Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B

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joviha

@Joarshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#561

Beautifullu written...
and yeah i really waited for this for sure...but it blown me out...
payal had pushed akash to such an extened yo get angry on her...sometimes i felt akash is not concerned for arnav and he is busy with work...but he proved me wrong...he stood for his brother...and really payal should control her tongue...becaz akash is strong he can overcome her words in sometime...but arnav he is jst sensitive...he already feeling that he doesn't possess some aim...or passion...she had pushed him more deep down...good that aksh turned the mirror to her,to get better view of herself...she is doing this always...she thinks by this character of her she is straight forward or something...but she failed to think about the consequences...
really waiting for khushi's arrival...

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#562

My gosh..yesshh dis is wat i wanted yeshh..aakash is d nly man who cn tell payal..wat she is to d world..uski aukaad jya hai..m so happy..payal is so dominating n self centred..hsmeshs jo wih khe is right..baaki jan th babaji ka thullu leke baithe hsi na..pyshic bitch!!
M sooo happyyy..i love u aaksh u r d best..accha sabak sikaya payal chudail ko..hw dare she talked to arnav lyk she is d superior of all n baaki sab uske salve hai..badi aai advice dene walu..apne pass rkh..
N dis outburst of aaksh us nly thing which ill make sence to payal wat wrong sge had done in past!!
😊 😃 😆
Nt even payal parents n khushi cn bring sense to payal brain..which aaksh has done..hatts off to him!!

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1likeNoOther

@1likeNoOther

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#563

This story is amazing!!! I had heard about it a lot and finally now decided to check it out and ended up reading from chapter 1-21! All the characters are wonderful and perfectly flawed! Eagerly waiting for the rest of the story to unfold 😃 😃

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#564

TWIGS caught both the updates today.

Like Khushi I am in remote area with kind of outdated superslow laptop and superslower inet connection.

ch 20-

I am partial to this Arnav and of course I love him! There are many things in him which I myself identify with.

The talk at the dinner table was good and am happy that Akash noticed that something was wrong with Arnav and also identified the source.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#565

I do believe that Payal laid it straight with Arnav. I don't believe that Arnav will necessary appreciate his Bhai fighting his battles for him - he's not 2 years old..though he may be happy to have such explicit proof that his family does care for him.

People like Payal should handle taking it if they're going to dish it out. I don't completely agree with Akaash's suggestions that Payal doesn't see reality. Everyone perceives their own interpretation of reality...Payal's perception is no more faulty or correct that most others'. Akash definitely brought his own problems to the table when defending Arnav...what does that spell for his relationship with Payal? I do believe he loves her, but what now?

I cannot wait to hear what Arnav feels about this altercation. I sense he is disturbed, not only because Payal was being harsh, but she highlighted some things that have become so ingrained in Arnav it's not easy to change. He IS hurt by the Aman/Lavanya case and it was a blow to his self confidence. He feels purposeless and he has made Khushi his world...and Khushi is far away. All of that compounded together is obviously going to raise his heckles. But Arnav is wonderful and smart: he will figure out a way to find his happiness and feel whole again.

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#566

ch21

- Unlike some folks like Meera, I am sorry I cant offer balanced opinion. My reaction may seem juvenile..

but what the h... I am happy that somebody put Payal in her place, and so 👏 to Akash for showing her the mirror which she is so hellbent on showing to others!

Have seen folks who think they are witty and know it all but when same thing is directed towards them cant take it well!

I really dont know whether this strong reaction against Payal is something you anticipated as an author but clearly she has struck the wrong cord with everybody..

God save her patients from her barbs.. bechare ilaaz se pehle doctor sahiba ki juban se hi mar jayenge!

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#567

Twigs one things nagging me-

Why does Anji think that Khushi is selfish??

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#568

Payal getting looped by Akash was something I had not expected. A confrontation, yes, but the turn of events sure had me scrambling on my feet.

Even so, I do not and will not place blame on anyone of the two. Although I do feel like deliberating on Akash's thoughts of things having gone wrong suddenly when they seemed perfect in the near past. But both had their views behind acting the way they did. Besides, in this case Akash acted without knowing the content of the dialogue between Arnav and Payal and Payal reacted in her own way. So therein lies the crux of the problem.

But I liked the way Akash threw back Payal's words at her, reminded her of her ways and how wrong she is (I'm still a Payal crusader, make no presumptions about that). The resultant silence might be a prelude to what is to follow, and I find myself fidgeting over it.

In all this, I must say that Arnav needs to get on his feet soon. His current state (and this is not being said to cause him any affront) is already creating enough trouble. Buck up, Arnav!