Smitar's: Loving Khushi #3 Part 9(1A,1B) Pg 106 22/8

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#451

After reading three chapters all together i have just one thing to say... it is you, your writing, the magic u weave with ur words that makes a story feel totally new even though we have seen one version of it on our telly, loved and liked it so much and yet with every PM that Rashmi sends me i anticipate a better angle, a whole new world of Arnav and Khushi waiting for me.

(p.s. and i am yet to be disappointing)

Rashmi i am gonna send u my e-mail id so that u can send me mails for Smita's updates and any new story that she writes... plz don't forget to include me...plz plz plz dear.

Love (to both of u)

Swati

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leena

@aleena.1884

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

this was just wonderful.
he's always sooo gentle with her.
ohhh n i expected anger out of khushi but she cried when the shyam shashi truth came out. hope she show some to shyam when they come in front of each other. ek thappad to banta he yaar. 😛

awww the sequence where even lakshami went away from his room seeing no khushi was beautiful. poor lonely man. 😭
n their memories are always just blissful.
ohh she still think its all because of her arnavji. hope her thinking change at least a li'l bit.

another day complete. wonder what the new day brings for arshi.

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monsi08

@monsi08

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

M feeling so bad for khushi all over again n for arnav too ...
Thanks for touching upon shashi's story which our esteemed CVs royally forgot ... 😆

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akanksha84

@akanksha84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

As much as I understand Khushi tears, her untold emotions and unsure feelings, the reality is she has a choice, the choice she was happily pursuing prior the hell broke loose on terrace, besides Arnav is repenting I know he has made some grave mistakes, but then Khushi also did not confide in anyone expecting a snake who always throws venom... to grow saint over night!! I loved the update, but khushi needs to realize Anjali was the only saving grace in his life n when he saw danger there, temper got better of him! I usually would not forgive but Arnav past had an edge loved the update its awesome

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

awesome

so now lets see how will the arnie boy convince khushi

loved it

grt part

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#456

Only six days left!!
Arnav has to make up for his mistakes fast, to make Khushi trust him and his love.

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LittlePrincess8

@LittlePrincess8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

its so painful..for all of them...they all deserve to be happy..specially Khushi...when that little Girl will find her home..her own little world where she no needs to worry about leaving ...