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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#751

wow another beautiful update👏 👏 👏

I admire Arnav and his dadi strong bonding. They talk businees which is awesome. She is so cool and wise and read Arnav like he is an open book to her.

I felt IPK touch in Arnav and Khushi first metting. They met at a heavenly place, she fell and he saved her.

Finally a man cross the boundries which khushi has fiercely drawn around her.

Arnav was awesome, i love his charcater and i also find him wise and very smart. I don't think he will treat her badly and accuse her for his sister. if was past and nodoby can stop fate play its game.

I love Arnav and khushi interaction. Khushi is a very smart and alert girl.

Arnav flirted with her and i am sure he will count seconds for her phone call. The way he put forward his wish to know her was very sweet, that show that he respects women and not like illmannered, immoral rich guys.

I can't wait to read about khushi's decision. It would be awesome If she plan to call him because in this way she will take a step to deal with her past demons and I think no one except Arnav or someone from the raizada family can free her from the misery.

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#752

Great update. Loved Arnav and his grandma's convo.

Are you from south?

Thanks for the PM.

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Devika

@WaterIce

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#753

Good chapter😊

Your description of the places is really beautiful

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ipkkndkasr

@ipkkndkasr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#754

👏 Awesome update. Waiting for next update 😳 update ASAP

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#755

It's like one minute you are on 9th cloud and next second on the floor with big thud. . well in this update it happend twice with khusi one time physically and next emotionally. poor thalli.

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#756

i admire your writing skills. very evocative of the mood and feel of the place. loved the interaction with his grandma and her musings on him all too often the one holding the family together is not the eldest.

fully understand her reticence about her personal details. but the rest of the chapter was definitely interesting. i guess it's true. be careful what you wish for, you might get it. she wanted to confront her past and here it is!

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#757

Ok.. dat was an awesome update. Dey both met.. omg.. n initial attraction started. But is khushi gonna cal him back.. fingers crossed

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rockingsoni

@rockingsoni

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#758

unexpected encounter!!!!!

Loved the description of the raw nature you penned down...

One question in my mind, Does Raizada family held Khushi responsible for Anjali's disappearance!!!

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#759

Interesting turn of events... So they meet...the attraction is unavoidable...wouldloveto see them fighting all the troubles lying ahead... U wrote the chapter beautifully..it was like unpainted a beautiful picture in front of us...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#760

That was one amazing update.

I loved the way you describe beautiful mountains and tea land. Loved the beautiful morning of mountains, make me want to go there.

Arnav and his dadi's conversation was brilliant, her advices shows her experiences. Your writing makes it so real. Arnav has great hobby of riding bike in mountains, his way of forgetting worries. This arnav of your story is different in so many ways from DND.

And finally they meet and what a meeting. Loved it how arnav make sure she is fine, even if she was not helping much. But the attraction was there . He is a true gentleman. And boy now she knows who he is. That was a big blow. I don't think she will call him now. But knowing how you love to make twist, she might call him or he himself find her some where.

And then love hate story will start. It's true that it is very frustrating to wait for suspense to clear out soon, but that is what makes story more interesting, and end will be worth waiting.

So I will be very patient for this story.

Thanks for giving us brilliant update once again and for pm too.

Edited by archnahardik123 - 10 years ago