***Ek Ajnabi Rishta*** rajveer naina (lrl) part 16 on 2 thread - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing pdate. i hope navneen comes to knw it naina soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I had tears while reading this 😭 ...so much of pain...now plz end the suspense n reveal her identity...i m guessing she is Naina...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok so shyd mjhey story thodi thodi smjh aarahi hai

hope i m wrong coz agr aesa huwa toh painful journey hogi..
Bt if huwa toh bht hi intense social story banegi..

3 dost raastey mai.. Achanak ghaadi k samney ek ladki ka aajana.. Ladki zakhmi.. Buri haalat mai.. Teenu ka usey KMA laana.. Waha 5 cadets olrdy present.. Xcpt Naina..

Where is Naina.. No answer..
Ladki jo mili uska naam.. No answer till now..
Story mai ek aur dhamaka.. Navin ki behen abduct in childhood.. Wo kaha hai wo b nhi pta..

Y i m feeling ye ladki Naina hi hai.. Bt saarey readers sonchegey y Naina..
Bt if she is Naina thn uska Army join krne ka maqsad samjh aata hai.. To evacuate social crimes against womens..

Hope Naina na ho.. Coz painfull story hogi phir n i can't see Captain Rajveer sad..

Ek saal se zydaa.. She is till alive.. Will power kamal ka hai.. Aur wo khali Naina ka ho sakta hai..

Acha huwa Huda ko daantaa Rajveer sir ne.. Waese b khamkha irritate kr rha tha mjhey :p

keep it up dear..

Your are going great..

Love.. Hugs.. Smile..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Dear,
A very tragic and emotional story, eyes teared up.
A request please, put some light on this character and let's see that she overcomes her fear and stays happy with them all.
I have a feeling that she's Naina and the way Raj is reacting he's gonna fall for her but it will take some time for her to feel anything at all for him after what she went through.
Please no more details about her abuse.
Don't mind but it's giving creeps, feel very sad for those who go through this abuse.
Sorry it's not that ur story is tragic but the situation u penned feels tragic and real.
Next update make it slightly happier one


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Posted: 9 years ago
great update dear
but very sad...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update dear.

u hv penned down beautifully.


oh gosh how can anyone hurt a girl to this level.

I don't think they r human.


I hope everything goes well with d girl.

n she recover quickly.

aah this huda is too much.


I hope this girl is not naina.


do update soon dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

gr8 part

i hope that girl is going to be fine soon
and all help her in some way
excited for next part
plz pm me for next

thanks dear 😃
the bad phase is going to end soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rinku95

Fabulous
It's horrible how can someone be worse than ... I don't even have words to describe it
Continue soon
Thank for pm

thanks rinku 😊
but reality yahi h ...aj ke time me ladkiya asa bohat kuch face kar rahi h... ji horrible se bhi jada worse h
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

Bohot emotional update hay dear.

thanks buddy😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: agm1998

Bohot emotional and sad tha

Naina has been harasssed like hell for such a long tym
Make it a bit more fun nd happy
I almost cries reading dis one

thanks buddy 😃
bas thoda intzar aur phir sab kuch ek naya start hoga

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