Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 24)

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sman

@sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

seeing you online and liking comments, am doing a happy dance :-)

how will Arhi proceed in their relationship..eagerly waiting to know..I never want this FF to end as I want to read more about Sumer seeing his son's happiness, Arhi becoming parents, Arnav changing into more open to show his love to his dad and Kushi..some PDA..list is looong

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BSDsarun

@BSDsarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

hope tmrw i will check there will be a update
otherwise atleast a note...

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indygal2010

@indygal2010

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

I like the fact that Arnav was vocal about what he wants and was not manipulating the situation. I hope we get to see more open communication between Arnav and Khushi in the near future.

I don't know if I am the only one who feels that there was a sudden disjoint in the story. The sudden jump to Khushi knowing about Arnav's past confused me.

Hoping to read more of this story. Please do update soon.

Again Thank you for being such a wonderful writer and giving us such wonderful work

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: indygal2010
I like the fact that Arnav was vocal about what he wants and was not manipulating the situation. I hope we get to see more open communication between Arnav and Khushi in the near future.
I don't know if I am the only one who feels that there was a sudden disjoint in the story. The sudden jump to Khushi knowing about Arnav's past confused me.

Hoping to read more of this story. Please do update soon.

Again Thank you for being such a wonderful writer and giving us such wonderful work

Well, I think if you look chapter-wise the jump may seem sudden, but actually from the last chapter and this one there is a one-month progression. The hug with RIshabh & ArShi's first kiss happened when they were married for about 2months, and now it's three months.

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Hey guys,

Read all you comments and loved'em all. I sense that you all liked the chapter. Thanks a ton guys for all your love 🤗

I have a few things to say in this note:

1. The delay in the chapter is due to my asli duniya and I had already explained the reasons on my note on the blog. I'll try and update next chapter by next week. Thanks for waiting :)

2. I know you all will find it really hard to believe, but this chapter was not supposed to be a cliffhanger. It is just that I could not fit everything in one update without it loosing its essence. And it did not even occur to me that it is going cliffhanger way. So while you all felt cheated/ramanchi'd, I was astonished at the readers reaction at first :D. I think I assumed that everyone will see what I am seeing ;)

3. That brings me to the third order of business. I would like to share with you all parts of a very perceptive comment from one MKM reader clover who did not loose the sight of simmering issues in Rain n Romance. I am quoting it because I see a lot of guesses floating around, and these points will be very important in Arnav and Khushi's future. Also because no one pointed out how over-confident Khushi sounded when she said that Arnavji would have been better off (?) with bade papa instead of his mother.

Originally posted by: clover
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I am happy that Khushi has come to know one half of Arnav's past, i.e. what his mother did. She still has to know what his father did, which even Buaji doesn't know and only Sumer or Arnav can tell Khushi. She doesn't know it wasn't just his mother that screwed him so. Arnav would have fared much better if he had the safety net that his father is there for him. Sumer gave all the love in the world to Khushi that she can never imagine him neglecting his own flesh and blood. Sumer isn't guilty because of what Sujata did. He is feeling guilty because of what he did. Sure, he does love Arnav but he himself accepted the fact that he didn't give Arnav even one happy memory to remember him by. He feels guilty because he very easily gave up on his son when Khushi entered his life.

Sumer has a completely different relationship with Arnav and Khushi. He treats Khushi like a China doll that needs to be taken care of and loved and cherished. And Arnav he treats like a wronged friend (almost reluctant) and not a loved son. He wants a better relationship with Arnav but is not sure if he can or if he deserves it.

Also Khushi has no idea that Arnav for a period of time held her responsible for his father abandoning him in her favor. I think hating Sujata for what she did is nothing compared to what she'll feel when she finds out about the rest of it.

And about announcing his visit to her place of work, is it really because he trusts her about not hugging her 'friend' or is it because he wants to warn her he is coming so he doesn't see anything he isn't supposed to?

4. Very many new readers, after reading the comments of old readers who have been with MKM since beginning, PM me from time to time to ask what 'Khushi's Song which will come in future' is being talked about in their comments. So instead of replying everyone individually, I am posting the link of the song. Please consider it same as a personal reply.

Meri Sanason Mein Basa Hai (Aur Pyar Ho Gaya, Female Version): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bwZloKZo3Ts

5. Keeping with the tradition of songs, I'll give you the teaser for next chapter in the form of a song (chosen for ALL its lyrics). Listen to it in your free time with headphones if you will.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9eHl4vFUGdQ[/YOUTUBE]

Those who don't have youtube access, the song is Zara Zara behkta hai from Rehna Hai Tere Dil Mein.

Edited by Anony_mous - 11 years ago

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

you broke my heart 😭

next week? that's too far... can't listen to the song right now as I am at work..

I agree with Clover's comment about Arnav announcing his visit at her workplace.. that thought did cross my mind, and I was thinking why Khushi is feeling proud about it instead of feeling sad (I am not able to think about a better word)?

But about Arnav holding Khushi responsible, I hope that Khushi won't ponder over it much. Because then Arnav and Khushi did not even know each other. And probably anyone in Arnav's position might think the same way, and Khushi probably is going to understand that if she understands him feeling insecure about a mere hug when they are already married.

edit:
ok.. just read the text in the video, so I guess this will stop lot of 'will they? won't they?' questions 😉

Edited by ..Swapnali.. - 11 years ago

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Ahem ahem d new song is nyc tooo

Waiting impatiently now fr d update

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A_BA

@A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Thanks for the note and the teaser - love that song😊

Looking forward to next week!

Edited by A_BA - 11 years ago

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

Much needed Note!
I was getting anxious about the Update.
Will wait till next week.

And Clover what a analization dear. *claps* very nicey done :D

will go and listen to the song Now!

Thanks Di!