Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 9)

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@Chocolate_barun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

loved this update
arnav and khushi both depend on each other and they have trusted each other with their life and the way rishabh described it looks like they are more than good friends now
so arnav is holding onto khushi and not letting her go this time waiting for the next one eagerly
update soon
thanks for pm

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check1511

@check1511

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#362

Loved the new twist of bade papa having hospitalized.

But i felt that rishab getting the feeling of arnav treating khushi differently ...was not a little rushed.

I think u could have given some detail incidences or scenarios, where even the reader can sense that rishab has got this feeling. U usually detail out but in this case i felt it was a little rushed.

Apart from this i liked the complete update.

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Sj236

@Sj236

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

Congrats on d new thread! :)
soo gud to c arshi relationship developing !

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#364

Awww, I love how you used the situation to strengthen the bond between Arnav and khushi, also how rishabh deduced Arnav's behavior around khushi.

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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#365

wow.. unexpected twist.. but I loved it.. and "So instead of letting-go, he had decided to hold-on. Henceforth."

This made my day.. :)

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sanjubanju

@sanjubanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

"His world was intact while he slept" .. I just loved this line

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#367

Beautiful update...

I'm so happy things are okay with them.. And that Bade Papa is okay..

And Rishab is out of the picture for now..

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smilystar

@smilystar

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#368

loved the update

rishab's plan 😆

very well written

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Khuarv

@Khuarv

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#369

Thanks for the pm. I couldn't comment on chapter 18.
Sorry abt that.Congratulations on starting thread nine
and this story reaches many more threads. It was simply a beautiful
and emotional update. Sometimes God jolts our lives
to makes us realize the priorities in life. This twist is
changing arnav's prespective as well as khushi's.
I am very glad Rishabh is noticing things abt khushi
and Arnav . Once again very well written.

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Angel1618

@Angel1618

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Posted: 12 years ago

#370

Loved it

I was sure something is going to happen as I read the last lines of your previous update but didn't thought that it will happen to Sumer. Anyway I was so so relieved when I read he is ok.I think that if something would had happen to him arnav would change again. So now rishabh has also understand arnav feeling. Waiting to know about khushi felling for Arnav. Do update soon