Never Too Late - A D3 FanFiction [Updated Chapter 18- Page 69]8-9-2014

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don girls

@don girls

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#381

Wow
Nice update after a long time
Loved the convo both where having ... Giving us more depth into the characters
Can't wait for the next part
Please update soon

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Rini

@-bLEu98-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#382

He he he... even I loved that 'Hotel Kingston'- whoever said it has a sexy voice. And it was a really classy show. Anyway... we shall mull over every aspect of the show on fb, like you wanted. 😳

Coming to Kriya, she shrieked cuz she wanted to hide her face, as simple as that. And if that doesn't make sense, then I dunno how else to put it. Kriya's mannerisms have turned out to be very similar to my own. So now before penning a dialogue or a reaction I don't even think, I just write it down like I'd react myself. So if I was in Kriya's place I'd do the same- shout out to my friend, seek some comfort, whine, and boss him at the same time. 😛 That's just Kriya for you.

And she knew Swayam had to talk to her, because she just knew it. Friends are clairvoyant. 😛 If that sounds like bullshit, then I'll try to rationalise. She remembered a little of the previous night's events. She remembered Swayam's unease. Or in the morning, she sensed Swayam's conflict. I thought about writing it in detail but edited out that part because I feared it'd become too cliche.

I realise ShaRey also need to be shown as sharing stuff. Here, there are two points. 1. unlike KriYam they don't inhabit the same physical space, hence a lot of things go unsaid.

2. ShaRey and very different from KriYam. They are great friends too, but they are the kind of friends who understand each other without each and everything been said, because they have been with each other at their worst. They have tasted bitterness. They can sense a lot about each other.

Rey did go to Sharon's house with the intention of talking about Kriya. But here Sharon's reaction had to be stronger because something so disturbing happened with her. Just like Swayam wasn't able to talk to Kriya, Rey wasn't able to talk to Sharon. Their ladies are forever casting them under their shadows. The guys need to be more vocal else their space will be lost. 😆 Anyway... so Swayam got to speak to Kriya simply cuz they share the same space, i.e. the apartment. Also I didn't want to show Rey's reaction right away. We already know Rey's pov. so let's just see what he does next. 😛

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Rini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: don girls
Wow
Nice update after a long time
Loved the convo both where having ... Giving us more depth into the characters
Can't wait for the next part
Please update soon

thank you. 😛 I'll update sooner this time.

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#384

Thanks for pm🤗 n finally update mila , bohut jaldi diya na😛

Coming to update ...Well defination of friendship...u don't need any words to transfer from one friend to another .Sharey...always admire this friendship ...without saying anything Rey understood Sharon...Sharon drunk...I like it. After of all she is diva ,she allowed to drink, but why people think when they are sad only that time , they can drink😆

Daughter always admire her father but sharon n her father relationship is. she is so lonely ...nobody understand her even not swayum...

Kriya ...me loving this character, defo she make swayum realized , wat he done that is wrong .In his view he is right but as a viewer, HE is wrong

me want Swaron conversation ...

without swaron update diya tumne😡

next update par Swaron hona chaiye😡

Love u Rini ...well written ...without saying too much words still I can understand all of them. me ne bohut enjoy kiya update. Sad , disppointed thie but still friending bonding dekhaya which is most important,

next update jaldi dena...😃

Edited by Kunta_tanha - 11 years ago

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alex754

@alex754

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#385

Ah finally an update after looong
Loved kriyam part alot
I like their friendship it is just sooo goood the way it is
I find kriya's character very intriguing very new and very fresh
Waiting to read some kriyaansh in next update
Pls update soon
Thanks for pm

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#386

No we dont know rey's pov... *shaking head*

And no.. we dont know what he thinks... at least not in that way...

But how come u saying that they arent vocal. .. I mean clearly saamne wala is in more trouble then how come...

Par my question still stands... why did she want to hide her face?

"Their ladies are forever casting them under their shadows."

Iska matlab? As in kis sense mein?

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

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Amazing update. I really want to see a bond in between SwaRon.
And please show swayam apologizing soon. I wanna see a little regret.
Hope he doesn't looses his job.
Hate Mr. Rai Prakash. He is such a big... 🤬
Waiting for the next update eagerly.

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago

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Akansha1515

@Akansha1515

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#388

nicely and precisly written...

poor sharon.. going through sooo much..

i lyked u introduced her father..

simply loved kriya and swayam friendship.. nd how well dey know each other..

overall nice update..

thanxx for pm..😊😊😊

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#389

this was nicee..i really enjoyed reading it :D

Sharon's emotional breakdown was amazingly shown...

Loved sharey part a lottt... :$

but Kriya part confused..what actually happened??? :/

did i miss some prev update??? :/

now i wonder what will happen to swayam..lolaa...ye toh gayaa... xD

amazinggg update... loved it...

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@Slayerkajal

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#390

Loved it...
Really like sharey and kriyam talks...
Thanks for the pm..
But..ammm...i want to ask what exactaly happened between swaron...i though in this update it will be clear...but i am confused...can you plzzz tell me about it..( i know i am such a dumbo 🤢 )