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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

My first reaction is thank god they not brother and sister...and now back to story what a mess...what will Arnav think about his father and what impact it will be on his sisters...and khushi how will she cope...and they just agreed to give love a chance...will they give chance to each others...

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#332

OMG finally the truth n mystery is out!!!!

Why this had to happen at such wrong timing , when once again love n trust came knocking at their steps...indeed it was the night of harsh n painful revelations... Feeling so sad at Arnav n khushis agonising n painful state ... How r these two wonderful souls ever gng to comeback from this bitter truth... Waiting to know more...

Wonderful update very well written 👏 Could feel each m every emotion each one was gng through

Thnx for pm

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#333

Oh I got a spot on page 50 for commenting on chapter 50
Sandhya, what was that dear? You blew me off with this update-
Oh oh so it was arnav- my god, now that the truth is out, I feel like reading the whole of DND with this new information in mind
Oh poor khushi she must be shattered and devastated on this new bit of information - I can't imagine what would be arnav's reaction to it
Chapter 50 truly rocked - what a way to mark the half century sandhya
I loved the way khushi opened up to him and I was immensely loving their love story before the whole truth of their existence was shoved on them
Fantastic update sandhya - u rocked as usual dear
It was really mind blowing - truly worth the wait

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shiv456

@shiv456

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#334

so back to square one nice update

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#335

an eid gift.
which i will unwrap later.

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#336

RES

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Sandhya

My heart is still racing and my fingers are shaking as I type this!! If I thought Arnav's confession was a bomb, this one is showing a mushroom cloud over my heart and head!! Talk about being unprepared when you click the link to an update.. :)

I am not talking about the story - I am talking about the way you told this story, this particular update..In your last update, I walked away thinking Anya was Garima's daughter, but then I gave it some more thought and realized that Ahalya didnt mention any of her older children when she was with Greeshma.. and then Bingo!! But I waited for you to unfurl this mystery and boy!! I love the way you did it.

One should learn to write drama right here.. :) You let the pulse quicken, then race with building tension, then thunder as the four are about to meet and right then, ROAR with climax!! :) Kudos to you, my writer friend!! My pulse quickened, raced, thundered and roared at the end.. and I am still shaking as I type this..

There are so many of the usual highlights I wanted to share - the sheer poetry in your thought, expressed in words.. insight into your characters.. and your readers.. but I am not going to do that.. somehow that seems too mundane, too pedestrian.. so I will leave this comment with my heart still roaring, fingers still shaking.. and a smile that you did this with your writing!

Bring it on my writer friend.. I will be prepared for it next time.. :) hee hee..

Edited by Mirabell - 11 years ago

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avchowdhury

@avchowdhury

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#337

I am spellbound after reading the update just fantastic

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lOVENI

@lOVENI

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Ah...such a heart ache..have Arnav/Khushi no respite...

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zooni

@zooni.blue

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#339

You weaved magic... W
Shocking...arnav was the baby ...
Beautifully writte

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#340

once you revealed Garima to be Greeshma, I was wondering about the Arnav Khushi blood relation and then you brought in the hysterectomy. And dramatic revelation for the two of them.

Well done!!!

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