#3: The Alternate Universe-Retelling IPKKND (Thread 4 link on Pg 1) - Page 81

Originally posted by: Mikolingam

Just loving it more and more .mlived the way you describe the garden beautiful good choice of words

Originally posted by: shalbi

I didn't think it will unfold like that but as U said, expect the unexpected...

for future I don't really guess what will happen as I m clueless..

But waiting to read this one week trip details... Continue soon

Originally posted by: angeldream14

Loved it

So will ASR's sharp brain decode the truth

Or will khushi in her anger blurt the truth

Originally posted by: ..ASR.lover..

Fabulous Update...

4500 WORDS...OMG...I fainted there n there..

But I loved it...

Awww...I am sooo cute...(I mean Appu is soo cute..)

Heheheehe I loved the way u used Arush's name...

Cinderlla coat lol...That was hilarious...

Bt I am sad...!!!! Maine bhi toh sahi guess kiya ?

Anyways loved it...

Cant wait to read what happens ahead...

Thanks for the pm...

:D

Originally posted by: ..RareGem..

Looks like Arnav will soon find out that he is the father of Nikhil. I loved the bonding between Arnav and Nikhil. It's natural for the kids to get inspired by someone, especially by their fathers. He is idealizing his Arnav uncle because he likes him and his personality inspired him. Arnav also like Nikhil! But why fear gripping Khushi's heart seeing him getting close to Arnav. The truth will come out one day. Her secret is almost on the verge of coming out. Payal and Akash part was nicely done. Last scene you've written it so brilliantly. I just love it. Angry Raizda looks so sexy! Super excited to read the next part. This chapter was fabulous. Thanks!

Originally posted by: enlightenme

I knew for sure this is not the update where Arnav would be able to know about his son. I'm just hoping Khushi to somehow gets rid of Shyam. What I don't understand is why does Shyam even wants Nikhil's custody he know for sure that Nikhil is not his biological son. He can prove that in the court and get divorce saying that Khushi lied to him and they got married he didn't know that he was not Nikhil's father.

Originally posted by: smilejans

Excepted! A big twist don't happen by hurry-burry. Its takes a certain time to make a twist, obviously that time could take by our ASR. He pick the pieces and join it to know the truth. And he confront khushi about of hiding his son. Will wait and see his it unfolds.

Chote wala Nikil antics is cute, sorry... sorry, its handsome😆

Aashu cute and playing Cupid beside of anajli. Akash brain acted very well that makes payal accept his love. Happy raiazda welcomed her. Nice going.

Originally posted by: Desire6

Hehehhe!!!!!!!😆😆😆😆!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously...nikhil kicked appu...aww bechari..

Oteri!!!!!!!! Yaha toh khushi ..behosh ho gayi.😲.. i had thought. Many scenario ..ki aisa hoga ..waisa hoga😳...bt aisa hoga ...yeh toh nahi socha tha..heheheh!!!!!!

Mujhe toh laga tha ... arnav will b getting a a big wala zatka..bt 😃😃😃

Khushi faiting..dat really surprised me.😲..hhahahah!!!!!!!!!!!!!! appu s really smart for her age...

Her knowledge on honeymoon suit...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤣

Seems like she is a studious baby..mamma papa ki her baat ko mann laga ke dyaan say sunti hai..😆😆😆😉

Dat really craked me..hhahah!!!!! 🤣

Oh ..he hasn't joined d dots..bt rather he felt bad ..thinking dat Nikhil is shyam ka son...

Poor soul was doin QnA wit Nikhil...bt kuch ..ugal nahi paya...

Loved how Nikhil admires😳 ..loves his uncle ..nd how ...arnav feels a pull towards Nikhil..

Eventhough for d time being Nikhil is shyam ka son na ..for him..

Bt loved how he bbed khushi wit his gaudian dailoge.😳..

Poor khushi now ll have to bear tantrum of chota pack n bada pack..chota tho phir b sambal jayega..🤣🤣

Bada tho..pakka ..khushi..ko phir faint karayega...😆😆😆😆

Nikhil ..cutiepie..wants to be arnav. In fancy dress...how cute of him😃...nd khushi ka reaction on thinking abt appu n Nikhil ka relation...bechari...😵

Payal nd aakash ki gaadi ko red signal mil gaya..finally...bt seriously shalu for a nano sec i was shocked😲 dat is she gonna spill everythin in front of aakash..b4 even james bond ko pata chale..😎

Bt no she didn't say everythin...

Bt den again..loved manorama ka lovely gesture..towards payal..she is so sweet...

So payash has made a team..to bring dem together..wanna see..how khushi gona react to it..😆😆

Nikhil ka takewounda style..reminds me of khushi ka sleepin ...apne mumma pay gaya hai..heheh!!!!!!🤣

simply loved d update...

aur...even if der is no cliffhanger..dear..i tho like...aur thoda likh leti toh kitna acha hota..🤔

eagerly waiitn .f...for next part...

cant wait for to know..aur kya uthal puthal machega..is trip main..am sure ..itna jaldi james bond yeh dots toh nahi jodega...ki...nikhil is his son...bechare ko..like...took ages to join d dots were he had met her ..nd wat had happened btwn dem...

seems like ek aur damaka hoga...for sure..for dis to come out..

nd i am really waiitn to see nd read dat cute dhamaka ke khulasa... shalu ki zubani...

next part jaldi dena...

Divya...

Originally posted by: shalini.ranjan

Hey Appu jaan...omg you fainted...paani laau? 😆 or maybe juice? LOL

Did you...sahi guess...? check again 😉

Well kehne main kya jaata hai..Dat I sahi Guessed...😆

*clearing throat*

Very captivating FF... and I like the way your portraying Khushi all strong and controlled...

Nikhil is a darling and I hope Shyam goes away from their life soon! His intentions are not good

Its high time for Arnav to break the engagement with lavanya!

Why I feel Arnav will not find out about nikhil being his so easily... are you planning a twist!

Awww! Ashu playing cupid!

Looking forward to next