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Posted: 12 years ago
I freaking love this story. Keep up the work <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..we get to see the true ASR here who is downright ruthless and a master manipulator...Terrific...Brilliantly written...and our dear khushi as the gutsy, stubborn city girl..u nailed it dear...Phenomenal story..Looking forward to read more...Thanks a lot for this lovely story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
So!
I am finally commenting whole 2 days later after reading this.. But that doesnt mean that the toxicity which I had imbibed as I had told you has ended. Goodness this is one of those few stories which I know ill read again and again. Thank you so much for writing it! :)

From the first chapter I was so hooked. Be it the idea of a lawyer, tribal man Arnav ( kya combination socha yaar! Main to pagal ho gayi visualize karke. 😆 ) or a strong and sweet Khushi. She really loves him. Putting up with all his shitty self. And this whatever is between them which hasnt been acknowledged or rather it is ' I wont let her go' right now.. It was such a pleasure to read it heading to where they are now.. I wanted to hug Khushi when she finally got a tad more angry at him. The man always got an upper hand. Would be something to see him getting overpowered by Khushi. I loved the story you weaved as a whole. Plan which had been to frame the designer. But who would have known that he'd come to be this into Khushi.
The stallion action scene was teriffic! I absolutely loved that one really!

Oh! This is one of the rare stories where i'd hug Shyam :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Feeling sad :(. Loved the. Story
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Posted: 12 years ago
nahinn this isnt happening
why us man why
how did this happen
sad we wont know what will happen next
would it be possible for you to such summarise the last chapter
if not well thats okay too
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sad to not know the ending, it was so intriguing and interesting, can you post it as an os or just summarize the ending?😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved the story,its such a shame!

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Posted: 12 years ago
😭 😭
Im going to miss this story!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Can u just put the ending... I need to know
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Posted: 12 years ago
It is a big shame to not have the ending to the story that intrigued us all!
Harsha I have seen alot of people write stuff that is inspired by novels, movies etc as far as I know inspiration is fine. I am positive you did not copy the words so I don't understand why would people have a problem with it. If anything you even mentioned the fact that you have taken inspiration from the novel in question!

Since you have the last part ready to go perhaps you can post it as an OS or the final installment since we all remember the story anyway! 😕

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