ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 3 - COMPLETED - Page 26

Wow.. that was such an amazing update..

loved it...!!! !!
here arnav accepted her to be in his room...
n when she wasn't...made him angry...
w8ng for next!!!!

Lovely Update!!
Khushi is cnfuesd about her feelings..
But she knows that she wants to give a chance her relation with Arnav..
Her decision about staying in a separate room made Arnav mad 😉
But it's too early for Khushi to recover from a broken relationship..
So staying in a room with her husband was too much for her when she didn't even know that her husband love her unconditinally..
The way you write their first night jaha wo don ek dusreke sath to nehi par ek dusreke khawab main theye..
The VM is Awesome..
Love it very much..
Waiting for next..

That was a very good update. But did they have their first night? ? I am not sure. I mean they sre meant for each other but their feelings are not that strong yet...

Awesome update !!!!!
Loved it too much
It's really an cats dogs game now
Loved the way Khushi challenged him
And Arnav thinks that he is ready to loss every bet for her
Arnav love her too much and even didn't realize it
Khushi also didn't know about his feelings
so she is afraid to tell him the truth
Hope soon Khushi tell him the truth
Or he will search it by himself
The VM was really superb
Waiting for next update
Plz continue it soon

🤗omg deeps i wanted to comment first of all on the last part of update...my goodness really the first night of there hearts,wow...hats off for writing the last part ..must say its totally ur own way,so original ,so out of this world...i mean touching each other through feelings...uff deeps how can u write something so pure dear,so eternal,so mesmerising and charismatic...

So awesome update.
They bet too. Hope arnav losses it.

Great update
khushi s confused about their
own feelings

Originally posted by: lalarukh

🤗omg deeps i wanted to comment first of all on the last part of update...my goodness really the first night of there hearts,wow...hats off for writing the last part ..must say its totally ur own way,so original ,so out of this world...i mean touching each other through feelings...uff deeps how can u write something so pure dear,so eternal,so mesmerising and charismatic...

i think u have made it more beautiful than the physical one...honestly...its more connecting ,communicating ,more between souls than the two bodies...love u for giving a new way of expression between two lovers on there first night...vm is adding beauty to it :)

thanks for showing both side of story i mean wt arnav is thinking and wt khushi is thinking while they discussing abt the room all

poor arnav has to do alot in order to control himself...;)

loved that smile of arnav when he saw khushi doing mittals work:)

loved there deal language ...and that lagi shart...that was lol :)

u will say that i am mad...but yar ayse hee hoon mien...i cant stop myself from praising if i love something...that is exactly the case going with the update :)

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