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Posted: 4 years ago

"Dadi was going through Anu's suitcase " 😂. No missing the quirks that fits a personality. So the unfair Dadi approves ladli bahu needs a beauty parlor treatment during crisis and fed kheer because she now goes to work😊


So this was a day in Mathur's household when Anu.is away..to top there is a health crisis. The two older siblings have responsibilities divided among themselves and Vi maybe carries more load. The two younger siblings have now been given financial responsibility...guess some home responsibility will follow soon?

Glad Naina finally is taking control of her life, focussing on adding skills to help in her career opportunities.

Ra unlike Vi when he is upset/angry utters loaded one liners,takes time to cool off...a month old marriage Vi will soon pick his cues/quirks.

Surprised Dadi has not told Vi yet that she needs to go home.

Lovely and a very natural progression 😍

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Posted: 4 years ago

To fight, to argue and to defend

She turned to find himstanding 10 feet from her

“Dadu se milne aaye ho?”she asked politely not exposing ONE BIT how her heart was hammering…. “Dadu Buake ghar hain” she said plainly pushing her glasses up

And beginning to stackthe tumblers in a tall shelf by the sink



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He LEFT

She ran to the balcony in the living room it offered clear views to the building exit down below

She waited

He had gone off to bring the basket of get well soon things he had bought for Dadu, Rathiji was bringing it up he was going to get it from him outside the elevator

She waited and waited

He appeared in the balcony door 10 minutes later tucked his hands in his pockets and watched her look for him down below

“Expecting someone?” he asked grimly

She turned around in disbelief

“NAHI TO” she turned red

“Why are you wearing a saree and not at work?” he demanded

It was his favorite erotic outfit you see, if she was not at work she was supposed to wear it for him and not at all otherwise

“Chachi brought these, from a guy who makes it in Haldwani” she raised her arms to display the glass bangles she was wearing in very unique colors

She had decided to contrast the beautiful glass with a off white almost pale green plain saree. She looked all sorta beautiful he thought

She was galaxies different from the women he had dated

This woman was unassuming, and not obsessed with her appearance or makeup

The plumber walked by “Madam iska valve badalna hai aur pipe bhi naya lagega”

“Who to aapne kaha nahi jo dishwasher se sink ko jo pipe nikalti hai usme thodi hai jam”

“Arey Madam, saare pipe judey hain, chalo main batata hoon aapko”

She hassled with him as he leaned on the balcony doorjamb, with one foot up checking his messages

Dadi walked over to him

“Bahu aayi hai chhoti kal, thak gayi, yeh dono bandar uske hain” Dadi pointed to the young boys, skating across the floor slamming into each other

“Oh” he nodded

“Khaaye kuch?” “Hamare UP mein pehle ghar aaye mehman ki khaatir karte hain” Dadi dissed her poti

“Achha” he nodded

“Yeh hamesha qitabon mein ghusi rehti hai, aaj iski Ma so rahi hai, bahar desh gayi thi, Dadu haspatal mein aur Anu Amreeka”

“Amreeka nahi Dadi Germany” Viveka corrected her walking over to the entertainment unit along a wall to get money out

“Yahi hai aap chhuttha kar lo” she handed

“Madam, kam se kam 1200 ka samaan aayega, aur auto ke alag”

Viveka wanted to go into her room to get her wallet

She didn’t want to wake Ma up

“Tumhare paas hain Rs.500?” she asked Raanav

“Betaaa MAYKE ka kharcha damad se karwayegi?” Dadi admonished her

“dadi jab inke yaha pipe tootega to Papa banwa denge”

“TO? Beti ka sasural hai theek nahi karawenge?” BATAO!”

“Do you have it?” his wife demanded

“Sure” he politely handed her a wad. Of Rs.1000s”

“I need Rs.500”

“I only have these”

“Main chalti hoon aapke saath neeche, main change karwa doongi” she didn’t want the guy running away”

“Vi… let him go, he will be fine”

The plumber gave Raanav a look of “This lady does not trust me”

Raanav handed him two Rs.1000

“Madam ji BAG chhodke ja raha hoon usme kam se kam Rs.50,000 ka alactrik ka saman hai”

“Time se nal fix kar do aur sink bhi bechoongi nahi tumhara samaan”

“Dekho! Karigar se kaisi baat” Dadi shook her head

Chachi came out and yelled at her kids, her face was covered in some pasty stuff, and she was wearing a above knee length gown

“Vivekaaaaa” she scowled at Veev when she noticed Raanav in the living room

“Kya hua Chachi”

Chachi ran scowling, slammed the door didn’t open the door for until later

Dadi went through all of Anu’s things

“Isko de Biveka” Dadi grandly offered Gilette shave cream can to Raanav

“Dadi iske paas hai”

Raanav chuckled

“NA beta INKO bolo”

“I am going to tidy the kitchen

She went inside

He followed her

The boys were BOTH STANDING in the sink spraying each other with water

“Oh my God!!” she gasped pulling them out shutting off the faucet

They ran out She ran out and grabbed one quick

“Hang him upside down will you?” she asked Raanav

He was taller and stronger

The boys yelled in excitement

He swung them both for a few minutes

“Change karo” Viveka ordered and left them in the twins room

“Poha hai breakfast mein… doon kya?” she asked politely

“I am good” he shrugged

She looked at her kitchen

NO WONDER

He probably never looked at such a tiny kitchen, and a kitchen that had thrown up on itself

“Kyon laaye itna saara Dad uke liye? Dadi will send everything with Chachi” she mumbled the second sentence almost a whisper

“BIVEKAAAAA yeh tokri kaun laaya?” Dadi hollered

“I told you” Viveka whispered

Trying to find a saucepan to make chai

“Chai peeyoge?” she paused

“Oh I can fill up water” she mumbled

Reaching for a tall container with a spigot at the bottom

“Sure” he nodded hands in his pockets giving her rapt attention

“Aaj office nahi gaye?” she asked

“Saturday” he chuckled

“Oh yes… umm”

“I liked the questioning tho” he laughed

“Mujhe lene aaye?” she asked trying not to look at him while she put a lid on the boiling tea water letting it simmer

He didn’t answer until she looked at him, she did when he didn’t answer

She held the hand towels in her hand and looked at him

“When were you planning to get home?”

