The Distance Between Us - An AR FF (Link to TDBU#2 - Page 1) - Page 99

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Agar maine kal hi update kar diya toh? Tera countdown waste ho jaayega. :p

woh to accha hai.. bt I've less expectations 😕

Originally posted by: Prizi

woh to accha hai.. bt I've less expectations 😕

:(((((
I'm trying baby!

Originally posted by: DMGThings

:(((((
I'm trying baby!

i knw i knw

Originally posted by: Prizi

i knw i knw

❤️ ❤️

Hey there, sorry have been busy with a wedding, i did read all chapters on phone but couldn't comment earlier as this story deserves better than 'nice part' type of comments. coming to the story it was brilliant as always.

oye update aabe ka koi samvabna hai? or I've to continue my countdown?

Originally posted by: Prizi

oye update aabe ka koi samvabna hai? or I've to continue my countdown?

Aaj hi aayega update! Gimme a few hours. I'm almost done writing. Will be finished in half an hour, I guess. Lekin phone se upload karna is difficult. So, as soon as I'm okay to open the lappy, I'll post. :)

Originally posted by: sara.dmg

Hey there, sorry have been busy with a wedding, i did read all chapters on phone but couldn't comment earlier as this story deserves better than 'nice part' type of comments. coming to the story it was brilliant as always.

PART 16 & 17

It was a good insight into arman's professional life. And how is he managing it. i am pissed at Ridhima like at one time she wants Arman to move and at the next time she is asking him about food seriously. Human nature is weird, one always craves for the thing that it lost. like how Ridhima is craving for all these moments from she earlier ran away. Lol, Arman always pamper people around him all his friends and even his mentee. Arman and the children moments are always the best.

PART 18

love Sid in this part how he pushed Ridhima to talk to arman and sort things out . he is an amzaing friend and how he totally understand Ridhima's psyche. Sid is indeed on a mission.

PART 19

This part is the best one so far for me. they actually talked OMG. and she apologized considering the fact that she isnt the one to apologie. looks like i am dreaming . And Arman he was totallyastonished by this change in Ridhima.i cant describe in words how much i loved this part. Friends? Let's see.

PART 20

Every this is described so perfectly in here. There could be no better words to describe their emotions right now. I could actually feel the war between Arman's heart and mind. For him Ridhima was never a friend she was always more than that. It's obvious he would freak out after that conversation and the changed equation between them. Love how he came to Rahul to seek help. I just love their bond. I totally get it why Rahul doesn't want Ridhima back in Arman's life after all he is the one who saw Arman at his worse.

PART 21& 22

Every thing about these parts is so good. Arman unconsciously thinking about Ridhima and Ridhima liking an unknown singers song when they are indeed written for her❤️. Thats why their bond is so amazing. Why did Arman reacted so weirdly at the thought of his parents. I wonder what have they done to get such a strong reaction from him. Looking forward to know that. The venue just brought out some beautiful but now painfull memories 'sigh'. Wow Shilpa and a new character. Cool

PART 23

What's the deal between shanky and Karan. I am curious. But Karan's character is a nice addition to the story. I am so glad you brought back Shilpa. Her character didn't get a proper closure in the show. And also that she moved on from Arman because one sided love is the worst thing ever and no one deserved that. Love the teasing sessions of Arman and Rahul. they are devils and Shilpa is on the receiving end.

PART 24

A perfect dinner with friends and family. Arman is so extrovert and he loves people around him. The song sequence was good. So Arman Is totally on "behan milao" mode. but on serious note Ridhima deserves to know that. Hopefully Shilpa will tell her that soon.

Ok than I guess pehlay hi bohat lamba ho gya hai comment I should stop now. hehe. But let me tell you some thing this story Is one of my top 3 favourites along with TWOS and The Core Of My Existence both of them are sadly abandoned. So don't you ever think of leaving it midway.

And ofcourse continue soon.

Take Care

Sara

Ps. The song "Rewrite The Stars" Is awesome. In fact the music of TGS Is brilliant. but this one and "Never Enough" Is the best.

Saraaa!! Hiii! Thank you so much for such an awesome and long comment.

Ek toh, sabse pehle, I have to say this. Thank you, thank you, thank you so, so, so much for loving this story so much. Matlab, you toh straightaway compared it to TWOS & COME! Do you know how huge that is for me? Thank youuu!!! This totally made my day!

Now, your comments.

16/17
Yes, Riddhima is a confused soul. She wants Armaan to move on, to not think about her, but at the same time, she can't help but worry about him, cause she loves him so much. Now, all those things that she kind of didn't like about Armaan are the things she's craving for the most, because she's understood how much she loved all those silly antics of his only after he wasn't around to do those things.

18
Yes. Sid is really on a mission to get them back together, because they're both such good friends of his and also because he feels extremely guilty for coming between the two of them earlier.

19
Hahahahaha. Yes. It isn't like Riddhima to apologize. But, she has changed in the 7 years that have passed. A lot has happened in her life and now, she knows just how precious Armaan is, more than ever.

20
Armaan and Rahul's relationship is one of my absolute favourite things in this story. Matlab, jitna pyaar aur concern unki relationship mein hai, itna toh mujhe lagta hai kisi aur mein nahi hai. Both Armaan & Rahul have supported and helped each other at their worst. So, they both understand each other on a level that is impossible for others to comprehend. Which is why they're so close. And I'm really glad to be showing this bond in the story.
Armaan really was taken aback by Riddhima's sudden change towards him, so he is wary. But, it's Riddhima. Karega bhi kya woh? :p

21/22
Yes. Dil se dil ka connection toh abhi bhi hai, chahe yeh dono kuch aur hi soche. Both of them know that they'll never love someone as much as they loved the other, lekin phir bhi, both of them want to move on, don't want the other to be a part of their loves as a significant other, which is so bizarre. End mein toh in dono ko koi aur jhel bhi nahi sakta. :p
The story behind Armaan and his parents and what happened will be revealed in a few chapters. I hope I do it justice. :)
Ah, yes. The memories. There are so many, but yes, they're beautiful and painful. Karan & Shilpa should be good additions, I hope.

23
Hahaha. Yes. Everyone is curious about Shanky & Karan. More shall be revealed as the story progresses. :)
I also thought that Shilpa's character never got the closure she deserved on the show. It was so sudden. One minute she's there and the next she's leaving. They should have given her a better ending. Actually, all characters deserved a better ending. Even AR. Matlab, I love the BB court scene, but still, it was so sudden and so quick. We deserved to see more of them. *sighs* Lekin ab hum toh kuch kar nahi sakte, so. Yahaan fanfic hi likhlo. :p

24
Yes! Armaan toh is on totally behen milao mode. Hopefully milwa bhi dega. :p
Riddhima does deserve to know the truth. Shilpa uski behen hai, Armaan ya Sid ki nahi jo unhe pata hai, but Ridz ko nahi.
Thank you for loving the song sequence. I was a little skeptical about it, but you guys loved it, so yay!!

Thank you for the totally awesome comment! This made my day! :)

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Aaj hi aayega update! Gimme a few hours. I'm almost done writing. Will be finished in half an hour, I guess. Lekin phone se upload karna is difficult. So, as soon as I'm okay to open the lappy, I'll post. :)

Originally posted by: dmgd3

U write the story through ur phone?

Haan, yaar. It's handy na. Jab bhi time mile toh likh sakte hain. Agar bas 10 minutes hai likhne ke liye, toh uske liye laptop nahi on kar sakte na. 5 minute toh on karke docs open karne mein lag jaayega. :p

I write on docs and then sync it with my laptop, toh easily update kar sakte hain on IF.