Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132 - Page 62

oh wow fatastic update IS- truly an inspired update. Had my heart racing as always and my eyes dashing across the lines to know what happens next.

I absolutely love it when the good guys outwit the bad guys., quickly, quietly and effciently😃
The synchrony with the which Plan B was excecuted was almost poetry in motion.


Not allowing A and K to give in to their attraction in that beautiful early morning moment of peace (I could her the birds chirping and the warmth of the rays of sunshine! it was so beautiful) was a master stroke of narrative technique- the reader is caught effectively between desperately wanting to know how they escape and wanting to know how they deal with their mutual attraction.

Love the crisp and compact style of writing, you create the picture in a few effective strokes.

Ab phir disappear mat ho jaana please.😃 I want to know what happens next.

kya re
lord that i didnt see coming
shyam is CBI officer
what the
never ever dreamed thats his truth
wow dear you are good
real good dear
so he isnt the villain
but in fact is good guy
though he did lie
but if he wasnt the one to mess with their finances then who
someone else is the culprit
oh my thats even worse
he is undercover then
must be right
and ASR sure is good but seems things are not what they seem
khushi found out he isnt dhruv she sure was shocked
well she will be
but glad she gave him benefit of doubt
well lets see whats it all about
from shyam pov man
not just the jewels i hope
payal is right khushi is in trouble
but even we dont know what that trouble is
dadi is just pathetic
she doesnt know that arnav was the one who was with her
and dhurv with raizadas
forget her
am looking forward to shyam story now

your house seems to be guest central. that is good. family and friends are what it is all about👍🏼

thanks for the note..!!!!

Nice, I hope shyam and dhadhi get kicked out or better in jail. Does khushi have the missing pieces of the necklace?... maybe linked to her idol?

looking forward to the next chapter.

Inspired .. I am indeed id ka Chand ...😉 Dayr say aaya par dart aaya. What a nice chapter ... No prizes for guessing what part I loved the best ...😛 It was while I was reading the waking in his arms that I retaliated I had missed something. I had never read chapter 7. Loved the armoire ... An old childhood haunt ... Mysterious places to hide .. Love the fact that you wove his knowledge of his childhood happy adventures at a time like now. I know the villains will eventually get caught ... So for me these stolen moments ... Behind the curtain ... In a dark corridor are really what propels the story ... Inspired ... Lovely story so far ... And congratulations on the success ... Looks like quite a few people have discover your written talent ... Looking forward to the next update ... Hugs

yeh hui naa baat... wow... loved it... waiting for more...

Monday morning :P