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sarozz

@sarozz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

I want moreee...Atleast the ending wasn't sad and depressing...hoping for the best

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

ure so good at expressing that u could have taken it a step further and given it an end that they both deserved. in our normal lives, there are seldom happily ever after, but we can at least have it in our fiction

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sindhu

@misscrazyfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

I guess u gave perfect ending and let us decide what we want

It is the best thing Khushi had done..letting them know their mistakes with out hiding

And we know it is khushi ow or then she has a heart to forgive

Arnav repentance is beautifully show..

But I guess we can t get such a persons like Arnav khushi either it is love or hatred they r having inturn dying in them to be along with them

Oh god what a arshi

Loved the story dear

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Hey the ending was perfect!

I am glad that Khushi didn't give in so easily, Arnav had done so many mistakes in past! You are absolutely brilliant Helee, I loved the second part😃

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

I loved how realistic this TS was. It takes great skill to keep it that way.And it was definitely beautifully written! :D I'll take that as a positive ending. Arnav has suffered from his mistakes in the past. He would do better this time, won't he? ;)

Enjoyed reading this. Looking froward to more from you! :)

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

wow dear awesome ending indeed...i loved the fact that u brought them to a point where first step they going to take is friendship ,which is indeed foundation of any relation...i dont wanted to think they live happily ever after ...as for me if she has forgiven him...and he has chaged with a backbone for her...i ll be more than happy...if words r no more required between two ...if they able to see hurts and pains...staying friends together is more than enough for me :)..and as u mentioned the hint is very positive for their future together...i loved it dear...u r superb as usual...:),hugs

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Nice story
thnx fr pm

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damon fan

@-damon-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Hey Superb di..
When u in the start mentioned not to expect a happy ending i was like what the..happy ending ni hoga toh kya hoga... but u gave the perfect ending di.. Aur hamesha ki tarah i loved this part as well.. The way u described everything & everyone...it was beautiful.. M glad khushi didn't give in so easily b'coz our arnie have done soo many mistakes in the past... And two words that caught in my attention were 'testosterone battle' 🤣 🤣
Keep writing di and waiting for ur next awesome piece of work!

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

sorry for late comment on 2nd part

wow.. superb update

very very beautifull written, everything

loved the change In khushi and redeeming raizada's and jha... !!

loved how their relation shapes and up and they unknowingly fallen for each other once again.. for better!!

and maybe will start for new life together

really, loved it👏

Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Her indifference and ignorance towards him and his family members was so totally justified. And I am glad to see him choosing the option of letting her have her way and take her time to heal and come back to him. His pushing and compelling wouldn't have helped anyway because this wasn't the naive Khushi he had once insulted and manhandled. The girl whom he has to deal with this time around is strong, dignified, respected and determined.

It was good to see the relationships between her and her loved one's breathing back to life and improving gradually and their old sizling chemistry reviving back too.

Lovely TS!

Waiting to read more of your work. 😊

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