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Posted: 11 years ago
That was an awesome update...
& poor aakash & Shyam...hehe...😉😆

& Awww... Now khushi knows certain things about his family too...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for beautifully written updates
Chap 9 A&B - How Arnav was tired but mere presence of Khushi has strong effect on him. Loved how Arnav is tired still he drive towards museum without Knowing the route😆 till Khushi told him the route. Loved the way Arnav opened door for Khushi like a gentleman and another entry to Khushi's list for falling for Arnav. Arnav felt relaxed when they reached museum and Khushi was telling him about garden but Arnav legs carried him to the valley where he felt peace and loved hoe Khushi felt happy seeing him peace, pure and innocent and prayed for more happiness for him and she too felt at by seeing Arnav and his mere presence is healing her.
Arnav felt different when he heard his name from Khushi. Arnav want to sooth her and comfort her in every way but he wanted to go slow. Loved Arnav mantra One Step At A Time.
Loved how Arnav said Khushi how to deal with life and indirectly said after every bad phase there will be good phase waiting. Khushi was shocked as she didn't except Arnav say as if he was able to read her fears and giving suggestions but Khushi has been broken so much that she didn't have strength to lose anything now and she prefer to shut away from him, as she won't able to lose him if she went further. Arnav knew what Khushi is feeling after their convo and loved how he all the way to restroom controlling himself and wants to go slow with her.
Loved how Arnav said he "love" the room and the word love hit Khushi well. Khushi was dazed her heart was telling Arnav is the same person with chocolate brown eyes and her mind is confused, Arnav was shocked when she asked his identity but she was passed out which freaked Arnav but he was sure of his answer for her one question, he has come for her and loved the way he took care of her.
Loved how Arnav called Payal to look after Kushi and loved how because of her obligation and assurance he went for rest and how she told everything to Aman. The way Payal scolded was her way and Payal messaged to Arnav too. Payal boost Khushi's confidence by saying she was fighter and she can fight. Arnav couldn't sleep and felt restless so he came to see Khushi. Khushi said she can't take anymore because she is afraid that she is no longer strong enough to fight and it hurt Payal and Arnav too.
Arnav wanted to be with her and he wanted to smash everyone making Khushi to this state but he has to go slow and he had to make Khushi love him, more important than that to make trust him. Loved how Payal said to Khushi that her life will change soon as her prince charming will come and may be has come and she is natural princess but she has to hear to her heart.
Finally Payal talked with Arnav and said reason for Khushi's fainting and that is because Khushi has dined with them she wasn't allowed to sleep and hasn't ate anything and forced to work by her family. Arnav consoled Payal while his heart is bleeding for Khushi and also assured her he will make it fast and in his bossy way but he has to make Khushi comfortable with him and bring his Khushi back out of shell first.
Loved the convo of Arnav and John and how Arnav was impressed by john so he made comfortable with him and asked him to eat with him and John liked him and respected him and made him his bhai.
Loved how Arnav met Khushi with talks of her paintings and glad Khushi didn't remember their convo before she fainted. Arnav praised Khushi paintings and emotions she conveyed through it. Loved how Arnav called her princess and told he was left baffled by her talents and Khushi felt dazed as she never received admiration from anyone and it was all so genuine from him.
Loved the way Khushi blushed and Arnav pointed out it and the way he was holding her hand made her heart and entire body alive and now Khushi knows she is princess and thinking him as prince charming and our Arnav knows she is his princess for sure and soon he will take away his princess to love her to cherish her forever. Dhak- dhak-dhak started again.

