh I wanna see come on lets go

Kripa and Kaajal both go up to see , yes it was none other than angad.

"great I have to see this stupid pool boy at home and now at college", she said to herself


okay so heres the next part hope you like it!!! and thanx again to everyone for leaving comments!!!!!

Edited by Chocolate_luver - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
lolz.....nice one....do continue sooon.......loved it!!

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