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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Can't wait for next chapter

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Posted: 9 years ago
I always love the bond btw Aadi & Khushi
The park scence & the flashback was so cute & lovely
Finally I LOVE YOU from khushi❤️
Fabulous update love it
Dear soon im going to india for one month vacation😃 ,,sorry if not like & comment on ID
Take care❤️🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
❤️
I just saw the comment made by Barun on your wish to him...I must admit I am jealous and suppperr happy for u to be able to reach out to him with your creation...(a little dance in happiness and madness for Barun Sobti😃)

So as promised I am here and in time even before your PMs and scraps could reach me..Well stalker me wanted to read the next update very soon! So here I am!😆

This update marks the beginning of light in everyone's life I suppose..a new start towards happiness and eternal ever after..The short play in the church was apt for the update depicting it..nice thought of u to put it in such a subtle way..even though u made many readers mad over the precap that u posted..Was it a play? But the persons was a real Reverend right?I for sure want to see a real wedding with all the family and friends as a part of it,but I also wish to consider this as their personal wedding..u know what I mean? where they knew what they want and were ready for it as soon as the opportunity presented itself to them...😃

So in my and ASR's world Mrs. Raizada is jealous..nice moves of Arnav to make her feel that and finally confess,but after everything that she has gone through I do not like this personally..the infatuation part in his words..but i also know it was necessary to bring out the feelings in form of words..Hell even I would have done or reacted the same way..(if I had ASR in my life😛😉) The weather outside and them unknowingly reaching Arnav's place instead of Khushi's is giving us some hints...is the weather really so romantic this time of the year?(BTW it's here too..n I miss my love so much☺️)

JPalo did take a big step..way farther than anyone would have expected him to..did he turn himself to police? I would like to know if this happened in real life too,if it does not intrude in the personal life of your friend.But really when the heart is so torn apart in guilt and hurt and especially hate for oneself u do not know what will one end up doing...

Coming to the beginning of the update I love that u still have not left Aadi and Payal and their love..I wanted Khushi to once talk to Aadi about it..to thank him for what he did for her and Arnav..I also want Arnav to do the same someday...hope they stop missing each other soon and Aadi gets back to where he belongs,with his love..

Loved the chapter Faiqa..keep it rolling..waiting for next chapter already!⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved chapter 16👏
wow wow wow coming closer together
eager for the next part😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update loved it
arshi are coming close 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am lost in this chapter.
I will be back after regaining my strength,

BEAUTIFUL DISPLAY OF SO MANY EMOTIONS>👏

REST
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww it's awesome !
. No words ... Just beautiful . Din t know how many times am going to read this . And eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mindblowing👏
Exquisite⭐️

Beautiful❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
Mindblowing👏
Exquisite⭐️

Beautiful❤️

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I simply falling inn love with this FF because of range of emotions you are capturing across each character,especially Arnav and Kshuhi within one scene.You are bringing back IPK memories.

So Khsuhi's revenge was making Arnav to act in the play ,but destiny had some other play to play along.Two scenes here , when he bumped into her and second when he pulled her close before leaving for his duty.It touched my heart .You know my hubby is in army.His getting lost in her sending her shivers and then playing along with her prank to make her confess,but she didn't in the yard .

Raizada made her jealous and enjoyed that .She refused to come with him ,but what a gentleman he is 😆 He walked with her while still teasing and here comes confession.Again from her .She will be pissed .Lets see what does she do now?

The most beautiful scene of this chapter is Aadi and Kshuhi.His caressing her head and told her he is friend of Arnav and her asking him to make sure her best friend and big bro is fine with her being with Arnav.Though, she is an adult ,but still you always owe to your loved ones.

Payal's confession , her dil ki baaat 😳Aadi tak pohchi akhir

The thing I love ,you never leave any character .👏

JPalo , finally realized and must say , his words are so meningful⭐️

So Arun has proposed Anjali and that is why she was upset.Khushi ke aansoo😊

So now I will be waiting for the second envelop😊


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Edited by xZoyax - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful ,👏

so it was a play,the marriage has done in a play and their hearts are accepting it ,but it seems they are taking blessings from their elders, especially Khsuhi.

I love it , please update soon😳

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