Sandhir FF:Camp at Goa!*NEW Part 18 updating* - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
Tanz,
Sis I m loving this story! The SanDhir moments are totally 'awww'-inspiring!!!
Every idea is ingenious! And language top notch!!! How can a 13 year old have so much command over fiction writing?! My goddd! U amaze me!
Love u :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear...

sanyu is so smart ...mujhe to usame koi shaq nahi tha...lekin jis tarah se tree pe climb kiya...omg...sab ke sab specially randhir to shocked hoga...

i agree ke ab sanyu ka only saviour is back in full form...


lekin ye kya sandhir ko chod ke sab log treehouse mein...ab kya dono neeche kuch bhi kare koi disturbed nahi karga...randhir ki to chandi ho gayi...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: federized2210

Tanz,
Sis I m loving this story! The SanDhir moments are totally 'awww'-inspiring!!!
Every idea is ingenious! And language top notch!!! How can a 13 year old have so much command over fiction writing?! My goddd! U amaze me!
Love u :)

Anu dii. You made my day.. Actually my night. Thank youu soo muchh. Aap hi se toh sikhaa hai vocabulary and ideas xP
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Posted: 11 years ago
read the whole thing in one go!! nice story dear..and the fact that you managed this with your exams makes it even more commendable...mere upar toh curfew impose ho gaya tha exam time mein.. :p
i like the way you've showed sandhir... and yoyo toh yoyo hi rahega.. overall, all characters nicely portrayed.. good job! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tanya update kab milega...??
Plz update karo Yaar..!!:):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey tanya !!!
awesome one just loved it❤️
really u penned it perfectly👏👏
this is flawless and a picture perfect one
slipping and catching this has become a routine for sanyukta and randhir😃😉
the tree house is nice and the clues u r making they are interestin...very interesting...😉😛
overall it was stupendous 😊
thanks for the pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
HEY!!
awesome one just loved it❤️
really u penned it perfectly👏👏
this is flawless and a picture perfect one...
I HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SOON ...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey...short bt nice update...
sandhir ladder scene was nice..
loved it..update soon..thz tym longer one..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yes. I know I am late..very late but I did post two OS so made up right? And today I have two chapters..although I am posting one now and the other tomorrow xP Thank you people for your encouragement. This part is dedicated to TheDreamyKid that is, Priya Didi! For inspiring, encouraging me and being the best sister and friend ever xD Love you di.
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Camp At Goa

Part 8: Program Planners


CRASH!!
Sanyukta landed flat on the ground with Randhir on topof her.

S:Oww!

R:Shit! What the...

Both of them realise their position and stare into each others eyes.
J:Randhir bhai!! Aap dono theek toh ho naa?

Randhir hears Jiggy's voice shouting from above and quickly gets up while offering his hand to help Sanyukta. Sanyukta(thankfully) takes his hand and stands up. The two of them then notice the broken rope ladder lying on the ground.

R:*Irritated* Yeh sab tumhaari vajah se hua hai!Jaha bhi jaati ho musibat khada kar deti ho!

S:*Angry now* Bloody hell Randhir. Tumhaari problem kya hai? Mene tumhe bola tha ki mera haath pakadke mujhe bacha lo?

Before Randhir could snap back at her, Parth shouted from above saying that the house luckily had a spare ladder abd he'd placed it on the other side of the tree. Randhir and Sanyukta quickly ran to the back side of the tree and started climbing up the ladder. thankfully, it was a wooden one. As soon as they reached on top. they glared at each other with angry eyes.

Yoyo: Oh paaji! Tussi yeh ek dusre ko ghoorna bundh karo. Eh dekho! Mujhe ek parchi mila yaaha pe!

On hearing the word 'parchi', Sanyukta ran towards Yoyo and snatched the piece of paper away from him. She started reading what was written on the paper and stood speechless.

R: Farzi , gungi hogayi kya? Laao mujhe dikhaao!

Sanyukta passed over the piece of paper to Randhir who immediately started reading out the message out aloud.


Interesting guys. Very interesting. I'm glad tum idhar tak pohuch gaye. Now you may tear the..(hesitates) map?! Ab iss map ka tumhaare task mein koi kaam nahi. Tumhaara real task ek ..Program organise karna hai. Yes, you heard me right..Program. Dream Team ke sponsors chahte hai ki winning college, yaani FITE ek jashn ka program organise karein FITE aur CITEke saare students keliye. Mein chahta hu ki tum Goa ke iss hi jungle mein voh program ki tayaariyaan karo. No Sanyukta. No buts. I don't care ki yeh ek jungle hai aur yahaan electricity bhi nahi hai. Yeh tumhaara task hai aur tum sab ko isse kisi bhi haalat mein complete karna hai.
You have time till Sunday. Agar tumhe yeh letter jaldi mila hai toh acha hai , aur agar dair se mila hai toh I dont care! Thats your problem! Now set to work. Leave! And remember, college ke trustees aur dream team ke sponsors bhi honge so I dont want anything to bhi imperfect!''


<font size="4" face="Georgia">Everyone stared at each other. Their mouths had dropped open in surprise. Randhir was the first to recover from the shock and break the wave of silence that had overcome them</font>

R: Chalo vardhaan sir ko bhi pata hai ki Sanyukta humesha excuses banaati rehti hai . Tabhi toh letter mein bhi unhone Sanyukta ke 'buts' ko brush aside kiya hai. Guys ab apna muh bundh karo. Humaare paas 5 din hai tayaariyaan karne ke liye. Hum kal se shuru karenge. Aaj toh dair hogayi hai..Raat hone vaali hai. Humein hotel vaapis chalna chahiye.

Everyone nodded their heads in agreement to what Randhir had said and took a taxi back to the hotel. On reaching their suit, everyone retired to their beds. However, Sanyukta didn't go straight to bed. She went and sat on a sofa in the star gazing room. She took a paper and a pen and started making a to-do list for the program. Suddenly she heard a creaking noise. The noise seemed to be coming from the door that attached her bedroom to this glass room. She turned her head, only to come face to face with Randhir! Yess!! Randhir!!

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Yes I know guys. Very short update but I am very tired yaar. Will update the next part tomorrow..feeling lazy to type now. But promise, the story ahead will be fun for you xD Till then you guys can go and check my OS xP Toodles!

Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
HEY!!!!!
THIS WAS REALLY SWEET ONE ...👏
LOVED IT ...❤️

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