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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#541

First and foremost, I was jumping seeing Desperate Housewives Narrator, Mary Alice Young quoted at the beginning of chapter. One of my Fav show. It had some amazing characters.

Coming to the update, No comment until I see Arnav POV. Shyam is creepwa like always. Aman is the husband of Anjali...yay. Looks like Aashu and Nikki are bonding. cute. She is already calling him chote...LOL.

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smric

@smric

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Posted: 10 years ago

#542

Loved it!

So Anjali and Nani doesnt know Arnav is in live in relationship with Lavanya. That poor girl probably loves him and he is too much in his state of "no commitment"

Now that Arnav and Khushi has met wonder what will happen? How will they progress from here

Whats with Rukmini? Is she the girl with similarities with Khushi?? The girl is drugged..sick shyam.

Waiting for next update.😊

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@addicted25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#543

👏 👏 👏 oh wow so many questions! What happened in sheesh mehl with Arnav, why does he affect her so, and he is being nice... . Is Arnav Nikils real father?

Shyam is sleezeball, so I take it Rukhmani is a young girl who looks like khushi [:'(] bad news for both of them.
Now you have your laptop back any chance of another update soon... its not a clifhanger as such, but we need to know more...😉
By the way I love your writing easily read and written realy well.

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zayana khan

@zayana123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#544

Surely love this part... i love arnav & khushi meeting...

I love appu & nikki too.. they are cute... Eagerly waiting 4 Arnav POV...

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 10 years ago

#545

Hmm... Arnav and Aman were friends from school so does that mean Aman is younger to Anjali? It's nothing that I have an issue with, just curiosity.

So they are close enough to share secrets that even Arnav doesn't share with anyone, even let the slip happens of his no-entry zones. So it means he was forced into getting engaged and Arnav and Lavanya's relation is of convenience and not love. But that's what Arnav thinks what about Lavanya?

Didn't he raised her expectation by putting a ring on it?

So Arnav remembers Khushi's eyes and even complemented her for the same leaving her flustered after her outburst something she completely didn't expect and he put her on his team for the project. What's on his mind?

And what happened in sheesh mahal between these two which would bring the memories back to Khushi? Is there anything worst than Shyam or better than nikhil which Khushi can remember through those memories?

Nikhil and aparna friends and even went ahead with Di and chotey relation, interesting.

Will nikhil be there waiting for Khushi or will she go hysterical not finding him at school premises.

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manugan

@manugan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#546

Interesting perspective! ⭐️

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#547

wow... What a great second encounter... what does Arnav want now..? what is he trying to play at ..? what more troubles are going to pop up now..? Shyam is a as slimy and disgusting...

I so love Aman and Appu... thats great bond formed between Apoorva and Nikhil... chote...really..cute and sweet..

But I am shocked Khushi forgot her son because of Arnav.. It could have been dangerous..

waiting for next update already...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#548

very well written...interesting update...👏

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Nikita

@nia07

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Posted: 10 years ago

#549

Arnav looks less complicated till now;maybe when we'll get to know more of him later the level increases.

Khushi was being a perfect mother.Her bond with Nikhil is just so adorable,A perfect mother son duo.

And the meet,after reading teaser,I too expected Arnav to act something on khushi's line of thoughts,but his reaction was a total shocker,I'm not complaining.

She has refused to be on his team right now,but She will have to work with him,he will ensure of it,right?

Appu is Ashu,I guess.She is a rockstar,smart and compassionate kid,huh,agreed totally.Appu Nikhil bonding is really to look out for.

Shyam is darker and more evil than we thought him to be.

Loved reading this mahaupdate.

Now that your laptop is fit and fine,don't make us wait too long to read Arnav's pov

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@_CrystalFlames_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#550

First of all sorry for being so late shalu di...
But you know i am quite busy due to my exams & classes...
So hope you won't mind it at all...

Well coming to the update it was just awesome...

Loved arnav-aman bonding too much...
So arnav is officially engaged to lav just because of his di & jiju...
Don't worry aman ASR heart will beat...
Abhi tak hamari khushi n apna jaadu kaha chalaya hai...😆
But most of all i loved their cool bonding at top...
The way they talk with each other at such a ease remind me of my bond with my bestie...
And i so miss her reading their convo di...
After logging out i am just gonna call her and uska sir khaane vali hu...
And i know that call will not be cut atleast before an hour (that's too short for both of us as we will talk about everything & anything.. 😆
That's what kind of brat we are specially if we both are together...😆)

Ohh... Khushi ; Nikhil and bhuaji are just fab...
Bhuaji ka nandikshore khatam nahi hone vala naa di...😉
ROFL i was laughing like hell when i read this line...

"Hai re Nandkishore...eek kaam kar. Tum na apni maa ko hi bech do. Waise bhi tumhari jarurato ko pura karte karte ee bechari sab paise kharch kar deti hai. Ise bechke jo paise milenge na, usse brown black saare shoes khareed lena, nandkishore"

I mean seriously she asked to sell his mother... And then his reply

"if mom goes away, then who will be my dancing partner!"

Seriously he wants his mom only for dance... Lol... Dance nahi to mummy nahi...
aww... Such a cutie pie he is...

Well now come to our own arshi...
They are fighting like cat & dog verbally but still khusji felt the change in atmosphere...
Hayee... Hamare hot shot arnav k jaadu aate hi mahaul badal diya...

Havao n kuch kaha...
Ghatao n kuch suna...
Aayi pyaar ki y rut badi suhaani...
Tu darna naa oo meri raani...

That's what i imagined that time... 😆

And now come to our two cute brat...
Nikhil was so silent but apni mumma ki tarah irritate badi jaldi hota hai...
Wow!!! Surprise for my puru (i mean your appu and our Apporva)
Congrats puru tera name to world famous ho gaya...
[IF p jo famous woh world famous ho gaya naa... 😉]
Now coming back to update i like appu's character (di the character traits are just like our puru always happy; smiling & chit chatting 😊)
What the???
Nikki... I mean seriously...
Thank god atlast she settled on chotte... (Anjali's trait 😆)
And he on appu di...
He literally threat her that if she calls him nikki then he will not call her di...
And he went with her...

Now what is this arnav upto????
Wanting to work with khushi ehile she is rejecting due yo her personal problems...

Last but not the least this crerpwa shyam has a tail of dog...
It's said naa...
Kutte ki dum kitni bhi koshish karlo par tedhi ki tedhi hi rfhti hai... 😆

I think aaj mai kuch jyada hi bol gayi...
Ab mujhe ek lambi saas (breath) lene ki jarurat hai...
To isi k saath m is comment ko bhi vishram deti hu...
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Phir jaldi milte hai next update par...
Tab tak k liye bye bye nahi kahungi...
Aree yaha nahi to kya hua personally pm/scrap s baat kar lenge...
Q kuch galat kaha kya di...
😊