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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Milleegarg



Kk
Ll wait
But aaj raat tak Ho jana chaiye 😳


maine kal raat bola aur tumne aj raat kar diya 😲 yeh toh cheating h 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RNforever


maine kal raat bola aur tumne aj raat kar diya 😲 yeh toh cheating h 😡



Oo madam
Apna reply date bhi toh dekho
18th may h
Na ki 19th 😲
Ab kya bolna chati Ho hmm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Milleegarg



Oo madam
Apna reply date bhi toh dekho
18th may h
Na ki 19th 😲
Ab kya bolna chati Ho hmm

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Posted: 9 years ago

ooo madam don't u knw ki IF ka time humare time e 12 hr ki difference pe chalta h
wase ab itnzar khamat hua i will update tonight
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Posted: 9 years ago
*** Ek Ajnabi Rishta*****



Recap...

Naina sabko apna past btati hain ...aur raj Naveen mil kar naina ko sanmalte hain...


Ase he pura din beet jata hain...sab naina ko cheer up karne ke koshish me lage the par naina apna ateet yaad kar ke wapas depression me jane lagi thi...


Dekhte he dekhte do hafte beet gayi par naina ki halat me koi sudhar nahi tha ...



Naina ki halat dekh kar raj khud ko kos raha tha ...usni naina ko manaya tha apna ateet btane ke liye par usse yeh nahi pata tha ki naina phirse kahi apne ateet me kho jayegi...


In raj room




Naveen shalini abhimanyu or raj charo baithe the...
Naina cadets ke saath Naveen ke room me thi...




Naveen : (tensed) mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha ...Naina apne dard se bahar he nahi aa rahi hain ...humne kitni koshish ki par wo wahi apne ateet me jase tham se gayi hain...


Raj : (with guilt) sab mere galti hain ...mujhe Naina ko convence he nahi karna chaheyi tha apna past btane ke liye ...woh ab sab bhulne langi thi maine usse wo sab phir se yaad dila diya ...


Naveen : (irrigated) don't be mad Raj maim phele he Naina ko le kar pareshan hu aur ab tere yeh bakwas ...hum sab jante hain tumne jo kiya bilkul sahi kiya ...bas ab ek bar naina ko uss dard se bahar lana hoga ...phir sab thik ho jayega humesha ke liye ...


Shalini : (sochte hue) kyu na hum naina ko picnic pe le jaye ...kisi khuli jagah jaha wo khul kar saas le sake ...wase bhi jab se yaha aayi h bas Naveen ke room me he rahti hain...




Abhimanyu : idea toh acha hain par kya naina jayegi ...wo kamre se bahar tak nahi nikalti KMA se bahar jana toh dor ki baat hain...



Iss baat pe raj aur Naveen ek dosre ko dekhte hain aur ek saath kahte hain...



Raj naveen : (together) woh hum par chod do...



Raj Naveen bohat papad bel kar naina ko kisi tarah convince kar he leti hain picnic pe jane ke liye ...

Kyuki Sunday tha toh sare cadets bhi ja rahe the insab ke saath picnic pe ...sab picnic ke naam se bohat khush the ...par naina woh kuch khas react he nahi kar rahi thi ...


Sab picnic pe jane ke liye nikalte hain...abhimanyu ne ek mini bus book ke thi ...


In bus



Pooja : (excited) Naveen sir hum kaha ja rahe hain ...kab tak puche gaye ..mere mobile me toh abhi se dhinchak ringtone bajne lagi hain...



Huda : arre Punjaban tere ringtone chod ...iss huda ki soch kya pata waha koi jutni mil jaye iss jaat ko ...(dreamingly) kya pata waha iss jaat ki talash puri ho jaye



Alekh : (apne drink pete hue) nautanki saala...

(Sab hasne lagte hain)



Yudi : guys hume na disk jana chaheyi ...i love disk n all



Huda : oye nahi oye hume toh kisi mast dhabe pe jana chaheyi ...jaha sarso ka saag aur maake ki roti mile ...



Ali : arre aap log kya apni apni baat le kar baith gayi ...humsab waha naina ke liye jaa rahe hain...toh unse he puchte hain na ki kya pasand hain unhe...



Phir sab naina ko dekhne lagte hain woh toh apne he soch me gumm baithi thi ...



Sabne dekha ki naina ka dhayan he nahi hain unki taraf ...



Naveen : (naina ke bagal wali seat pe baitha tha ) baccha kya hua kya soch rahi hain...dekh sab tere jawab ka intzar kar rahe hain...


Naina : apne khayalo se bahar aate hue ...) Haa ...kya hua bhai...



Abhimanyu : (naina se aage wali seat pe baitha tha) arre sab jana chahte hain ki aap kaha ghumna chahti hain...



Naina : (lost in her thoughts) pata nahi ...




Naveen naina ko yuh khud me gunm dekh kar dukhi hota hain...



Shalini : arre naina bato na please kaha jana hain tumhe dekho tumhare bhai ne sab kuch sirf tumhare liye arrange kiya hain...uska dil tut jayega ...



Naina Naveen ki taraf dekhti hain jo naina ke jawab se udas lag raha tha...


Naina : (with small smile) kisi ase jagah chale bhai jaha jada shore na ho ...charo taraf khuli haawa ho ..pedo (trees) ki patho ki haawa se baatein karne ki aawaz ho ...jaha charo taraf hariyali ho...




Naveen : (excited) tujhe ase jagah pasand hain...(naina haa me ser hila deti hain ) hum ase jagah he ja rahe hain ...pata hain raj ne suggest ki thi wo jagah kaha tha tujhe jarur pasand aayegi ...




