Arshi SS-'Adopted'. LINK TO THREAD-2 ADDED ON PG-1 30-11 - Page 43

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Posted: 12 years ago
I really cute story :) and thank u for the engl translation !
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a masterpiece

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It may seem as a up-down, love-betrayal kind of theme mixed with family and romance ,But its not so. Its too emotional as its centred around the journey of Khushi from being an orphan to being a wife of a cassanova.
i wud say that each update screams Khushi's pain in a subtle way.
My heart goes out for Khushi. one doesnt need to write elaborate dialogues .Just few scnes are sufficient enough to feel the pain of Khushi here.

When guilt dawns on arnav want him to realise that

1. He did background check on Khushi and he knew she was no nonsense girl. Ok with the excuse of going abroad he wanted to run away for a while.Fine. But he is not a guy who can control his hormones for so long. So surely slept with fancy faces in that one month...and wen he returned still he was stuck with those Lisa and all models for his libido . He shud feel ashamed that he knew khushi was no cheap women, and more importantly he knew how his jiju cheated on his sister. How painful is the truth of extra marital affair . How cud he cheat at her. so what even if there was no relationship between them. why dint he place himslef in place of shyam nd Khushi in place of anjali.? So want him to regret heavily on it. He cant place himslef in place of anjali thinking that being a men he wud be cheated by a middle class wife. so he hated marriage.
But he has to think from Khushi's perspective.

Khushi doesnt show her pain that doesnt mean she is unaffected.i think she is only trying to minimise her pain by diverting her mind to other options naming it as positivity. Obviously Khushi loves the raizadas and she has accepted her condition as a way to continue then to weep.But that is not natural happiness. so arnav has mistaken khushi that she is happy avoiding him.


2. Arnav must realise Khushi had been cold towards him just for his sake.Not to hamper his life, especially his colourful life to be precise. She was walking away leaving the lunch box , so that he can sit his food in peace without the presence of wife he has thrown away from his life. Khushi sacrifices at each point, even now But instead arnav thinks she is avoiding for her own reasons like hate for him.

most importantly
tHis anjali di shud do something for Khushi. Ahead i hope one day, with her and nani's some money they buy a flat for Khushi and get her into a job into another fashion house..and apologise to her for tying her with chotey. They shud assure her that staying away doesnt change her equations wit other raizadas.It will remain same .Just that she shud get rid of a useless husband .and anjali and nani shud say arnav that- we are sorry to you.Now we cant jeopardise Khushi's future more badly. so here are divorce papers. U both can separate.. and u r free to roam around with ur eye candies.

and later do unite our arshi beautifuuly😃



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Posted: 12 years ago
came across this story today...!
it is really wonderful...!
i can see how the life is changing of the "adopted" khushi kumari gupta...
and the marriage of arnav and khushi is surely evolving...!
loved it very much...!
their first lunch is very unique and cute... loved the way how they are behaving now..!
but i wonder why payal dont do anything to khushi...?
i know they are not blood sisters... but as far as i can know payal is a very good girl!
then why not she give khushi the love and affection she always needed?
and she doesnt pay attention to her lil say at all... ! even after marriage payal never considered to llok into the matter's of her lil sis's sad married life...this is really very intruguing...
and i would like you to turn this story into an FF dear...
and plz do pm me when ever you update the next part...!
thank you...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its amazin yaar...plz do PM me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ur ff is quite amazing and different. three months of their marriage and still they are strangers. loved it. please update soon and please pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
the name intrigued me ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great ff...live this khushi...who stands for herself!!

Read all chapters in one go.
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣 Bhai vah!!! Kya lunch date tha! You reminded me of her birthday yaar!!!! She didn't want to celebrate with him but he forced her... and now he forced her to have lunch with her!!!🤣 HDM!!!! Chupchaap baitho aur khaana khaao? Arnav, someone has to teach you how to sh-peak to your wifey, nah bwoy!!!!🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read all the parts and must say that it is a very interesting story...pls continue soon:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi there,
Came across your story in the list created by Shruti. So, thanks to Shruti 👍🏼.

I am loving this story and adding to my fav list. To be honest when I read the title, I thought may be its one of those stories where Khushi is going to be tortured by everybody in the world and cry creating ocean of tears. 😆 But you proved me totally wrong 👏.

I am loving this story more for Khushi, her feisty and independent personality. Though she was emotionally blackmailed by her family to marry Arnav. Even though Arnav refused to acknowledge her as his wife, she never these things pull her down and created her own world in her husand's house and found happiness is simple things.

Chapter 4 is my favorite, because of the way Khushi shred Arnav to pieces in front of his family and in the middle of his own house. Those lines by her gave me goosebumps. Loved it!!!

Looking forward to read this story.
Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 12 years ago

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