Six(AK) Mistletoe in the Mansion--p.24 - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: memze

i checke dif u updated and yeah u did and vo bhi i found out i missed 2 parts sorry i couldnt comment b4 but the 2 parts were amazing i luved it and poor anagd and kripa and this prithvi what is his problem hamesha kripa ke peeche pada hai i hope its angad in the reds sports car and u miss kiran left it on suspense now mughe saari din raat sochne padegi kaun hai lal gari mein 😆 anyways luved it pls cont soon 😛

Thanks😊

It's just that I thought it would be more interesting if I left it on an interesting part😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~*LiL PrInCeZ*~

Wow... awsome! 👏 👏 👏

Thanks alot!😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 6

RECAP: Kripa waves her hands to let a car stop; the person in the car opens the window….

The person in the car opens the window. The person is a girl she is:

"Hi, aap ko lift chahiye" The person asks.

"Haan, kya mein aap mujhe Sharma Mansion leke jaa sakti hai?"

"Wait, kya aap mashur industrialist Mr. Surya Sharma ki beti hai?"

"Haan"

"Come on, sit down"

Kripa opens the door to the car, she sits down. "Mera naam Kripa hai"

"Hi, I am Aaliya" she responds. "Kya aap jaanti hai ke Sharma Mansion kahaan, Kyonki mein India mein naye hoon"

"Haan, take a right from here" she directs Aaliya. "Aap India mein peyda hui hai, yaa phir.."

"Haan, mein India mein peda hui hoon, par mere papa ne mujhe American Boarding School mein bhejdiya tha jabb meri mama ..." Aaliya stopped. "Jabb meri mama is duniya se chaligaye thi"

Kripa saw the tears forming in Aaliya's eyes. Kripa felt sad for Aaliya "I am sorry"

"It's ok, is mein tumhari koi ghalti nahin"

"Yahaa se left lo, aur phir seeda jaana" Kripa continues to guide in no time they reach the Sharma Mansion. "Andar aao naa Aaliya"

"Nahin, mein aaj hi America se waapis aai hoon, mere bhai intizaar kar rahe honge"

"Koi baat nahin, tumhare bhai aur intizaar karma hoga" Kripa makes Aaliya come in. She asks Teddy to set the table for dinner. Kripa tells Aaliya to stay seated, she would right back. Kripa goes to her room to change her clothes. While Kripa is in her room, the bell rings. Teddy goes to open it…….

I know it's a short part, but I might continue today again! So leave ALOT of comments....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!!! what if it was angad. i wonder if angad is aaliya's brother. omg!! pleez continue soon.............

Nalni 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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even i think aaaliyah ia angad's sis 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nkdidi

OMG!!!! what if it was angad. i wonder if angad is aaliya's brother. omg!! pleez continue soon.............

Nalni 😛



I'll continue asap😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyotsna13

even i think aaaliyah ia angad's sis 😉



Maybe your right😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aliyah is angad's sis ritee and thats angad cuz he rushed to sharma's place.. it has to bee!!!!!!!1


continue soooooooooooonnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

aliyah is angad's sis ritee and thats angad cuz he rushed to sharma's place.. it has to bee!!!!!!!1


continue soooooooooooonnn



MAYBEEEEEE.....

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