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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Update
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Marvelous update.
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beautiful update...
all the evils are out of their life...
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Just finished reading all the chapters. It started out slow for few chapters, but it picked up after Arnav proposed to Khushi. So sad that only 2 chapters are left. PM me when you are ready with them.
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Such a beautiful story I loved it so much although its almost over with happy moments my heart still wants it go on and on can't wait to read next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
MY GOD !!! So it was Shyam who was the important person who was to come at 7pm to meet them. Parimala was going to get Khushi engaged to him !?

ARNAV CRIED LIKE A KID ! That too for the first time, when he saw a fainted Khushi. Poor Anjali couldnt handle him, but good sense prevailed and gave strength to Arnav by just reminding him who he actually was and had to do.

ANNIE !!! seriously ! ANNIE !!! When they were small Khushi being too small to pronounce Arnav called him Annie ! Thank you Arnav for putting up the photo along with the others to bring back happy memories for Khushi and realize that he was her Saviour always !

What a relief... What a relief Arnav must have had when Khushi recognised him as her Annie !

Candy even i'm taking a breath of relief... Thank god !... At last they are united !

Ahh... The camera, to keep an eye on all the happenings at Gupta Mansion. Smart move !

Was heartening when Arnav sees his family bonding, fussing, loving, laughing with Khushi.

Now comes the best part... Four people walking into Gupta Mansion, seating themselves comfortably. Now the serious part, the facts laid down, open infront of Parimala, her daughters and Shyam Sinha. The introductions by Aman Mathur was hilarious. Everytime stressing on Ms. Gupta soon to be Mrs. Raizada was classic, explaining what can be and cannot be done keeping a very poker straight, though not only him but Arnav, Khushi and Shyam Jha wanted to laugh out.

The legal matters explained by Shyam Jha was another one with precise timings at every sentence of the things happened. Also telling that Khushi was now the owner of Gupta Mansion. Also he did made things clear with Shyam Sinha, Parimala's lawyer, about all his illegal activities.

The whole No-Nonsense Business type talk was too Hilarious !

Damn in 23 minutes the whole so called conversation took place. All Parimala did was to pack up and leave the premises as she knew she had totally lost the battle.

I wish i'd been there, ok i wish i had Arnav's laptop to see the whole scene !

No cameras in the bedrooms ;D so in went Arnav and Khushi into Khushi's rooom.

Hide'n'Seek !! Awww !!! So sweet ! "I don't have to guess, Love.. Its only you who'll ever do that to me.. Its only to you that I give those rights.. Only you and no one else..."... Oh well leave them alone !...

Ok but besides the time when Arnav was awestruck by the gift Khushi gave him... A to the T a portrait of him, every line everything was so perfect that it looked like a photograph ! WOW !!! So...kisses began obviously... In between Khushi stating the fact that their family must have already started planning the wedding :D

Candy in one of the previous chapters, well not as well as you've written, but i did comment... ' Arnav : The Ray Of Khushi's Dawn ' and i guessed it right ! Like a movie !!




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Edited by NidhiNev - 11 years ago

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