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vibhaaa

@vibhaaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Mind blowing update... It was really heart touching ... Very emotional... Speechless ... U re a brilliant n mind blowing writer...the way each word discribe Taani pain it's commendable ...pls update soon.

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Kya ho tum yr ? Soo purely u hv written... Updte is awesum infact m speechless
nything i sy for it is nt enough

only heavenly language cn describe it
thumbs up dear.
Superbb jab

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Omg...it was awsome moni...taani ka dard...litrally i was crying...thank god rey save her and now she will fight for herself...she fainted ...i think me jo soch rahi hu shayad vo sach hai...may be she is pregnant...chalo ab to ye next update me hi pata chalega...update soon.

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Monika Saxena

@monikasaxena05

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Really nice n emotional update

M speechless

U have described Taani's pain so well

Nd rey ...he is a gem

Loved it

Plz update soon n thanx for the pm

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Ayesha Hasan

@Ayesha_Hasan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Part 1

I am so so Proud of you after reading this..
Seriously..

I have no words to tell you what you have done..

This step of yours..

Truly Hats off to you!!

The way you described Taani's pain..

She must be going through so much pain..

And She didnt want to make her parents embarrassed..

And Rey!!

He is such a pure soul..

I just loved each and every word he told her..
I so agree with him..

Taani was also right..

This Society is just filled with Heartless people..

They have nothing but lust in them..

There is nothing called humanity in them..

Really loved this ..

And Taani!! I know Rey will save her..

Part 2

OMG!!! I again dont know what to say..

I was so scared reading the first part..
But thank God Rey saved her,...

And then the way he was holding her protectively in his arms..
And She too cried her heart out..

Why did Taani Faint??

Plz. Dont scare me..

The way you described each and every emotion..

And Rey!!

He was feeling the pain just like he himself is going through all of this..

Surely, he has fallen for her..

The way he made her realise that those 🤬 should be punished..

And thank God Taani realised..

Now just waiting to see what happens next..

Love you so so so much..

Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago

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deepkriti

@..Deepkriti..

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

I loved the last part, especially when taani decided to stand for herself.

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kriti094

@kriti094

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

I m really glad u choose such a bold topic to write a taarey ss

d first 2 chs r amazingly written

very emotional ss

try n updt soon

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Beautiful update ...

Awesome ...

Truly inspirational ...

Update soon...

PM me...

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chinudolly

@chinudolly

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: -Fam_TaaReY-
Awesome concept 👏
And we should stand up for ourselves
Otherwise this cruel world will never let us live our lives happily and the way we want to live !
And hats off to you 👏

aww thanks a lot dear , 😊😊

it means a lot 2 me , 😊😊

ya u r right we have 2 stand up 4 ourselves ...