ArHi SS#3 A Fool Chp 15 Pg 56 10/04 Completed - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Saiyyu... I am sorry we haven't spoken in a while. Both of us seemed to have been too busy lately. Imagine, I haven't even met Lazy after you have gone. 😕 Par kya karein, AD has been taxing. Seems like you were in Kolkata... how was the trip? Did you eat a lot of sweets?? I remember you love them... 😆 Coming to the update, it is so good to see the transformation in this Arnav. After the kiss, even though he is still far away from his goal... he seems to have been relived of taking a step towards Khushi. That just makes his actions a little more confident. Less is more, and that is the beauty of some conversations. His silent plea, was heard and understood by Khushi's parents, who only want their children to be truly happy.

I understand Khushi's hesitance. Love out of guilt... and a lifetume to makeup is not something someone wants. Yes redemption is necessary... but that is in the mindset and thoughts... not actions. Actions are born out of love... a love that only feels and dreams and lives at its own will. I love how Gautami tried to make Khushi understand the magnitude of what love truly means. It has varied forms, varied stories and ample of scope to mould your life the way you want. I hope Khushi can explain her feelings to Arnav so that he can once and for all clear all her doubts and confess his feelings for her. She now needs his words... just like his actions had helped her break the fortress she had built around her heart to break. I am sure their love story will flourish then. 😳

By the way, I can totally understand the pressure of updating on time. It totally stresses me out. So just take it easy and write at your own space. I know its easier said than done for us... but update when you can girl. Take care and will msg you soon! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Saiyuuu queen of romance...I loved Gautami's thought..amazing update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
wow that was a beautiful update!!
I absolutely loved this update...the desperation in arnav and they way he spoke to khushi's parents... was killer
and the awesome part is they understood what he wanted even before he spelled it out

absolutely love gautami's character ... loved how she explained khushi and asked her questions!

dont worry abt the late updates...life happens...we understand...dont beat urself up too much abt it...we know u have life outside IF and we appreciate you taking time n giving us these wonderful stories 😊

eagerly waiting for the next!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
congrats for the new thread..

Awesome part.. Arnav went ahead and have asked her hand from her parents but what about Khushi.. man you should have spoken to her first.. but Arnav is Arnav.. well loved to hear Gautami.. she have stirred Khushi and have touched the right cord.. lets see what now they both do about it.. loved the super awesome update.. Saiyu thanks dear for taking time out of your busy schedule.. however not writing a story is bad but hope.. hope karne mein kya jata hai.. tumhe jis din aacha idea milega you will write ARSHI story i know.. till then hume koi problem nahin hai..


thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lots of love dear...its beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow what an update...Arnav is a hell of a man with a hell of guts to go ahead and ask for her hand...and Khushi...finally she is accepting...amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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the talk that Khushi has with gautami will surely bring a lot of clearing to the views and future that Khushi desires for herself and arnav..
the way arnav talked to her parents, the single please from his side made me too emotional..
U wrote exceptionally well and though I m a bit sad that might not write ss or ff in future for a long time I also understand when personal and professional world starts interfering with the fictional one, they do win the upper hand..
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It must have taken all his efforts for him to utter that single 'Please' with such a heartfelt desperation. There was so much fear, pain, angst, uneasiness and pain accompanying his plea that for a moment I was so completely moved. What pleases me more is that his wish was not granted easily and that he was indirectly asked to fight harder.

I would call Gautami as Khushi's guardian angel. By reviving the memories of her life with Ram, she just not gave Khushi an insight of the journey of their happily ever after but very beautifully helped her look at her feelings from someone else's perspective. She helped her hold a mirror to her feelings and decide the best course of action for her future, rather their future together.

I totally loved it when she hinted at not wanting a life with him wherein all she will see him do is try and make upto her.

Waiting for the next part.
Update soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gautami is one sensible woman.
Hope Khushi listens to her and takes the right decision.
Loved Arnav's humility and the way he is ready to bend before Khushi and her family to atone for his sins. Hopefully, he will get his Khushi now.

Saiyyu, please don't worry about deadlines regarding updates.
I, for one, absolutely don't care if the update is late as long as you keep writing.
Work and family always come first.
But, please keep writing.
There are very few good writers left on IF.
Don't want to lose another.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread🥳

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