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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TheDreamCatcher

wah.. kya baat hai.. aaj tanz badi megherbaan ho rahi hai hum par..

two back to back updates..
upar se dedication ka maska kyun lagaa rahi ho nautanki? You know naa we love you
ok coming to the update.. wah.. kya likha hai.. i guess i should stop watching the show and read your story instead where i get to see mature people..
And yes did i tell you i'm impressed by the engineering plans in this part? Too good for an 8th grader (or is it 7th? i'm confused still)
Anyways keep updating in this manner; simple, crisp and regular, as these are the reasons we absolutely love this story..


You guys seem to b showering me wd my much desired long comments, today! Am in eighth from scnd April xP and Tich...no maska only gratitude. Ji. Tanz Ko mehrbaani aarahi hai. XD and tysm fr ur detailed comment. Glad u luvd it. Simple, crisp and regular. If dts hw u wnt it, dts how it stays madamoiselle. Ur order, my command. Ys. Luv u too
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Posted: 11 years ago
I commented in a word just to irritate little Jane Austen and It got two likes... Himani di and Tanya Bohra, you guys are too much!! Lol
You guys really thought my comment would be of one word for my little angel!! So miss Bohra shall I start my story??
Abhi res karte hai, will comment later??
Btw your likes made me laugh!!

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----Su Che Bohra? Pehle ek dedication exam waaste aur ab yeh dedication TaSha ke waaste?----
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I am not going to comment as per your desire, it's not going to be long!!!!
Hatya ji, kitni baar karengi? Advertise karna banta hai... Now let's see how many names you have! Kiddo Jane Austen, Tanz, Tans, Tanu, Tani(ROFL!!), angel Bohra, Nautanki...endless!
Khatam ho Gaya comment, jaa like ka button press kar!
Toh aap Hume aap maska maar rhi h gratitude ke Naam pe!! Kya Sunna chahti hai? Abhi bolti hu...
I was stalking as usual and rambling which is even more obvious when I came across to the intro post of some newbie with the username consisting love or something( trust me I got to know the actual words of it when I mentioned you in my ff)
How did we start our sisterhood? Ah! A HOLA!! That too from me, which means that these four letters has sewn us together, what strength the word has, amazed!
Then what did we talk about, ah!! Channel V Shows and favourite couple, however I had only one other than PaRsh which is rather history now.
Now let me think, what have we both share till date? Books, shows, interests, politics, craps, donkeys, mirrorpose, chahu ya chanu (lucky she), ffs, OS,ss, nautanki, senti,emo,, proposals, rejections(of course from you...secret revealed which is harmless!) and what not?
You actually have diminished the difference in our age!! Ya toh tu matured Che ya Mai immatured hoon...and the answer is both ways...It's not only you in the whole forum who is my as you say, bessht wala friend or pen sister,but definitely you are my only soul sister I have, on IF or in real life! I just adore it when we seek each other's opinions and then realise that it's of no use because what we thought or felt was mutual... You are loved and will always be loved. I didn't mention anything about the update yet?
Ufff!! How does it turn out to be long every time...
Achha I wil do it... But for two chapters... Pending work is what I hate, yet I am never punctual...
Tujhe kya kahu, you know I can't be formal so you know what I must have felt while reading...
Best part?? Everyone said the hug and Sanyu saying aaj raat lol!
For me...
Sanyukta arranged the lights around the wooden roof of the shelter, luckily without tripping, slipping or falling...
This cracked me up... And you borrowed some knowledge from engineer, everything seemed too genuine and real re!!
I can't comment about your efficiency and age anymore, have already advertised a lot!!
I am planning to buddy you soon if you keep up your good job... Please send a PM to this Bechari bachhi and teach her how to write... *Hatya in her full form*
Now shall I end it, sona bhi hota hai, update ka time dekh aur tension Lena shuru kar!!
Now that I commented so much *my pehchaan * then I am expecting a 20 lines reply or more, no excuses and put your thoughts into it! Rambling will do too!!!
Maine suna hai ki tu aajkal bade chaur mein double dhamaka announcing!! *neha style---remember her miss V lover?* so let's wait for the surprise... Chal ab get lost!!!
Tashan mein Tashan mein!!!!!... Love you madam, did I need to mention this??
Chal it's a ritual so I did it!!!
TaSha for Life!!
PS...
Chal ab senti mat ho, Aisa Kuch Nhi likha hai Maine... Stop doing the happy dance in mind...
Wish me for exam! Bas thik hai, now don't read this crap again!! Don't rush to scrap me and scold me for staying up so late..
Btw Ipti DI??? Are you okay? Mansik santulan Bigad toh nahi Gaya!!!??
You made me write this khichdi language huh! Informality crossed limit! I myself am unaware of the language used it the comment!!
Edited by BeyondWords - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anki08

My dear kiddo jane austen,,I wont b wrong if i say your writings defy every adjective in every dictionary ..You infuse liveliness nd wonder in words,,nd provide a soul to the word called "sandhir"..Your writings are:-(1)grasping- it evokes anticipation in the readers..

(2)logistic-i mean there is no formula behind it,,but definitely an architecture..
(3)simple-but not dumbed down
(4)authentic-this is the foremost reason tht your writings are bound not to falter and keep acquiring landmarks...
It is not vague,,,and,,a perfect example of expression of lumpy jumble of words into smthing clear and magical...
Sandhir are very lucky to have themselves in your tiny and beautifully crafted hands...
Wish you all the success in your life kiddo!!!
You are born to rule...
Thts all i am really capable of in your appreciation...
Love you a loads and your soul sister tooo,,wish her a speedy recovery...May those creepy clouds of disease quickly fade ..
Waiting for tomorrow,,,double dhamaaka!!!;;;;.



Oh man!! Di you said it all... But I discovered a writer in you ever since you commented about MY randhir on his AT... So we- me and Tanya deserve to get a story dedicated... Don't we??
Please, **puppy face**
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wts with this MY randhir saga of yours...😳😳na na na,,galat baat kiddo,,dnt u luk like tht at smone else's propertyy...😉Nd u both soul sisters,,if smday i ever write on them,,it vl surely b dedicated to u..😆Hope kiddo jane austen doesnt kill me for discussing these personal sorta issues here...*runs*..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tanya!!!!!!

Gosh! I love your writing . This was amazing and I do want more :P

Looking forward to the two updates!! ❤️

Love,
Your Kriti Di 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was great to see them working together!!! wish they realise this in the show also... :D
well written... their camaraderie was a treat to read!! i had a smile on my face throughout the time i read it!!

and another commendable part was the way you described their idea..shows that you are really knowledgeable...way to go girl!! you rock!!

and about the length, tum chahe kitna hi lamba update do, ye dil maange more.. ;) :p
waiting for the double blast!! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeah they make perfct team togethr 😉
update is amazng ur just rockng wid ur writng skills luvd it ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tanya, how much do you lie? xP
First off, you're too young to be writing so well!
Secondly, I can't be so amazing that I get a mention more then once!

Man, two lovely updates made my day! Thank you for this! I see an upwards graph in your writing style, language and vocab and I couldn't have been prouder!

Lots of love! :D :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely parts both chapter 8 and 9 loved them , waiting 4 more of sandhir moments 😊 good going👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ms.P.K.Tunn

Tanya!!!!!!

Gosh! I love your writing . This was amazing and I do want more :P

Looking forward to the two updates!! ❤️

Love,
Your Kriti Di 😃


Thank you Kriti di! Yesh. Shall update tom. And u shud too!

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