“Pata nahi” she said not willing to give him the pleasure of victory

She pulled the lid off and it clattered to the side

“Meri yaad sata rahi thi tumhe?” she laughed self deprecatingly

“When can you go?” he asked

She turned to him in shock and stared open mouth

So he was here to pick her up

He took a step forward

She took one back and leaned on the two feet of empty space by the tall pots and pans rack

“Tumhe ghar par ladne ke liye ek insaan kam pada kya?” she goaded him softly

He wiped steam off her glasses

She pushed his hand off

He gently felt her bare waist with his right hand

She grabbed his hand with both of hers

They stood tussling… chink chink chink… tinkle… tinkle without saying a word they fought quietly

“Tum …” she strained, “Raanav” he did dodgy, cheeky things

She leaned on the wall eventually gasping trying to push him away

Ghar pa, Ma hai Chachi hain Dadi bhi” she whispered begging for freedom

They scuffled softly, gasping and grunting

He finally inserted his left hand under her pallu and felt her ribs, his thumb sneaking up the pad stroking her curved flesh covered by a taut blouse

“Didi… Divu ne yeh TOR diya” Himanshu walked out with a broken hair brush

The young couple separated reluctantly

Chachi stormed out of the room, now with a clean washed face and track pant and a tee

“Viveka yeh galat kiya tumne she accused loudly

“Chach..”

“MUJHE BATANA chahiye…. Ya to tum bachon ko theek se sambhal leti ya mujhe BATA deti” “Tumhare husband aaye hain”

“Chachi… I WAS… subah se yeh dono”

“Nahi main nahi maanti” Chachi was adamant

“She had no idea you were going to step out of the room

The Parashar kid defended her!!

Chachi looked like someone shoved her from the balcony

Ma appeared from her room looking groggy

Edited by Nisha0604 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

“She had no idea you were going to step out of the room


Dude scores another one. I think despite all attitude as of now Ranaav is my favourite.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Protective Ranaav.

Not only he wishes to protect her from outsiders but also from her own family.

Loved it.

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Posted: 4 years ago

To fight, argue and defend ❤️

Describes prominent aspect of Ranaav the Lawyer as well.

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Posted: 4 years ago

First of all, Raanav you totally rock 😍I'm so amused by the way he takes Dadi in his stride. Nothing she says seems to faze him. She seems quite taken with him though.


Dadi's youngest grandkids are a riot creating machine 😂Dadi ki zubaan chalti hai belagaam aur unke poton ka badmashi cooking dimaag chalta hai behisaab 😂


I loved how Viveka unhesitatingly asked Raanav if he had the money she needed. It had the lovely vibe of haq hai mera, tum par... (ahem, certain fans ;) )

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Posted: 4 years ago

Happy Friday 😍 I could not wipe the smile off my face. Subtle, polite and direct. Ad boy (last time) take a bow 😊

Raanav addressed the obvious...why is Vi not at work and when will she be back home ? I was subtle in my last comment regarding this. She is not making day trips but living here.

Dadu had surgery but it seems other than Vi ( and yes Ra too) no one life has been disrupted. They are comfortable she fills in when required. Not done intentionally ..habit maybe but it is time that someone well Ra the damaad (given Vi is oblivious ) as family is traditional 🤗

The icing in the cake when he put Chachi in her place 😁

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi67

First of all, Raanav you totally rock 😍I'm so amused by the way he takes Dadi in his stride. Nothing she says seems to faze him. She seems quite taken with him though.


Dadi's youngest grandkids are a riot creating machine 😂Dadi ki zubaan chalti hai belagaam aur unke poton ka badmashi cooking dimaag chalta hai behisaab 😂


I loved how Viveka unhesitatingly asked Raanav if he had the money she needed. It had the lovely vibe of haq hai mera, tum par... (ahem, certain fans ;) )


You are right that gesture of asking him money was mera haq hain😍

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Posted: 4 years ago

“Madam ji BAG chhodke ja raha hoon usme kam se kam Rs.50,000 ka alactrik ka saman hai”

“Time se nal fix kar do aur sink bhi bechoongi nahi tumhara samaan”


🤣😆 🤣 Good humor .


I loved the title of the update as well. To Fight, argue and defend sounded in rhyme .... like....the wedding Vows..... To Love, Honor and Protect.

I agree with pritee. He had her caught exactly where he wanted, fretting peeping down the balcony if he really just left!! No thank you's, conscious responses like oh you came to see Dadu.... too much of ego in love for veev, could do her bit to get off her pedestal !


Yesterday I read Nisha's comment that veev is not acknowledging that she is affected by smri's disposition, I completely agree with that. Being passive aggressive always gets to you at the end. Raanav saw through his wife. On support proposition, not comparing apples to apples , but Raanav is not Akash !

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Posted: 4 years ago

To fight, argue and protect❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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