Originally posted by: jeenia123
@ lachi,... you didn't bothered me at ll dear, i know i have great readers here who go beyond reading, it shows your concern for my story...
and niki... you always guess it beforehand yaar...i know you...i they could have succeed in first attempt, that would be very filmy, isn't it?
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I liked it jeenia ... You didn't make it successful in first attempt..
you made us see how deep is shlok's love for astha in such a situation
I loved it
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