SKR FF 4:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 145

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Bhuvi_09

@Bhuvi_09

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Posted: 4 years ago

#981

Originally posted by: Saumya96

Which Lakshman Siya scene you are talking about 🤔 I didn't got you, are you talking about Lakshman rekha? If yes, then I didn't got how exactly we should put Lakshman rekha part in modern time hence skipped that.
Actually it's not that it is based on Siya ke Ram show, just the characters are of that serial. Because I love all of them 😍
You read this thread then you'll know where the story is exactly going on. Glad you like it 🥰

I am talking about when Sita sends Laksh to search for Ram. If you don't know Sita, in her state of panick, accused Lakshman for having wrong intention towards her. She said that if Ram dies, Lakshman would get her as his wife since she is his brother's widow. And all that heartbreaking stuff.

I get it if you don't wanna show "that kind of" content but since all the flirting I thought.

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Posted: 4 years ago

#982

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Saumya96

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Posted: 4 years ago

#983

Originally posted by: Bhuvi_09

I am talking about when Sita sends Laksh to search for Ram. If you don't know Sita, in her state of panick, accused Lakshman for having wrong intention towards her. She said that if Ram dies, Lakshman would get her as his wife since she is his brother's widow. And all that heartbreaking stuff.
I get it if you don't wanna show "that kind of" content but since all the flirting I thought.

I don't know where this is shown, but in real context if we talk about the holy Ramayana book and veds, NO discussion of this is given.

Lakshman always considered Mata Sita as his mother, in his entire life he didn't even looked at her he always used to bow his head in front of her (there is one context when Sita was kidnapped and Ram and Lakshman were searching for her. Ram showed her jewelry to Lakshman and asked him if it belongs to sitae to which Lakshman said that I have only seen bhabhi's payal so I cam only tell these are bhabhi's payal, rest I don't know).

He considered his bhaiya bhabhi as his father and mother and has dedicated his whole life to them. Yes Siya was angry on Lakshman as he denied to leave her to search for Ram, but she never said these words (this what till now I have read).

Secondly in this modern story, the relationship between Siya with her three devars is so cool and emotional. She considers them as her brothers and those three considers her as their mother figure slash big sister slash guide slash best friend. I agree in a joke or hilarious way, Shatrughan calls her his girlfriend, they flirt with her openly, but then it's their sweet bonding which is shown.

Talking about Siya and Lakshman, yes I have shown him flirting with his bhabhi the most, but that do not have anything wrong indication. That is a sweet relationship between the two of them. Since Lakshman is the one amongst three who has spent more time with Siya, both of them have a comfortable relationship with each other.

In this modern story, each and every relationship is so purely and emotionally attached with each other, depicting the bond of brothers and sisters, depicting the bonds in a family. And it is not based on old Ramayana or new Ramayana (I love SKR characters that's why used them). It's a take on few contexts of Ramayan and the movie hum saath saath hai, so that's all I will say 😊😊

Hope you got your answers

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Asthatripathi

@Asthatripathi

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Posted: 4 years ago

#984

hey suamya first of all I'm really very sorry seriously I was not knowing that u are not going well still I told to u do update 🥺🥺 genuinely I was very much disappointed fory self I thought have selfish I'm for not looking for condition and asked u do to update... I can understand how difficult it is to do anything during fever phase.... fever was the main reason why I was not able to look after your update for more then months because I was admitted to hospital......and nobody allowed me to use my mobile so I was replying u or showing u my any reactions anyways now I'm good to home Healthy and steady😂🤭nothing to worry but seriously very very sorry And coming to update what to say bundles of reaction happy, emotional, blushy blushy and many more doing great job won't able to say anything but suggest u about my wish which had told u about sira's morning romance which I asked u do that is ram is sleeping and siya is coming to wake him up and at that time naughty ram starts doing his romantic antics pls look after it and also have u thought anything about sira's anniversary????? so that's all nothing else just take proper rest don't pressurized your self for update do it any time no problem and also don't worry from today I won't ask u about update I know how pressuring it is so be free have a good day and take good care💖😘

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Saumya96

@Saumya96

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Posted: 4 years ago

#985

Originally posted by: Asthatripathi
hey suamya first of all I'm really very sorry seriously I was not knowing that u are not going well still I told to u do update 🥺🥺 genuinely I was very much disappointed fory self I thought have selfish I'm for not looking for condition and asked u do to update...I can understand how difficult it is to do anything during fever phase.... fever was the main reason why I was not able to look after your update for more then months because I was admitted to hospital......and nobody allowed me to use my mobile so I was replying u or showing u my any reactions anyways now I'm good to home Healthy and steady😂🤭nothing to worry but seriously very very sorryAnd coming to update what to say bundles of reaction happy, emotional, blushy blushy and many more doing great job won't able to say anything but suggest u about my wish which had told u about sira's morning romance which I asked u do that is ram is sleeping and siya is coming to wake him up and at that time naughty ram starts doing his romantic antics pls look after it and also have u thought anything about sira's anniversary?????so that's all nothing else just take proper rest don't pressurized your self for update do it any time no problem and also don't worry from today I won't ask u about update I know how pressuring it is so be freehave a good day and take good care💖😘

Baapre itna bada explanation....... It's ok no need to feel any sorry or apologetic 😌😌😇😇

Hope you are doing well now, take your good care weather is also not good so it's more important to check for our health.

I have your suggestions with me. SiRa anniversary ko abhi time hai, but we will have that too ...

Thanks for your concern 😘

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Reshma.J

@Reshma.J

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Posted: 4 years ago

#986

Hi! Good update 😌,i have a tiny suggestion for you can you try writing from a particular person's pov , like when it's a ram and siya scene it might be in ram's pov, just a suggestion 😊 because I've read very less stories in third person pov .

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Saumya96

@Saumya96

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Posted: 4 years ago

#987

Originally posted by: Reshma.J
Hi! Good update 😌,i have a tiny suggestion for you can you try writing from a particular person's pov , like when it's a ram and siya scene it might be in ram's pov, just a suggestion 😊 because I've read very less stories in third person pov .

Actually I have never tried to write from someone's pov. I usually have a habit to write from my pov as in I am telling the story.

But surely I will think about your suggestion and will work on it ☺️

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Sonali00

@Sonali00

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Posted: 4 years ago

#988

Sizzling update ❤️

Siya is afraid even of Raghavan's name at this point....and yeh valid bhi hai afterall it relates to safety of Ram n Lakshman now..

Siya ne Pawan ko bhai bola ...it was so beautiful scene.. Pawan ne bhi toh Siya ke liye ek bhai ka farz nibhaya for her ..he even took Ram's care in those times..

Then comes the charm of four Raghuvanshi boys and their never ending attempts to makes their wives blush🤭🤭...itne pyaar se karte hai apni biwiyon ko charo...even hum b sharma gaye😍...and little little things they did in between which made them more weak...such a sizzling moments...

Ram ko doubt ho hi gaya thoda thoda Siya ke state par..hope he gets to know soon about this🥺...

And last pooja ka scene😍....sabse achi bat yeh hai sab log ek bhi mauka ya tarika nahi chord rahe to make Siya comfortable..this is their bond and love...

Continue soon 😍