IPKKND FF : 1963 ~ The Past again..[Segment 3 posted on Page 11]

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The Vision


Dressed in a beautiful red colored saree, the jewelry adding a charm, she looked beautiful like a bride. Standing on the terrace of the mansion, she was looking at the dark sky, hoping for the moon to be visible. Her big beautiful eyes, showed extreme excitement as the moon finally appeared out of the dark clouds. With a beautiful smile adorning her face, she began chanting a prayer, worshiping the moon.


Without turning around, she could feel her husband's presence. He was right behind her. Placing the pooja thal down, she held the sieve, and looked the sparkling moon through it. Closing her eyes, she turned around, in order to see her husband's face through the sieve, but before she could open her eyes, she felt a push. Horror-stricken, she opened her eyes, but it was too late now. Before hitting the ground, the last thing she saw, was her husband's dark figure, his face clouded by darkness. And then, darkness engulfed her.



"NNOOO..." she screamed. Shooting a glance at the alarm clock, she saw, that it was 3:03 A.M. in the morning, as usual! Pushing a had through her hair, she sighed, the same dream...again!


"Khushi..Khushi, sweetie open the door..!" She heard her sister's voice. She could sense the panic and concern in her voice.


"Khushi, bachha open the door na. Are you there? Something happened?" It was her brother-in-law.


Wiping the sweat off her face, Khushi opened the door and the very next moment she was enveloped in a bear hug, by her sister. Her sweet elder sister, Payal. While her understanding and sweet Aakaash Jiju, stood behind, caressing her hair.


"The dream again?" asked Aakaash.


"Hhhmmm..." hummed Khushi.


"That's it!" declared Payal. "You are coming with us." she said.


"But Di.." Khushi tried to protest.


"Listen Khushi, Payal is right. Please uderstand, now, after Mom and Dad's death, there is no one to take care of you. The best thing is that you come with us to London." Aakaash reasoned.


"But Jiju.." Khushi tried to argue, but was interrupted by Payal.


"No ifs and buts! You are coming with us and that's final! There are awesome Doctors, we..." Payal was interrupted by Khushi, who looked a little bit angry.


"Di..!! I am not sick, that I need to meet a doctor. Get this thing straight and simple, I am not sick, this is not a disease OK. I am perfectly fine."


"Yeah right!" exclaimed Payal sarcastically. "You can't sleep properly, you see this stupid, baseless and meaningless dream every damn night. You are afraid to touch things, fearing what vision they might hold for you. And you say that you are perfectly fine!" yelled Payal and left Khushi's room in anger, unintentionally dropping an anklet of hers.


Khushi looked at Aakaash helplessly, who just blinked his eyes in assurance and went behing Payal.

Khushi saw Payal's anklet and picked it up and was about to go and hand it to Payal, when her body felt numb, she felt darkness engulfing her and the only thing she saw was that a chandelier fell on Payal.


Coming out of the trance Khushi, fastly ran towards Payal, in the hall, the place where her vision led. She saw that Payal was still arguing with Aakaash and glancing upwards she saw that the chandelier could fall any moment. Khushi ran towards Payal, pushed her aside, and the both fell on the floor. Payal was about to ague but the very next moment the chandelier fell, but luckily, no one was hurt.


Aakaash and Payal looked horror-stricken while Khushi just heaved a sigh of relief. Aakaash helped both the ladies, to stand. He hugged both of them and kissed Payal's head.


Coming out of the hug, Payal and Aakaash stared at Khushi, as if asking that how she got to know about the chandelier. To which, Khushi answered, the answer the both feared;


"The vision. When I held your anklet, I saw, you getting hurt as the chandelier fell on you. I saw it!"




To be continued...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Segment 1...The Vision...Page 1

Segment 2...MahiSagar Mansion...Page 5

Segment 3...New Beginnings...Page 11

Segment 4...The Unknown...Coming Soon
Edited by dmegha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start dear..
Omg what a dream..
Akash n payal arguing with khushi to come with them..
Khushi denying it..
Akash n payal arguing over something..
Khushi in nick of time saves payal from falling chandeller..
Khushi n her visions..
Interesting..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting cant wait to read more
Continue soon please and thank u for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Like an astrologer or something..
She can see bad things or anythng gonna hpn in future.. Nice w8ng...
Edited by akh20 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg resss.

Megga i was thinking to give a arhi version of take me and now u wrote a new one 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice one please do continue n thx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love the start.
The concept seems interesting.
Khushi has future visions and she saved Payal in the right time.
Looking forward to the update.
Do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Grt start...
Waiting fr nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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incredible start... can't wait for the story to unfold itself.

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