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CHAPTER 8 WHAT IS HAPPENING HERE

"I investigated the key deeply and look what I found", Subhi said excitedly and she broke the key into two pieces. "You broke it", Dhrishtradyumna shouted. "Stupid look here", Subhi pointed at the thin paper piece that was housed in the key. "What is that?", Govind asked. "Well lets see what it is", Subhi said as she took the paper out and unrolled it to see what was inside it. "It's is the map to the Chamber of the Dragon vase", Panchi shouted out of excitement. "Now we know how to get to the vase", Govind said with a relaxed voice.
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"Aww... How romantic of you Vasusen", Vrushali cried. "Thank you dear. You know I worked all day long to get this romantic set up for our date tonight", Vasusen said innocently. "What a great liar", Paarth and Bheem, who were secretly listening to their conversation, said together. "Did you like the food?", Vasusen asked. "Yes! It is just perfect for a romantic date", Vrushali said. "I cooked it myself", Vasusen lied again. "Oh god... bhai please speak a word true. I cooked it not you", Bheem thought. "And what about the decoration around", Vasusen asked. "I did it", Paarth shouted before Vrushali could reply. Astonished that he was, Vasusen asked, " Both of you here!". "We'll yes brother and we have been watching all the lies you have been speaking so far", Bheem laughed and by mistake opened the secret. "Bheem what did you just say!", Vrushali said. "Ammm... yes bhabhi... actually... hmm... Paarth run for your life", Bheem shouted and ran away. "Meet you later nice people", Paarth said and ran away as well. "Oh... I see you had been working all day long... Haan", Vrushali said. "Well...not exactly the whole day...", Vasusen said hesitatingly. "So for how long?", Vrushali said with a face red with anger. "Well I came here half an hour ago so...", Vasusen closed his ears with his fingers as he said this. "Vasusen...", Vrushali yelled.
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"And that is why I am here", Bheem told everything it Hidimba. "Hey! that was not your mistake. Vasusen bhai should have done it all himself. It is really wrong not to give time to your love and even wrong is the act of lying to her", Hidimba said in a treacherous manner. "Now again. It has started the love seekh", Bheem thought. "Bheem don't you agree?", Hidimba asked. "I completely do dear", Bheem replied. "I knew it you would never ever do like that. Afterall my sweet teddy bear always has some special time for me", Hidimba said pulling Bheem's cheeks. "By the way did you take the look at books today", Bheem said. "No! I did not have much time", Hidimba said. "I had a hair styling appointment, then shopping, a bit of dining with by brother and then finally home", Hidimba told Bheem. "Oh! You must be really tired. Isn't it?", Bheem asked with a sad face. "Yes I am it was a really long day dear", Hidimba said. "Well shall I cook something for you?", Bheem asked. "Yes! Why not! Please! I am dying of hunger!", Hidimba said with a puppy face.
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"Ok. So we'll be leaving tomorrow for the Chamber of the Dragon Vase", Govind informed. "And Govind wthis we includes?", Subhi asked. "Dhrishtradyumna and me", Govind told. "Well what about me and Subhi?", Panchi asked. "We need someone here too", Dhrishtradymna reminded. "Well I agree", Subhi said. "Okay so now who is interested in eating pasta?" , Panchi asked. "Oh, I am", Dhrishtradyumna shouted. "I am not that stupid to miss paata made by Panchi", Subhi said. "But Panchi we can order something from hotel also. Right?", Govind quothed in disagreement. "Why don't you like paasta made by me Govind?", Panchi asked. "No. But...", Govind started but didn't complete.
"So it is final I'll cook paasta today. get ready to lick you finger people", Panchi announced.
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"So that is the problem", Paarth said. "Well if you cannot find that matter for the assignment in books search on the net. Just use some brain. God have not given it just for show", Panchi laughed. "Panchi you just know to make fun of me", Paarth said. "Well it is not me. You are the one who force me to", Panchi did it again. "You know what I don't just want to talk to you. Ammm... God why did prof. Drona grouped me with you. You, you just go away, you , you die. I just don't care", Paarth said so and hanged the phone. "Stupid. I mean what is I say. I just teased him a bit nothing else. He just over-reacts way too much", Panchi said while she was lighting the stove. "God! Have everything and everyone gone useless together? This lighter why isn't it working?", Panchi yelled. "I should better use this", Panchi said as she threw the lighter away and picked up the matchbox. And just as the matchstick caught fire there was a big blast.
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"Blast! Blast! Bhai!", Subhi came running in Govind's room. "What happened Subhi?", Govind and Dhrishtradyumna stood up and asked together. "Bahi! There was a big blast in the kitchen and it is burning away like paper", Subhi said with a feel of terror in her eyes. "What!", Dhrishtradyumna said. "How?" , Govind asked. "And...", Subhi continued. "And what Subhi?", Dhrishtradyumna asked with his nerves trembling with fear. "Panchi was in there when the blast took place", Subhi said with tears flowing down her eyes.
TBC...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Subhi is one hell of puzzle -solver. Nice.

