SS: IT HAD TO BE YOU: Completed - Page 32

I forgotten that I reserved this space...I just commented on the thread when I woke this morning..so I am writing randomly now to fill this space...nidhi yours stories are the best...ek dam dil ko choo Lene wali...

Shaam dhalne lagi, chaand chhupne laga!

5 more hrs hopefully? its 5pm EST :-)

Now this is bad. Like really really bad! I only manage to comment on the last part after you have reserved for the next! Need to be quick next time around.

Coming to the update, I really am at a loss of words to correctly say what I am feeling after reading this part. How do you manage to do that in your every story. In fact, you have only just gotten better.

The part was awesome. If I was smiling throughout, the ending just made me want to cry & not out of sadness but the range of emotions I was experiencing along with the characters. I could relate to them so very well.

I could feel Arnav's helplessness, guilt and mostly his vulnerability. Also Khushi's love for him. She loves him to the extent that it hurts. She can't tell him that she loves him, he will feel guilty., can't ask him to be with her coz she won't risk him being an orphan all over again. After providing him with this family she can't snatch it from him with her own hands. She understands & loves him to much to put him in a difficult position by baring the truth of her heart and soul. She can only put up a farce that he doesn't affect her that way. Though I don't think she is that great a pretend & Arnav knows of her even if not completely.

Hats off to you, portraying their emotions so beautifully in words.

I had let this thought go in the first part, but now that I think of it. Is their more to Garima wishing her family to be together than only Khushi coming back? Does she have any inkling about Khushi or Arnav or both?

I have noticed in your stories, you have been more elaborative of Khushi's (or female's) feelings, or rather POV than of Arnav's (you do mention it sometimes). Or so I feel. However the way you write you provide a clear view of him as well, though not directly from him, not letting the reader feel that he has been left out. And thats great to say the least. It has been true here as well. Yet I can't help, but this time, I want to know of his mindset exclusively from him. Is that possible?

just simply superb updates..

Awesome update Nidhi!!! Felt so bad for Khushi, I guess Mom always knows right. I wish Arnav would take that risk and see where it leads. Wish you Merry Christmas and happy new year 😊

Amazing. .. So arnav also loves khushi and is insecure about him losing his family who loves him so much !

Chapter two is fabulous! My heart goes out to Khushi for having to act all normal when her hear goes all thudding with love and pain. I knew that Arnav is sacrificing for the sake of the family too. It really hurts.

That night meant everything to both of them, amd the morning after was too harsh on them, and Khushi just didn't want Arnav to feel guilty.

He was avoiding looking at her during the kitchen conversation because he couldn't take it deep inside. Khushi agreed as if challenging him as if she wanted to say 'if you don't care so why should I?'

I hppe that will make Arnav realize that both him and Khushi are for each other, and maybe jealously will be helpful as till now Khushi didn't have any kind of a relationship with a man.

Sh.