#2: The Alternate Universe- Retelling IPKKND (Thread 2 Complete)

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Tushaline

@Tushaline

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Posted: 10 years ago

#331

awesome update...n it was interesting

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#332

Amazin part Shalu..as usual..
i wish i get next part of it ..sooner...

comming to part...

Aww...poor...Pam..was so worried for wat nd how Arnav ll react..
no actually was worried abt his diffrent behaviour..nd was fine..wen he actually blasted on her..
😆
she must b thinking ..lol..my boss is fine..now..
Heheheh!!!!!!!!!!! she too thinks...like me ..dat Dr is Charming...

So...Arnav reaction was expected ...so was he frustrated due to his attraction towards Khushi..
those undeniable..sparks..those dreams..or was it dat coz she is married..

or coz of d reason dat she is not ready for divorce...'
waise y d hell is she not ready for divorce ...nd is der any ..miss ...or a truth,..whch she doesnt want to come out...😕

Ek taraf...Khushi..is trying to avoid him d best..on other hand ...arnav is kind of obsessed for her..
nd in all dis choas...Nikhill seems ..to hav bcome a fan of arnav...lol ..nice goin kid..
even knows...arnav like black suits...😃😃😃
still i am shipping ha...Arnav n nikhil...to be blood related...😳
dont laugh..🤔 i am happy..shipping dem together
kitne..similarities hai dono main..
count karke batau kya?????🤔

bt ...Woman..i so love Khushi for not been a cry baby or senti...nd not dat easy to get..
nd on other hand..arnav is as always...egoist...nd ..still he had his upper hand...
made her agree for dinner date...
wat he wants to know..

nd ..so bday is on card...and am so looking forward..nd i guess..khushi didnt acknowldge...nikhil addressing arnav..nd i guess khusi to b taking nikhil..
cant wait to see a blow on arnav knowing khushi has a son..
or is dis ll be d incident which ll make arnav remeber..dat wat had happend in past..
wanna see..ll his equation change to hate or love after knowing or remembering who she is

U little evil..🤗 has kept so many loop holes..for us to ponder like

"Or maybe he loses his sleep because he has a guilty conscience?'
means..wat she meant by dat...
nd in all Karan...he is so good..was trying to help her out...
nd Charming Dr...acha salah dey raha tha..😆😆😆
bt ..worst was...buaji seriously...Payal nd Arnav...
reading dis...i was...Haaye rey Nandakishore...
yeh kaise jodi bana diya...
😆
nd Payal...hm...looks..like..Thoda sa pyar hua hai...
nd thoda...Hai hai..bye bye..Mami ko milne ke baad shayad🤣

Amzing part...dear...
cont soon..
lovin d story...very much..

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khushboo

@khushiarsha

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#333

its amazing
so many what if and whats not
entire story has suspense twist in every part
its so gud
i m loving this story

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#334

Hmm waiting to find out what happened in their past

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jheel

@Bhavikakosambia

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#335

hey i read your story in one go and loved it!

right now there are too many emotions in my head so i will give a more detailed review later 😊

P.S.thanks for the PM😃

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Aishwarya Kommu

@aishwarya48

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#336

Nice updates😃

I love your portrayal of the characters!!
Such nice writing!!
Words cannot express how amazing it is😆

Update soon!

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#337

Lovely story.. Read the whole chapters in one go..!
Beautifully written.. Very fresh concept..!
Thanks for pm.. Plz add me n do pm...!!

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: nadine_lopez_48
Nice updates😃
I love your portrayal of the characters!!
Such nice writing!!
Words cannot express how amazing it is😆
Update soon!

Thanks Nadine...glad you liked it!