Chap 10 - Loved the way Gloria teased Arnav and he too laughed out with her. Loved the way Gloria asked about Arnav's emotional tiredness was so concerned and loved how Arnav said that he is worried about Khushi and didn't want take any wrong step as he feared of Khushi distances herself from him. Arnav wanted her to know she is special to him and that he is hopelessly in love with her deeply and madly but for that he had to be patient and first made her comfortable around him and he also said he is tired because he not reach Khushi, to console her, to sooth her, to protect her and to love her as he has to restrict himself for Khushi's sake but her feeling of helplessness is making him tired emotionally.
Arnav peacefully slept because he had known Khushi is fine and she thanked him too..
Mrs Gloria asked Arnav to get her file from house to church and said to take help Khushi as she knew Arnav didn't know church way and Arnav also happy to go there.
Loved the way Arnav felt in Gloria's room..
Arnav went to Khushi's home feeling himself like love sick teenager to meet Khushi but met her idiot step sister, who first drool over him and when he asked about Khushi she said Khushi is their maid and tried to seduce him but loved how Arnav showed his ASR side.
Arnav shocked to see pale, shocked and trembling Khushi and he thought she was afraid seeing him as ASR and he was afraid of losing everything he started with her and he so wanted to tell her, for her and his family he is only Arnav.
On other side Khushi shocked because no one has fought for her and respected her like this and despite of knowing she is maid here he had fought with her step sister and thought he was her prince charming but she afraid of losing this moment. She has been broken so much that she can't afford to loose anything now... not him. She also amazed that he was apologising for nothing.
Arnav felt happy when he got to know she wasn't afraid of him and he hasn't lost her but Khushi didn't accompany him it made him sad but he know he had to be slow with her and Khushi didn't went with him because she want to cherish this moment alone and she is so happy and feeling warm after so long but she did want to go with him on some other day for now she said Sorry and Thank You. Both have hope for better tommarrow and calmness in their souls.

Chap 11 A&B - Finally Khushi is coming out of shell she created 5 years back because of Arnav and she started humming again and smiling frequently, she slept less but this time not because of nightmares but of warm feeling all these because of one man Arnav. Loved the way she searched for Arnav at 2-45 in the morning and she is in so love with him but she is afraid to accept it.
Arnav too like a love sick person checking for glimpse of Khushi in that morning time in his laptop but he was lucky he found her looking at his window. Arnav went to window and shared a eye lock and both of them lost in each other.
Loved how Khushi got everything attached to arnav and every memory too now attached to Arnav and though she carries out normal route but Arnav had entered in every aspect of her life. Loved how Khushi felt at peace now and how peace made grand entry in the form of Arnav.
Loved how Arnav sent rose plant to Khushi and it was gesture of how much he loves her and her habits and that gesture made her cry as she was too overwhelmed by it... loved this Arnav so much.
Aaawww Khushi finally falling hard for Arnav and she don't know from when and why but only thing she knew is ... With him she feels alive, With him she wants to live, With him she feels loved, With him she feels special, With him she feels herself but still she was confused
Khushi step mother told about Arnav's visit for breakfast and her work to do and importantly what she meant to them but Khushi could hear only Arnav coming to her house for breakfast.
I laughed at the part where Arnav was unable to select outfit from all of his black for going on his official date with Khushi. Poor guy. Ever since Payal told about invitation and real reason behind it and all Arnav want is just go to Khushi. Glad Gloria helped him by saying there is a gift from her and Payal for his first date... Gloria is so cute loved her more.
Arnav after reaching Khushi's house his eyes only searching for her and wants to talk to her.
The moment he saw her he didn't miss a chance and loved how he make her sit with him showing everyone know how much he respects her and loved how he hold her hand tightly under table so she can't pull her hand. Loved the way Arnav talked about Khushi as she is elder daughter of house and praised her food in front of her family. Loved Arnav whom can't hear anything against Khushi.
Loved how Arnav said to Mrs Gupta that he was technically taken because a girl had stolen his heart and he considered that girl as princess and said she has right to reject him too. Arnav told everything to Khushi indirectly and along with his hand caressing her hand and conveyed that what he said was about her only.
Khushi now knows that he loves her and whatever he said was for her only but she has been broken that she still hesitate to accept this happiness

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Posted: 11 years ago
Another amazing story from u👏 ... Loving this ❤️... Very sweet story ... It reminds me a lot of Cinderella ...