Vasusen-Vrushali fighting... 😆.. well its all Vasusen's fault lying to his darling Vru... Paarth & Bheem eavesdropping 😆 Actually they proved to Vru that they both are her reliable Devars to do undercover investigation for Vasusen... 😆 😆

Bheem will cook for Hidimbi & she makes a puppy face... Aww that was sweet.

Oh... why is Govind not willing to eat Panchi's paasta ?? Did he forsee something bad is going to happen next morning in the bathroom... 😆 😆 🤣

Blast !! why hav u made Panchi so accident-prone ?? 😭 Hope she will be alright.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ui...Nice update. How dare Vasusen take lie to Vru? He got what he deserved, the bad boy.
Fire can not harm Panchi I hope.
Overall, a wonderfully sweet update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh oh ...hope Panchi is ok!! will Paarth feel bad since he asked her to die?!! nice family dynamics...
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That was a salty start for PP (Parth-Panchi)! I loved that part when Vasusen was lying to Vrushali and Parth and Bheem were eavesdropping... She got caught in the fire..uh-oh! Update soon and thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
good update yaar!*:) but still want Paarth-Subhi as a pair!:D fingers crossed *Paarth-Subhi*❤️and panchi wid someone else..!!!loved the vasusen and vru part!:D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hpatgiri

Subhi is one hell of puzzle -solver. Nice.

Vasusen-Vrushali fighting... 😆.. well its all Vasusen's fault lying to his darling Vru... Paarth & Bheem eavesdropping 😆 Actually they proved to Vru that they both are her reliable Devars to do undercover investigation for Vasusen... 😆 😆

Bheem will cook for Hidimbi & she makes a puppy face... Aww that was sweet.

Oh... why is Govind not willing to eat Panchi's paasta ?? Did he forsee something bad is going to happen next morning in the bathroom... 😆 😆 🤣

Blast !! why hav u made Panchi so accident-prone ?? 😭 Hope she will be alright.

I can just tell you that in this update I tried my best to keep it a equal balance of fun and sorrow. Though if I talk of Panchi I have not made her an accident prone to be true. the last time she was trapped it was, I agree an accident but this time it surely has a larger range of effect I have planned. 😉
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Originally posted by: anshikashaheer

good update yaar!*:) but still want Paarth-Subhi as a pair!:D fingers crossed *Paarth-Subhi*❤️and panchi wid someone else..!!!loved the vasusen and vru part!:D