Naina Raj ka naam sunn kar uski taraf dekhti hain ...Raj usse dekh kar smile kar raha tha ...naina jhut se apne nazre Raj se hata leti hain aur window ke bahar dekhne lagti hain...Raj ke chahre ke bhi smile gayab ho jati hain naina ka asa reaction dekh kar...




Thodi der me sab waha poch jate hain jaha jana tha sabko ...

Sab bus se utar ke nazaro ka maza le rahe the sab aage chale gaye bus se sabse end me naina Naveen aur Raj utarte hain...



Tab teeno bahar aate h toh naina jahag ki khubsurti me kho jati hain ...

Charo tarah hariyali thi pade podhe lage the ...thandi thandi haawa chal rahi thi ...waha pas me ek jharna (waterfall) bhi tha...naina ke chahre pe woh khubsurati dekh kar ke badi si smile aa gayi...uski aakho me ek chamak thi uss jagah ko dekh kar ...



Naveen kuch kam se shalini ke pas chala gaya ...naina wahi kahadi nazaro me khoi hue thi




Raj naina ke pas kahad uske chahre ki khosi dekh raha tha ...na jane kyu raj ke dil ko bohat sukun mil raha tha naina ko yuh khush dekh kar ...woh bas naina ki muskurahat ko dekhne me busy tha ...



Raj : (to naina) pasand aaya ...



Naina : (raj ki taraf dekhti hain) with little smile ) bohat khubsurat hain yeh jagah ...



Raj : (in mind) tumse jada nahi ...(to naina) mujhe laga he tha tumhe pasand aayega ...



Naina phir idhar udhar dekhne lagti hain par Naveen usse kahi nahi dekhta ...woh thoda pareshan hone lagi thi ...raj yeh baat notice karta hain...


Raj : Naveen shalini ke help karne gaya hain...tum kaho toh main bula du usse ...



Yeh kah kar raj waha se jane lagta hain...


Naina raj ka haath pakad leti hain...

Raj haran ho kar kabhi naina ko toh kabhi apne haath ko dekh raha tha ...

Naina ne jase he realise kiya usne raj ka haath chod diya ...



Naina : woh ap bhai ko disturb mat karo wase bhi jab se main aayi hu tabse bhai ko khud ke liye waqt he nahi mila hain...unhe aur bhabhi ko thoda waqt saath rahne dejeyi...




Raj haran ho kar naina ko dekhne laga...



Raj : (shocked) tum kya bol rahi ho ...kon bhabhi????




Naina : (with small smile) apko kya lagta bhai ya aap log mjhe nahi btaye gay toh kya mujhe pata nahi chalega ki shalni i mean shalini bhabhi mere hone wali bhabhi hain...



Raj : (smiling) par tumhe pata kase chala ...hume se kabhi bhi kisne tumhe nahi btaya tha ...



Naina : (smiling)bas pata hain mujhe ...



Raj : arre par...



Naina : (irrigated) aap kuch jada he sawal nahi karte ...thoda kam bola kejeyi



Raj naina ko ase baat karte dekh surprised ho jata hain...



Naina : (embarrassed) woh ...woh...sorry woh maine bhai bhabhi ke haath me engagement ring dekhi hain aur ...(phir naina chup ho jati hain)



Raj : (rising his eyebrow) aur???

Naina : ( requesting) please no more question...



Raj : (smiling) chalo thik hain mat btao ...



Phir raj waha se jane lagta hain...




Naina : (hesitantly) aah...Rajveer jiii...



Raj apna naam naina ke muh se sunn kar bohat khush hota hain ...aur thoda shock bhi ...sab usse raj bolte hain par naina usse rajveer bula rahi thi...



Raj mud kar naina ki taraf dekhta hain...



Naina : please mujhe chod kar mat jayeyi...( realizing what she said) ... i mean bhai nahi hain yaha ...main akele ...woh aap tab tak agar saath rahte ...woh



Raj : (seriously) do kadam naina ki taraf chal kar aata hain) tum humesha mujhe apne pas he paogi naina ...(naina raj ko dekhne lagti hain) mera mtlab hain jab bhi Naveen tumhare pas nahi hoga toh bas nazar utha kar dekhna main humesha tumhare pas he rahuga ...kabhi akela nahi choduga ...i promise...



Raj sab kuch naina ki badi badi aakho me dekhte hue bol raha tha ...aur naina Raj ki aakho me kho si gayi thi...



Abhimanyu dono ko bulane aaya tha ...par dono ko yuh ek dosre ke aakho me khoya dekh kar uske chahre pe ek smile aa gayi...




Abhimanyu : wase hum bhi apko kabhi akela nahi chode gay...



Abhimanyu ki aawaz sunn kar dono hosh me aate hain ...



Dono he apne nazre chura rahe the ek dosre se ...




Naina : (to abhimanyu) jii????



Abhimanyu : humara mtlab hain ki aap sirf Naveen ki he nahi humari bhi behen hain...isliye aap khud ko kabhi akela nahi payegi ...hum humesha apke saath hain kyu raj ... Naina apki bhi behen jasi he hain na naina ...




Raj waha bilkul shocked khada tha ...behen?????


End of part 10



Good news for all readers ab Raj ka side role khatam hua
Ab se main RN moments start kar rahi hu ab plz koi complain mat karna ki RN moments nahi hain...


Love Arti


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome dear.naina raj ki bahen oh god.yeh abhi vhina.lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
indeed a nice update to shuru ho rahi ( rn ki) prem kahani 😉 wow! only 10 part & you are about to complete 100 pages great 👏 eagerly waiting for rn romance & next update too thanks for pm take care keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
indeed amazing update. abhi samaj gya raj hahahah behen lol. i wanna see the cheerful naina
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update...wow more RN scenes...eagerly waiting for it

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