Waiting for the next chapter & looking forward to the chapter when finally Khushi will recognize Arnav...
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Chap 12 - Khushi was so happy and feeling alive after soo long. Loved how she always keep thinking about him, the way he hugged her, praised her and thanked her and made her feel special. Loved how he indirectly proposed her and asked for dinner date.
Arnav already had a hard time to control himself and emotions after the hug but he did for Khushi and the way Khushi was reacting he was so confident of his moves. Loved how he wanted her to know everything about him and his day and his feelings for her.
Khushi was nervous and blushing and Arnav asked her from window is she was fine but she smiled back to relax him.
Stupid step sisters of Khushi talking about how they lost chance and how he is out of their reach and they are happy thinking that there is nothing between Arnav and Khushi and how dare they say Who would want a maid to be his bride? Poor Khushi was heart broken hearing this as she again lost hope.
Khushi's heart told that Arnav loves her but brain said that she is not for him and he deserves better. She wants him to realise that she is not good for him and she made a plan to ignore him and not to talk to him.
Khushi's this behaviour made him mad and he couldn't think what went wrong in just few hours that she is behaving like this. He knew it is hard for him to convince her but seeing her sudden change of behaviour, her pale face, lifeless, fake smile he was broken and he is in pain to see his love like this and couldn't guess what went wrong.
Loved how Arnav stood on his decision and not let her weakness win and he wanted surely make her break her shell and made her to speak about it with his ASR touch this time. On other side Khushi is thinking that he is in pain because of her and how much more will he have to face if at all they share a future together.
Loved how Arnav confronted Khushi in Payal cabin and he want to know reason for her behaviour and said to Khushi that no matter how much she avoid him, her eyes tell everything as she is pure soul and thats why her eyes tells what her eyes speak. Loved the way Arnav stood close to Khushi and made her realise his fast heartbeats and said it beats like that whenever she is around him or when he thinks about her.
Loved the way Arnav talks affected her and her cheeks changed colour and praised her cheeks changing colour too and said beet rood red is new addition😳😆.
Loved the way Arnav hold her by waist and said whatever happens he will be always with her and pleaded not to distance herself from him and he can't bear it and it hurts him a lot. Khushi cried and fainted hearing this. Arnav is panicked seeing this and Khushi even in her Unconscious state she said actual reason that she is mad and he can't marry a maid and he deserves better. Now Arnav knows what is bothering Khushi and loved how he hugged her and said She is her princess and his own princess.

chap 13 - Arnav was taking so much care of Khushi while Khushi was gaining and loosing conscious everytime. Loved the way he make sure doctor came at any cost. Doctor said Khushi fainted because of lack of proper sleep and she was worn out and she lacking Iron and vitamins and she needs to be taken care of. Khushi seeing Arnav felt it like a dream which will vanish as soon as she touches him.
Arnav was so helpless seeing Khushi like this especially when he came to know she is thinking this as dream but atleast she admit that she wants him. Loved how Arnav wanted her to take first step and how he wanted to cross the rest for her.
Finally Arnav confessed his feelings for Khushi which was beyond dream for her and she hesitatingly said about them being from different worlds but Arnav answered her well and said what she meant for him. Arnav said lines " Life does give all its flavours to us... All we need to do is to accept them with open hands ... If we'v been through the dark, then we do deserve to go through light too ... Why stay and reserve in to dark, when Life itself is giving you its best ... Accept it with open arms ... Who knows? May be, this is what you'v been destined for"... which Khushi once said to Arnav when he was low and gloomy and Khushi helped him out and this time Arnav is paying back it. Khushi did remember it and was shocked too and asked Arnav who he is?

Chap 14 - Arnav don't want to reveal about him now. Loved the way Arnav thought to hell with all the ONE STEP A TIMEs when he saw Khushi lost in him and his touch.
When Khushi want to go away from Arnav and some one will see them and loved how he made her blush and caught her words and said so she won't mind of all these if they are alone and loved how Khushi said she feel safe, warm and complete with Arnav.
Arnav was so irritated by Payal and Aman banging door and he shouted at them and Khushi got scared. Loved how Arnav said its only for others and never for her.
Loved the way Arnav gave himself the crown of ambassador of dumb asses. Arnav was worried seeing Khushi tears thinking he had hurt her and may be she didn't like the way he was showing love for her but Khushi said him it wasn't that and Arnav was happy because atleast she accepted him.
Loved the way Payal entered room pushing Arnav and how Aman shocked to see this side of Arnav but Arnav showed a glare of ASR to confirm him. Arnav asked for barging in and Payal was worried for Khushi as he was the one who called her and said to drop the deal in middle to come to Khushi and in all her outbursts she also said Arnav being in love with Khushi. Khushi shocked to know her jiji knew about them but Payal managed her slip of tongue somehow.
When Aman and Payal went away from there Khushi asked Arnav about Payal knowing about them and he told truth to her that it has been long time and he will tell about him when she will be able to trust him completely and love him back unconditionally and he finally confessed his love again.

