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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Love is in the air...
Loved the update... Three couples with bursting passion...
Loved Akash and Payal's little banter...
Then Aman and Anya was awesome... Loved Aman's direct confession... Anya shock and anger was reasonable... but I loved how easily she understood Aman reasoning... Just loved them...
What to say about Arnav and khushi... Their passion has no bound... Their every encounter leave me breathless... Loved them ...
Hats off...

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

the last 3 chapters were amazing.

aman request to anya for dance (the intensity of it made me want to faint)

aakash one track mind (made me smile hopelessly)

arnav and khushi aaahh (they made me blush, sigh and hope)

gr8 going.

you writing is a treat to me.

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

This story is awesome... Read it all together in one go...
I m a new reader n wud love to receive a pm if u send pms...
Otherwise, i hv already bookmarked d thread n i just wanted to knw at wht freq do u update it... Pls scrap me that.
N also dere is one ques abt d prologue, i mean was it of past or present...
I mean d lady in it, was it khushi?? Wid d baby...

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

ahaan..

lovely update dear...

enjoyed it...

plxxx continue soon...

thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Wow, just wow. I throughly enjoyed reading that update.

Who cares about the proof reading when we get such a mindblowing and phenomenal update which was oozing with passion, lol.

I absolutely loved the update, from start to finish it was a brilliant read.

Wow loved the encounter between Payal and Akash it was awesome, Akash is very blunt and direct with his feelings and desire.

So Payal has noticed the change in Aman and has realised he is not mean towards Anya anymore, trust a woman to notice this as Akash is totally unaware.

I'm so glad Aman and Anya finally had there moment alone and wow Aman did not beat around the bush he directly confessed his love by saying the three magic words.

I think Anya's reaction of being angry was expected but I'm glad she listened to Aman explain his reason for not confessing earlier.

Aman's reaction when Anya told him she felt the same was amazing and the hug was beautiful.

Wow the passionate kisses they shared were so hot and electrifying, so long over due.

Awww love the fact Arnav bought Khushi a chocolate ice cream as she loves to eat it in winter,

Arnav and Khushi were certainly getting very cozy and intimate in the garage, again a very passionate encounter.

It's such a shame Aman disturbed them, but the question is did he see them and will he use this to blackmail Arnav in a harmless manner, lol.

Amazing writing and the update was written exceptionally well,

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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afshanbabar

@afshanbabar

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

I am not saying that the previous chapters were not good enough, but this one just stole my heart , completely and utterly. Aman was the best in this one [ Arnav is still my hero though ]. I am just reading and re rereading and rereading again and again. just beautiful. everyone is where they are suppose to be. just loved it.
thanks
ak

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Beautiful update. Sure love was in air. Except Anjali and Shyam all other couples in this chapter was either confessing, making out or Both. Loved Aman Anya confession. Out of all love confessions in DND this is my favorite. So true all ASRs have sarcasm in their middle name. Nani witnessed Arnav Khushi's partial make out session but Aman is the lucky one made out with Princess Raizada and witnessed Prince Raizada in action. Aman's day can't get any luckier. Thanks 4 d PM.

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

My gosh..My gosh..3 love stories in a go..sandy dis chp was jus beautifull..n lovely..i jus loved sman n ana love confessions..it was kinda cute..n aakash n payal r to much bold..compare too r payash..n Arshi dey r d most hottest jodi buss..dey jus wan a plcc wer dey cn kiss each oder senseless..ane plc dedo dono ko..un logo ko farak hii ni padta..
Defo love is in the air!!
😊 😳 😳