Swaron SS: Rendezvous Fortune Ch3 Pg11 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
This one is different from your usual ones.. And the fact that you had started this one last year amuses me beyond extent.. I mean, I of course do such things.. But I thought no one except me takes such a long gap.. (All reasons justified.) Because there would be one, or many...
Anyways.. This one is a fresher and charmer.. I am liking the characters and their specific depictions.. It intrigues me to read more.. Though I don't get the time to.. but whenever I do.. I make a point to read and review..

And you must keep this updated.. At least once in a month or two..

Keep writing!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
prologue, character nd both d chapters all are amazing
what happen that now sharon is left all alone n her dad is also not with her now
loved it how you show past n present moment side by side

chap2
the way swayam n sharon intereacted was fantastic
Swayam ka fake proposal was so funnyyy
waiting to knw who is dis new guy
curious to know how things will shape up
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Amazing update :)
Loved it :)
Swayam ka drama !!!
That was awesome :)
Who the hell interrupted ??
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
awww wow ... swayam n sharon knows each other from college... 🥳

they even look like good friends ... 👍🏼

seems like sharon's dad is loosing his business ... 😳

arre waah... dono k liye trip bhi plan ho gya ... 😎

rofl ... wat is swayam upto ... fake proposal n attention... 🤣

he surely has an old crush on shar...

now who is this jerk... i hope swayam peet de isse 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Chapter 3

Swayam reached office next day. As expected Sharon hadn't come n taken a leave. The better it was as she wasn't in good condition last night when he dropped off her at her home.
Swayam didn't forced her to spill out anything if she trusts him she would say. At this stage when they have met after years n doesn't know a bit about each other.
He was all confused about that guy n watching Sharon's face he could understand there's more story than what he can think.
Hoping that their trip would be peaceful he started work.

Sharon woke up with red eyes all due to crying. His presence again in her life could create more problems. Does she have the right to freedom? Sharon doesn't want to go back to glamorous prison all over again.
She felt guilty for including Swayam in this chaos. He eyes spoke more than him expecting her to share her problems. But Sharon doesn't want to involve Swayam. With heavy interest she finished her packing for trip next day.

As soon as he disconnected the phone he was devastated. Nothing was in his favor. Another warning from Malhotra. He has lost all his power to them coz of one fault. But this old businessman knew how to make things al-right.

Next morning
The flight announcement made Swayam realise her absence. He tried attempts to call her but in vain. Dejected he proceeded towards flight only to see a figure running towards him. Recognizing Sharon he sighed in relief.
"I thought you would not able to make it. Why weren't not picking calls?" Swayam asked in one breath.
"Chill man, I was stuck in traffic n I couldn't hear ring as phone was in purse."
They checked in. Sharon was in dull mood all the while which irked Swayam.
"Coffee?" Swayam offered Sharon as Air-hostess serve it.
"I'll take later. I want to sleep." She closed her eyes but wasn't able to sleep. Swayam could see her fidgety. He thought of diverting her mind. He drank his half cup sprinkling some warm water from the jar besides on his wrist n leaned over the sleeping Sharon. Stopping just near her ear he shouted loudly.
Sharon was starled. Her ear was nearly deaf. She looked over Swayam to see him holding his hand with closed eyes tightly as if in pain. Sharon forgot her ear,"Swayam what happened?"
"Coffee got spilled on my hand." Swayam spoke with painful voice.
Sharon immediately took his hand n started blowing air on it.
Swayam wasn't expecting this. He looked at her she was really concerned. He regretted his acting.
"How's it feeling? Sharon asked looking at him. But Swayam was too zoned out to answer. He was staring at the intently.
They locked their eyes with each other. He put a strand of hair behind her ears with his free hand. Sharon felt her stomach doing somersaults. Swayam didn't withdraw his hand but kept his palm on her cheeks. They keep staring each other until their short moment was disturbed by Air-hostess.
"Any problem Sir?" Swayam realized his loud shouting has acquired attention.
Sharon was still holding his hand n they both were very close. She flinched suddenly leaving his hand.
"Umm nothing." Swayam told Air-hostess n she left.
He looked over Sharon to find her drowned in music with speakers in her ears. She seemed okay. Swayam relived as she was not in her sad mood. He closed his eyes n took a nap till flight reached destination.


Waiting for likes n comment.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Superb update sans...loved how u portray emotions of sway am and Sharon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
nice update
I so want to know Sharon's past
well for that I have to wait I knew
swayam is falling for her
update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
it was a nice update sans
but i m not happy wit it 🥺
i wanted a longer update
i really loved how swaron shared a moment in the flight
the scenes preceding this scene was very nice too
a very anxious swayam who is desperately waiting for
sharon n on seeing her his relief was very well penned
the scene in the begining was emotional n heart-touching
sharon has her own battle to fight for she has her own mystry
lets hope she is able to fight her inner self n connect wit swayam
n thr bond becomes stronger 😳
i want another longer update soon sans 🤔
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
lovely update dear..
bt itna small sa kyu?..

sharon was crying..why?
who is that guy?
wanna know..
thank God swayam was able to divert her mind...
nd llhh..mja aa gya..

update soon..
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
sweet update... swaron friendship... interesting...
waiting for ur next update... update soon... 😃

& thank u fr d pm... keep writing... 😊

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