Chap 15 - Loved the part where di and chote talk in skype and Payal hearing them in pretence of reading book. Loved how Arnav screamed on his di and was caring about the same time and his jiju faced same fate. Poor Arnav is getting hyper sitting there.
Loved how Payal thought when Khushi will marry him he will go nuts for sure.
Poor Aakash and Shyam were serving punishment of cooking Gajar Ka Halwa as they couldn't fulfil Anjali's carving of eating golgappa at early morning and loved how Payal thought to make Aakash cook often for family after marriage.
Loved when Anjali said when Khushi will come in to his life he will know what she is saying and loved how Arnav asked his di whether Khushi will like him and Anjali said to her chote Just love her truly and she will love him too.
Payal was happy to see Khushi is happy because of Arnav. Payal and Gloria made a plan to send Arnav and Khushi together for grocery shopping as usual giving time to Arnav to make use of it. Arnav came to know Khushi is in house all this time from the note.
Khushi was so happy listening Arnav and Anjali convo and she got to know his whole family knew her.
Loved the whole Kitchen scene ... its romantic. Arnav couldn't control himself and Khushi was all shy and loved her colour changing and Arnav too. Loved how Arnav answered Khushi's unasked question and how he told her to trust him and she will realise whom he is.
Arnav accompany Khushi to market and loved how he helped her and loved whole Ghobhi and Dhobhi convo. Loved the way Arnav told Khushi of future plan with her when he will accompany her to shopping latter in Delhi too like this.
Khushi was panicked when Arnav left her for few minutes and shouted at him for leaving her alone. Loved how Arnav comforted her and kissed her not even thinking of anyone around them and told her he will never leave her and he came here only to take her with him.
Arnav gave Jalebi which he bought for her. Loved how Khushi felt herself being pulled into tight, warm and protected embrace of the very same man who has finally given her a valid reason to live ... Her Arnav, Her love.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the chapters in one go
Awesome story and very wel written :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeeeyyy I am first

As usual an amazing chapter 👏...

You have showed this before, but this chapter shows it more how much broken & insecure Khushi is from inside ... every small gesture of Arnav makes her feel overwhelmed & she questions herself if she is worthy of this love or not ... Her step mom & sis have treated her in such a way that she doubts herself & every happening in her life ... I wish all her miseries end soon & she lives happily with her Arnav ... Well may be it will be too early ... But at least I want her to be freed from the clutches of her vile so called family ...

Ah ... Only thsi was left ... Welcome SHYAMJI ... With the entry of a new villain I think this story will take a new turn ... eagerly waiting for the next part

Edited by Mou_farah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was a beautiful update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update yaar...👏
it was soo sweettt..😳

while khusi is becoming much happy and has developed interest in gardening the red rose😳...of course dur to arnav only.😳...but her step mom is not happy seeing her like this..😕..so finally her final trap to destroy her is on now...with shyaam ? so she will marry her off?? ...gosh this sick woman😡

here arnav had grabbed biggest deal and company is now top 2 in world...but he was still not happy..and the moment payal mentioned of her meeting akash to share this success arnav realised that he was missing his life his khusi...

the moment khusi came to office arnav was so happy and he didnt leave chance to show her how much he love her and make her understand that she should accept him and trust him😳 while he was more happy when khusi didnt pulled back when arnav grabbed her close and kissed her😳...and he always amaze her that how much he knows her😳..when he kept her hand on his heart and said it beats like this whenever she is there made khusi soo much overwhelmed...😳
loved how he asked her out on date and called her sweetheart and also requested her to wear red dress...awwee..😳

and he took her to fare ...the place he knows she loved most😳...even in fare he made her eat her favorite enjoyed rides and when those girls ogling arnav made khusi insecure again he openly showed how much he is only for khusi and made her realise what she means to him.😳..and for khusi his small gestures bring immense happiness..as she has suffered alot and this genuine love and concern from arnav is making her feel out of world...😳

the most cute scene was when arnav told her about thier company success which has come after her coming in his life 😳and how much he wanted to hear congratulation from her 😊..and he made her say it again and again..awwee.😳.khusi was soo emotional as she realised how much her words means to him 😳..and he told her his real feelings about this company success and her in his life and thanked her for coming in his life..😳..most beautiful was when he gifted her red bangles which she didnt buy but liked alot in fair... and again thanked her and confessed his love to her...😳

i just hope arnav made his move and take khusi away before her evil mom can do something...khusi had already suffered soo much now its time for her to be happy😃
Edited by AR_EternalLove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved it.
What is that evil witch up to?😡😡😡😡🤢🤢🤢🤢
She is getting Shyam involved in her sick game.😡
I hope Arnav protects Khushi from all evil.
Arhi moments were all wonderful.
It was so beautiful how Arnav was confessing his love to Khushi.
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.😃

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