Really sorry dear! If you were heart by that Parrth-Panchi scene in the seventh chapter. And of course you can support paarth-Subhi still because I haven't confirmed Paarth - Panchi together. 😉
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CHAPTER 9 : IS THERE A CHANCE
"She is ok now. Usually in such cases a patient is burnt away on the spot but I guess this will be the first case in my life in which the fire was not able to touch a patient. We checked but there is not even a single burn on her body. She is a really fortunate girl. I must say.", the doctor said. "I agree doctor. But if she has not got any burn or any other fire injury then why did we find her unconscious. Is there some other serious problem?", Dhrishtradyumna asked for conforming of his sister's well being. "Oh! You don't have to worry about it. She might have fainted due to shock or out of fright. It is natural for any human being to react in the same way in such a condition.", the doctor told Dhrishtradyumna. "So when can we take her home?", Govind asked impatiently. "Once she come bake to her true senses, then we will keep her in observation for 5-6 hours and if she is normal we may discharge her today itself.", the doctor said with a smile to indicate to all not to worry. "Thank you. But sir can we see her now?", Subhi asked. "Yes. Infact it will be better if she finds a home like environment here. it will help her recover fast because the situation she face, there she would be more metally stressed than physically so you have to make her free as comfortable as you can.", he said. "Thank you sir.", Dhrishtradyumna said. "It is my duty. Well I have to check other patients too so I have to leave.", the doctor said as her took leave.
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"It is ready!", Vasusen shouted out of excitement. "What happened? Why are to deafening other?", Vrushali yelled. "I have made it! My latest creation.", Vasusen said happily. "And may I ask what is that?", Yudhishtir said while he was enter the hall. "It is a device which is capable of locating any object if it has left it's particle traces in the environment. I call it - The Fishing Rod.", Vasusen. announced in front of them all. "And you think it will help us in finding what?", Bheem asked as he completed with his fifth apple. "Well pretty much everything. But only if it has left it's particle traces in the environment", Vasusen said. "Yes, yes we understood. Particle trace, environment, find. But what are you going to find using it?", Paarth asked, he was really excitedly to use Vasusen's new creation. "We will use it in finding the Third Scroll. But only if...", Vasusen presented the condition. "Only if?", Nakul asked. "Only if the Scroll is not put to a utility because if it has been put to it's appropriate use then the particle traces would end with the object.", Vasusen told all. "So that means if the Scroll is used then we won't be able to acquire it again. Great! And I just don't think they would be that stupid to simply keep the Scroll for decoration. They would have surely used it.",Sahadev kept his point ahead. "I agree. We have to find a better way. Maybe something which can be more reliable than the Scroll. Ammm... Wait a second. We can find the location where those thieves work. They would have kept all the artifacts there. Am I right?", Yudhishtir suggested. "Excellent! Yudhishtir you are learning from me. Ok but how do I put the name of the place here?", Vasusen asked. "Well... Why don't you try inserting 'Pink Emerald artifact' that would reveal the location of all the artifact related to Pink Emarald that have been found so far.", Paarth kept his idea in front of everyone. "Yes!", Vasusen so and did just that. "Here are the co-ordinates! Bheem just put them in the location search engine.", Vasuen dictated the co-ordinates to Bheem. "It is just 10 km to the South of Bangalore.", Bheem revealed it to all. "So now, now get ready thieves to accept you defeat.", Paarth said with a want of revenge.
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"Panchi! Eat it or I will stuff it all in your mouth.", Subhi scolded Panchi. "Eww... I won't eat this dull, slimy and extremely tasteless looking thing!", Panchi shouted. "Are you going to eat it yourself or I will have to stuff it all?", Subhi said with her eyes attacking Panchi. "Okay. Give it to me. God! I hate hospitals and I hate hospital food.", Panchi cried as she picked up the spoon to start on her mission. "Wait!", Govind shouted. "Take this too.", he added a bit of spice in her dish. "Thank you Govind. I would have died without no spice in this. Well now I can say that I will be eating something with some taste.", Panchi said doing that finger expression. "Bahi...", Subhi yelled. "I know that doctor said not to give her anything with spice but it is hardly any and leave all aside how will she eat this ewww thing without spices.", Govind said with his natural care for Panchi. "Mam. Your observation hours end here. You can now leave for home.", the nurse entered with the good news of the hours. "Oh finally...", Panchi said with a sigh of relief.
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"Yes! here we reach our destination. The Fishing Rod shows this place as the exact location for the building with the Pink Emerald artifacts in it", Bheem said as he stopped his car. "But Bheem. Are you sure it is...", Vasusen asked for confirmation. "Why! I told youuu... Wohooo what is this..", Bheem said with his eyes popping out. "How can those things be here?", Paarth said with a shocked face. "Well we can atleast search for them.", Yudhishtir said.
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"So Panchi here we reach home.", Dhrishtradyumna said as he stopped the care. But there was a big surprise waiting for them. "Lets get down and get back on the quest.", Govind said. they passed through some trees as usual but the view that came into sight after that was more astonishing. "How?", Dhrishtradyumna shouted. "God! Who did it?", Subhi cried. "God! What will we do now!", Govind expressed is worries. "But how can it just simply...", Panchi could not speak. "You extinguished the fire in the kitchen. Right?", Panchi asked Dhrishtradyumna. "Yes! I remember I extinguished it completely.", Dhrishtradyumna said. "So then how could it just...", Subhi said as she cried on their loss. "How did our Broken Spell burn away?", Govind said with suspicion.
TBC...😳
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 11 years ago
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